I'm writing what I hope to be a 600+page sprawling sci-fi epic, and I want it to be the most politically incorrect, offensive, triggering book possible
It's about the captain of earth's largest most powerful war ship, "The Distant" Raoul Denton's job is to go from planet to planet checking in on everyone and making sure that peace in the human controlled galaxy is still stable.
After earth took over the galaxy after repelling an invasion and salvaging their technology to take to the stars and dominate the galaxy, they found a bunch of livable uninhabited planets, and all the cultures of earth all went to their own planets, without resources or land to fight over, everyone gets along. And the rest of the galaxy benefits from human rule, we force the other races to give rights to their citizens and instill galaxy wide peace through the barrel of a gun
It starts with him visiting human controlled planets making sure they are all doing good but over the course of the story Raoul encounters an alien force that wants to overthrow Humanity's rule over the galaxy, sever races, all banded together, called "The Many"
The secret theme of the book is about multiculturalism being a scourge that wants to destroy humanity and Raoul is a Human Supremacist, (read: White supremacist) and would do anything to protect humanity from other races. The arc of the story is Raoul uniting all of humanity in one giant battle against the scourge of every other race trying to over throw them.
theres a muslim planet, a nazi planet, an all female planet, raoul goes around and fucks women everywhere like Kirk does, I'm here looking for ideas for planets he can visit
give me your most offensive ideas
Jackson Hernandez
>600 page >Epic
0/10. Please try harder.
James Thompson
Faggot.
Colton Brown
>Raoul >Denton How original Also this
Julian Cook
Planet faggot. He goes to planet faggot and turns it into a giant night club, he then renames the planet to 'pulse' and then thr captain gets drunk and crashes his giant biggest galaxy spaceship into a rock but everybody survives and then donald trump reveals his nipples and the captain buttons up trumps suit and says "whoopsie, your nippleys are outsie" and then a giant pigeon bigger than the captains space ship squaks louder than anything in the universe and that makes the captain go deff and then the captain shrinks the pigeon by 00.01% and he thinks thats good but its not a major difference nobody really sees but, captain is a mad man and he gets old and retires from old age then the peace is restored finally when the captain realises that controlling wpace is to big a job for one captain so h3 clon3s his biggest giantess sgip in the galaxy infinite times and now the universe has no room cause too many ships
Joseph Butler
>I'm here looking for ideas for planets he can visit mafia planet, american indian planet, cowboy planet, ancient rome planet
Xavier Lewis
Nonono start with something liberal-ish with strong female role models, brave trans, heroic saintly blacks etc. Then once it's a success make the follow up red pilled as fuck and kill of all the tumblr favourites.
Daniel Allen
I want to read your progress on this, where is your website?
Jaxon Green
Talk about planets that failed like the degenerate ones
Gavin Diaz
Planets with different governing systems you can critique/laud >communist >socialist >anarchist >theocratic of different stripes >pure democracy >republic >fascist etc Then breakdown by morals and mix match with government to create friction and conflict. You can have for example Neo Christian theocrats struggling against a marxist regime and the captain has to decide to take sides/fuck off while weighing the necessity of having the planet back the human efforts against the aliens. You could create interesting tension if you can create situations in which the captain must choose between pragmatism and his own desires for idealistic outcomes. There's plenty of grist for the mill really.
Matthew Cox
>The secret theme of the book is about multiculturalism being a scourge that wants to destroy humanity and Raoul is a Human Supremacist, (read: White supremacist) and would do anything to protect humanity from other races
You are retarded, I'm literally speechless in front of your severe mental retardation. You've chosen a bad genre if you wanted to go politically incorrect.
Dominic Perry
If you want to write a 600 page sprawling sci fi epic, then you need some time travel where someone goes back to help Hitler.
Obviously.
Then you can show how good life was in the High Castle scenario.
Failing that just have a race of aliens with enormous noses who always whine and bitch about how oppressed they are.
Alexander Garcia
>600 pages
C R I N G E
Connor Bell
Just use as many penis-in-vagina metaphors as you can. Feminists will bitch non-stop but won't be able to stop reading.
Jordan Phillips
>a Muslim Planet >Kek >an all female planet >Muh feminism >Muh men are all ahnimals
KYS, also, your story sounds like derivative shit
Chase Rodriguez
And don't forget to make it rapey.
Easton Roberts
If you are serious and and I hope you are, where can we get updates on your project? Do you have a blog? A website?
