My friend told me to help with some writing he was doing.
I said that I would and he sent me the doc link. The story is around one thousand words long and depicts anarchists/communists/whatever attacking a limo, pulling a banker from it and then executing him.
It was cult-like. The story literally ends with "The revolution started that day."
Critique the shit out of it and destroy his confidence so he never writes again :)
Hunter Martinez
wtf report that phsyco
Ian Brown
Send link so we can read it fagoot
Ryder Clark
>anarchists/communists/whatever Which is it? Those are opposites.
Brandon Cook
Send it to them
Levi Wright
Upload it or gtfo
Carson Reyes
Post story
Thomas Parker
Give him some honest feedback?
Lucas Barnes
This
Landon Kelly
Report to your government and the news. >Communists spreading terrorist propaganda. Makes a great headline and might get that guy in trouble with the law because UK hates freedom.
Good idea. Yet he isn't a terrorist. He is a pasty white guy that had to ask what an AR15 was.
Done so.
Done so.
I can't read for shit.
Well, it is only creative writing. And we are nowhere near a city.
Logan Thompson
Was the banker Jewish?
Landon Myers
Plant spoons on him
Report him to the ministry of cutlery for not having a spoon license
Alexander Turner
A guy in your country got arrested for teaching his dog to do a nazi salute.
Michael Campbell
Call the 卐TRUMPENFÜHRER'S SS TEAM™卐 immediately.
Adrian White
>Commenting has been left on.
Oh user...
Jason Ward
This is some of the shittiest creative writing I've ever read. Seriously this reads like an edgy middle schooler wrote it. Your friend should just kill himself for writing this commie drivel.
I think he told me he was an ex-soldier or something.
Makes good sense, let me go do that.
Scotland, aye. Yeah... good point.
MERKEL TO THE RESCUE.
Oh God.
Huh. He is a bit of a wanker.
Real as real can be.
Nathaniel Baker
Well maybe someone should tell the antifa that
Adam Jones
whoever wrote this has no idea what the fuck sentence structure or grammar is.
Lucas Sanchez
The thing is, I don't know who/what they are.
I think he wrote this in an hour and didn't edit shit.
Zachary Sanders
Help your friend with his creative writing. It's not as though he's sent you a twenty page manifesto and a suicide note
Ian Rogers
believe it or not i can also tell this from that "writing":
1) writer is fat as fuck
2) writer is a lefty who has never used a gun and fetishises it, they also have no concept of what it means to take a human life
3) writer is borderline retarded or autistic or something; he is the center of his own world, resorts to violence too quickly, and is too much of a anti-social pussy to actually do anything he's written about.
4) writer is black
Samuel Howard
He has mentioned quite a few times he wants to be the next "Karl Marx".
Writer is pretty big. Writer is a lefty. Writer is British, so yeah, never used a gun. Also is retarded.