So I was in Church today when I was suddenly hit with a film story. It would be set in the future, a bleak dystopia. Basically the world is under complete jurisdiction of one global secular power and it's greatest opposition is the Vatican. The Vatican and the World Power are at a stalemate and posses great enough power to irreversibly damage the world if they get to aggressive with each other. While that is the overarching narrative of the world, the story will follow one Jesuit commander who is in charge of one sector of African colonies (yes slavery is back, history has repeated due to science this time). Driven with hate for humanity, instead of following orders from superiors and monitoring his section, he decides to take matters of humanity and its relation to divinity in his own hands. He decides to apostatize and use a period generator (a time machine hidden in the secular horde zone) to go back in time, prevent Christs crucifixion and instead take his place, so he can adopt God's power. Since he takes on the sins of the world on the golgotha tree, he becomes the new king earth, and gains messaih like powers. he warps himself back to present day and takes revenge on the oppressors of the world. This also means carnage on many of those he trusted most.
Does anyone find this interesting? All fallacies and plot holes are going to be accounted for, its all bullshit anyway.
Jace Walker
Too convoluted.
Matthew Mitchell
This is literally a plagarization of the story by the middle brother in brothers karamavoz
Anthony Russell
Also
>adopts God’s power
That isn’t how fake Jesus works
Andrew Rivera
It mixes a bit too much together. I don’t think having all those genres would work. It would most likely offended both Christians and Atheists, which would be interesting at the very least.
Isaac Hernandez
This is literally the third act of Ulysses
Ian Kelly
Reminder Jesus was a PoC, butthurt euros have been whitewashing every significant historical figure for centuries.
Brayden Hill
i swear on my life i never have read those books. im a black kid from zambia ffs (lived in detroit for 10 years as a child, dads a diplomat, love american films).
Joshua Murphy
Yes he was. He also was extremely right wing and not a socialist like libshits claim.
Christian Hughes
What church do you go to where any of this makes sense? You can't fight a war by feeding and healing people.
Nolan Bennett
i would refine it obviously, this was a 30 second idea
Mason Watson
This is literally Hal Incandezas story from Infinite Jest
Ethan Butler
Then why did you literally plagiarize Harry potter and the Chamber of Secrets?
Chase Nguyen
>It mixes a bit too much together. I don’t think having all those genres would work. can you explain that further, im not understanding
William Nguyen
oh bait season i see lol good one user
Cooper Peterson
This is literally how Camus' The Stranger ends
Hunter Powell
The other guys are baiting you or false flagging my post as bait, but this is a story from brothers karmavoz. You may not have read it, but some work you have read or watched plagiarized from it and you are plagiarizing from that work.
If I remember correctly it is a scene where the middle brother is telling a story to the younger brother in a bar. Other than the slavery it is pretty much exactly the same.
Lincoln Anderson
ok its coincidence and thats natural, didnt get influenced by anything but the bible, sci fi tech, and the cruelty of life, which im sure the middle brother was cognizant of too, this happens
Bentley Smith
what kind of meme is this
Logan Wilson
This is just the Book of the New Sun.
No, really, he does become Jesus. He becomes every Jesus to ever exist, in fact.
Lucas Moore
wtf this shit is literally in the Bible, Book of Revelation
John Flores
no its not
Jaxson Cook
yes it is
Logan Williams
This is the 4th story of the 8th day of the Decameron.
Matthew Powell
this is literally the sixth act of go dog go
Landon Rivera
Possibly the dumbest thing I've read all day
Aiden Martinez
Literally the story of Skyrim.
Henry Perez
how can such themes be dumb, im guessing youre not bright
Blake Moore
All good until he replaces christ. Doesn't make sense. Haysoos doesn't get his powers because he just died. He got them becauss he's the son of God. What is the theme here? Why even include jesus if you can just travel back in time and take a gun with you and become a god?
Anthony Roberts
because that doesnt give you power over matter, and space time is important in this film and how this chracter takes justice in his own hands, the fulfillment of the prophecy is crucial for christ to become the rightful king of hevaen and earth, also this desnt even matter things can be adjusted for the fantasy it is lol if you cant extrapolate themes from what has been revealed then you need help in insight
Nathan Rogers
Yeah, but why is that nigga wearing a diaper?
Michael Ross
to make it more endearing, i thought the priest should be a african descendant, more fuel to the personal vendetta