Brandon Gutierrez
>Raoul
Don't like it.
Henry Flores
Make it so the book starts off liberal and pollitically correct and then progress it outlining all the flaws with progressive democratic societies. Eventually have the characters rediscover the beauty and nature of natures true facism.
Anthony White
Ultra capitalist world where the many act like puppeteers, metaphor for jews
Josiah Rogers
add some slut shaming and anti alien mixing. Raoul should shave heads of women sucking the aliens horse cocks
Justin Reed
captain planet
Aiden Mitchell
Sounds fucking terrible.
The whole reason why Jews were able to brainwash millions was because they were SUBTLE, you dumb shit.
Not... >Let's have a planet of Nazis XD
If you want people to swallow the propaganda you're pushing, it needs to be subconscious and subliminal.
Cooper Gomez
>the most politically incorrect, offensive, triggering book possible That's cute. I like you. I may even keep you, later...
Lincoln Allen
The muslim planet has to get destroyed at some point.
Wyatt Nelson
Multiculturalism is inevitable. Humanity will be unified at some point in the future and it will be by an an alpha Conqueror who will proclaim all humans to be equal, except for him at the top. The human dominion will be composed of all humans in the galaxy and thus there can't be any discrimination based on race.
Thus the Human Galactic Empire will be born and instead of whitey vs nigger, it will be human vs alien. Funny how the conservative human supremacist of the future is an extremist version of liberals today with all the globalist/multiculturalism shit.
Thomas Davis
So have you read Starship Troopers or no? Basically the same thing. I'd read that and watch Legend of the Galactic Heroes. Then you can have fun writing the first ten pages and subsequently giving up.
Levi Martinez
>Raoul Denton's job is to go from planet to planet checking in on everyone
So no pretence whatsoever. No disease outbreak, no natural disaster, no treaty to negotiate, no nearby phenomena to study.
>hi I am Raoul >"what brings you here captain?" >just checkin' in
Great novel, put me down for preorder.
Jack Hernandez
>I'm here looking for ideas for planets he can visit
Hollowed out asteroid planet.
Kevin Myers
Planet Hollywood. A bunch of hypocritical self-serving assholes who's every word is a complete distortion of the truth. They are greedy and rude, and have a galaxy-wide pedophile ring that recruits from all the other planets. Everyone knows they're assholes but they have they have mind-control technology that works by making cocks and vaginas tingle.
Jayden Evans
This. Needs a Ted Turner world.
Joshua Lopez
Oh you have to have a pedo planet and a trans planet
Carter Brown
Dude, best of luck with that I'm doing something similar with fantasy.
Asher James
Have a Stronk Womyn heroine who is sassy and kick-ass and makin' her mark in a man's world.
Then the hero kidnaps her and rapes the crap out of her for 200 pages thereby turning her into a docile submissive tradwife.
Brody Garcia
Planet Michael Moore. A man so fat that he's his own planet floating in space. He communicates by blowing shit out if his own ass. He owns have the land in the nearest star system but is always going on about how the peasants need to revolt. He hopes they do so he can defeat them and eat the prisoners and brainwash the children.
Colton Turner
first day pre order.
Cameron Sanchez
that was done already by Stanisław Lem. It's called Solaris.
Matthew Wilson
Idea: The fleet decides to invade a world which seems like a threat to humanity due to its strategic position and relative intelligence of the natives. They draft men into the infantry to make sure every last alien on the planet is genocided properly. However they cannot fathom the way of thinking of the alien since it's too different from them. They are unpredictable and fight to the last breath. Earth loses. The end
Nathaniel Taylor
Nice viral, I'll buy your book (in spirit)
Jackson Ramirez
>Humans side with the communist planet >Communist planet turns out to be kikes
Alexander Wood
Pro tip: Read and understand Gulliver's travels first before you adapt it to space. Also read the Odyssey but make sure you have a good translation.
Landon Flores
have a black woman character be the cause of a huge engine malfunction and a bunch of people die
Jaxson Martin
Have Earth be a black planet where the niggers destroyed all the technology after everyone else left in fear.
Adrian Sullivan
And she's only on board because of an affirmative action program
William Moore
You're all being very mean to OP, at least he has a hobby besides wanking and torturing animals.
OP, don't be subtle. Self publish an e-book and you can write what you want.
eg: Hitler is resurrected by the dying white race in 8814AD, and leads a campaign of extermination against a degenerate empire of faggotry, personally kills hundreds of space muslims and virus bombs the planet of the Jews. Have a sub plot involving a beta uprising on Beta Uprizz'ingh.
Jonathan Taylor
it might work if it was done by someone with talent
Tyler Wright
Hey OP, have you been to reddit.com/r/hfy ? HFY> Humanity fuck yeah, a sub spinoff from i think it's vidya threads or whatever. will serve as good inspiration for you.
Wyatt Wood
>raoul >white supremacist
Nope
>600 page >epic
Nigger that better be per chapter
Carter Williams
How high are you to think that's the same as Solaris?
Luke Anderson
theres a new pc vidya game coming out Battlestar Galactic check it out lads
Henry Davis
The book is about the planet being a sentient being. I don't know what your shitty movie is about.
Jayden Cook
>Not naming his ship ss.niggerkiller.
>Not naming the captain adolf "kikeslayer" garrison
>Not having him fight for the white ethnoplanet on behalf of president moon man.
its like youre not even trying. subtley is for faggots.
Chase Russell
That would be an asteroid, not a planet
Camden Scott
Foundation also has a senient planet in it. Ever hear of Foundation?
Joshua Diaz
Liberals don't read.
Conservative science fiction is too small of a niche for a publisher to care.
You are wasting your time. But if you want it to be triggering, have a very punishing law forbidding companies from making grandiose claims on man-rated rockets. Call it Musk's Law and exposit that it resulted from SpaceX killing every crew it ever tried to send to space until they were shut down and musk was killed by a mob. FTL is not and cannot be invented, etc etc.
Owen Bennett
Yeah
Anthony Morris
YOU BETTER POST A LINK TO WHERE WE CAN BUY YOUR BOOK NIGGA
Jacob Price
this.
moon must be controlled by moon man who acts as the main characters boss
Noah Sanders
Sure you're not thinking of Nemesis? Or are you talking about the weird gaia planet the second foundation had?
Aaron Parker
Exactly, faggot.
Owen Gray
An American mulatto planet.
Asher Thomas
The most triggering one would be a country with a advanced white civilization who has a non interventionist policy for space africa and the africans are still in mud huts and serve as reality tv entertainment.
Oliver Lee
The polack seems to think that any use of the concept of a sentient planet is a violation of Polish literary trademarks or something. I'm trying to educate him that you can actually use similar concepts in different ways. It's a tough slog as he seems a bit dense.
Sebastian Lewis
>multiculturalism is bad >in the end all cultures unite to fight the bad guy anyway
Nolan Cooper
I said that I heard about it, not that I acknowledge that you're right. Also how come you make so many grammar mistakes, yet you have murrican flag? "senient"? "ever hear"? Come on, are you actually retarded?
Cameron Thomas
Don't waste your time and creative energy on a screed.
Jack Robinson
>Raoul Denton Spics in space wew lawd
Julian Thomas
Not at all. I just said that your concept isn't original in a playful way, that you took way too seriously. Also Solaris is a great book. I wholeheartedly recommend it.
Brody Morales
No concept is original.
The closest the polish got to an original idea was putting screen doors on their submarines.
Michael Johnson
>alien force that wants to overthrow Humanity's rule over the galaxy, sever races, all banded together, called "The Many"
Gurren Lagann pulled that off way better than what you are getting at.
Carter Brown
Gurren Lagann is meant to keep japanese children from killing themselves.
Nothing more.
Caleb Carter
Triggering? All you have to do is post about the facts that the unacknowledged special access programs have. Sci-fi is shit.
Adam Turner
Exquisite
Jason Ross
thanks leaf for not hiding your flag, so i can call you a fucking leaf
Camden Powell
Gas the xenos, space war now!
Henry Brooks
change his name goddamn trying to pronounce raoul in my head makes my aids tingle.
make a heterosexual, white male only planet. women exist only for slavery and while "vintage sex" still exists in the form of violent rape, the norm is for men to be happily married to their AI robowives
Charles Cox
There should be a planet like Kamino that is entirely populated with homosexuals. With no females to produce offspring, they have independently developed advanced cloning technology to create new generations of fags. They have a massive clone army full of asexuals (They were once fags, but were castrated so they wouldn't have gay orgies on the battlefield). The fags have strict laws on gay sex and other faggotry so that the planet doesn't fall to complete degeneracy, which makes the entire civilian population incredibly sexually frustrated. There is no law against dildos, but good, cheap dildos are near- impossible to make as most of the silicates on the planet are trapped under the deep ocean.
Raoul visits this planet in order to join forces with the fags, as their massive clone army would give humanity an edge in the imminent war. However, he is forced to leave the planet after the planet's representatives try to rape him in the ass. He eventually strikes a deal with the fags requesting the full power of their military in exchange for high-quality dildos.
Nathan Rogers
Bio-retributive surgery, but not my idea, Stephen A Donaldson
Samuel Diaz
This sounds like space fantasy and not science fiction.
Matthew Edwards
Robert Bevan already does it better in his fantasy series. For example, one of his title's is "Nagga, Please".
Brody Lopez
* The Gap series
Owen Taylor
If you want to be genuinely edgy try portray child pedos in a sympathetic light. Worked with Lolita.
Julian Hall
Subtlety? Allegory? Nigger if you want to make an edgy sci fi go all out, I have my own sci fi story I'm working on of intelligent super cyber bears on a distant dying former white colony who clone a white human, the first of his divine race in centuries, who heroes' journeys across the savage shitskin galaxy ethnic cleansing planets with secret resurrected super-weapons until he boss battles the capital of kikedom on planet zion (formerly earth)
Caleb Hughes
> 1 post by this ID
SAGE A G E
also, read "Ghost" by John Ringo. Imagine if Tom Clancy browsed Sup Forums and was 75% redpilled
Brayden Campbell
I think we should all work on writing right-wing sci fi stories, shitty or not, just to get the ball rolling on fueling the rise of natsocscifi.
Aiden Ramirez
You got to have a futurist commie planet where they have everything they need. They reached a point of technology where all their needs could be met by automation. Then they killed off 80% of the population they considered uncivilised. No money is required. Don't have to work but everyone is listless and feels something is missing. The IQ has fallen massively due to breeding and diversity programs concentrating only on external features. Genetically they are now very similar. The only people now having kids are the least capable of making sensible life choices. No point choosing productive partners any more, just choose the best looking one who doesn't care about contraception as he doesn't want anything to do with bringing up a child anyway. The collapse comes due to disease sweeping through the homogeneous population. Then no one is capable of repairing the technology they have after a few generations and they no longer advance. It's a utopia where no one has any idea they are about to die and it's no ones job to stop it. Perfect committee based relinquishment of responsibility on a planetary scale.
Juan Ross
I liked his Legend of the Aldenata series—especially the nazi tankers versus aliens entry.
Christian Allen
I can't think of anything other than in the future there are no niggers, Jews, or women, so everyone pretty much gets along. Maybe make it about conflict with a space (((trade federation))). Story resolves with them being eliminated systematically.
Liam Price
>Planet Kangz Retarded black supremacist planet, they take direct credit for every good thing that the humans ever did. Planet wide Detroit/Chicago levels of violence.
>Planet Wypipo Retarded white supremacist planet, literally non-whites on the entire planet. Was peaceful for a time, until arrogant Aryans decided that brunettes and gingers were inferior. Now brunettes and gingers are basically niggers. The Aryans on this planet also claim direct credit for everything good that the humans ever did. No crime because the Aryans have written the laws so that they are never at fault, brunettes and gingers who break the law are disciplined by their owners
>New Australia Penal colony on a harsh, barely hospitable planet. The worst of the worst prisoners are left to fend for themselves here. There are no guards, no contact with any other planet, and no chance of escape. Over many generations the inhabitants have degenerated into tribes that do nothing except rape and murder each other. Death cults are prevalent, each with their own bloodletting festivals featuring multitudes of human sacrifices
>Fagtopia The planet became deserted after one generation.
Matthew Martinez
*no non-whites on the entire planet.
Jackson Lewis
Hitting the bottle before 6pm. Impressive for a leaf.
Cameron Sullivan
Planet MGTOW only sausage and sex bots.
Ryder Scott
this
Julian Ortiz
Please tell me they send robot animals to fuck with the mud people.
Austin Phillips
Planet democrat, a hive planet of robots controlled by the bottled brain of hillary clinton, the premise being that it plays other planets off themselves, launching false flags planting seeds of distrust.
Eli King
Pizza Planet
It's where an army of John Podesta clones rape little boy anus to the somg crawling in my skin by linkin park in a giant ritual designed to weaponized the boys into secret "refugees" who really rape other boys on other planets with the end goal of galaxy wide child buttrape assimilation