WSJD - Red Sprite

New series from the author of Iron Knight, it's Red Sprite, a series that looks completely fucking played out.

I'm not interested in this at all. Let's get it over with.

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Yeah, I'm gonna give this one like three or four chapters cause this didn't immediately hook me.

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>literally the first page
>shitty forced title drop
wew

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You're trying way too hard to dislike this.

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Is bottom left a boy or a grill?

Iron Knight wasn't perfect, but at the least it felt so engaging. But this work really shows that the author has no idea what he's actually doing. He should become an assistant again and learn basic story telling.

I...THINK it's a boy.

I didn't catch a gender or sex while I was ripping it.

does it get any more generic than an orphanage at a church, abandoned or no?

I mean fuck, that's The Promised Neverland

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At least they're doing the exposition in a somewhat fun and engaging way. It's certainly better than just having some no-name narrator dump it for no reason.

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Sadly, it's a boy. Shame, would make for a cute girl.

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MOE AS FUCK

>caring about gender at this point

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so this time Jump has both the I have to save the world type and I only love one person but still so many girls fawn over me huh

Indeed, s/he is cute.

>takuan will be cancelled for this crap
It hurts to live.

>sprites are a kind of ghost
...In what mythos?

that's a kind of nice way of introducing some illness

oh my god they attacked the orphanage

I thought these poor children would enjoy peaceful days forever

oh nooooo

The composition is garbage, everything look so damn cramped.

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you should've seen Iron Knight; he's actually improved a ton

TERUMIIIIII

KISAMAAAAAA

Huh, wait, no, that wasn't it

>wheelchair girl
Pack it up guys, those are alwasy the best

Ragna! Don't let them take Jin or Saya!

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>introduce mentor character
>kill him in the same chapter
Am I supposed to feel anything?

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That's a cool idea, one I've used before with electric power users.

It's just badass, plain and simple.

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It's not exactly original though, I've seen many characters with electric powers use that exact trick to save themselves or someone else.

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Well yeah

it's easy to think up, but sure is cool

in my opinion

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>Mono not a girl
I'm already disappointed

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did he just make that tommy gun in a railgun?

Admittedly, kind of badass

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panel 2 qt

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>in the end The One Piece was trully in all of us

wow, he's really quite evil

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This is kinda shit. The worth reading a chapter every week but not quite invested kind of shit.

Will read for qt Mono and wheelchair-chan

pretty much

This is actually a great concept and setting, but the storytelling is so mediocre.

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If this goes on to be about sky adventurers, this might be kind of interesting but I get the feeling that won't be the focus

I didn't hate it. It does some cool things. Mono is cute, wheelchair has nice tits, that girl is cute

It's the kind of thing I'd have eaten up when I was 14. Now, it's at least not offensive. I'm also kinda curious about the admiral/captain angle. Ships are cool.

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It's a fun concept, for sure

this doesn't seem all that bad, I say give it a few chapters and see how it unfolds.

Author comments

This obviously isn't lasting long and I'm sure the mangaka knows it.
So he better keep up the fast pacing and atleast make it an interesting ride.

I liked it. I don't get what's so bad about the storytelling. It seemed okay to me. I think it has potential and the steampunk setting is interesting.

Not to shabby I guess.

damn he sounds pathetic after his first cancelled shit

>Black Clover
>Red Sprite
Yellow, Green and White when?

Pacing went sanic fast the moment Hitler with no mustache attacked, but man, I'd give my left nut if the manga made the airships more than just a big balloon that takes the main party to places and gave us full blown airship battles, buy I very much doubt it will do that.
I still like the setting though, you don't usually see it in Jump.
I'll keep reading and see where it goes.

Don't be so harsh user. He's trying his best ;_;

Takuan and Batsu's Daily Demon Diary It's kinda... shoddy, I suppose. Almost slapdash? I didn't feel repulsed, though. It looked a lot worse when I was ripping it.

I'm guessing he's trying to get to the action quickly after his first story was cancelled due to slow pacing. First chapter and mentor already died and the secret of Thundercore Humans was already revealed. That shit is something that normally should be revealed later on.

I think it's trying to dump too much information all at once. Maybe things will improve once we leave the setup behind.

I'm rooting for Shirai

>Iron Knight ended for this trash

The steampunk setting is fantastic and as I posted here, if this actually ends up being more of an adventure/fight against the odds kind of manga, I think it could be interesting but as it stands, it looks more like it's going to be kind of an action thing and this first chapter felt like he could have made it two or three.

Plus the pacing seemed indeed super fast to go from "normal life"->Oh shit nigga, invasion->Soylent green is people->You are the demons->REVOLUTION

what about sket dance's author's new work?

I can't rip it so I won't bother capping it

sorry to those who aren't allowed to read the free stuff

can you link it? Viz's webpage is poorly designed, can't even find it

If you don't see it chances are that you can't actually read it.

viz.com/shonenjump/chapters/astra-lost-in-space

here's the survey they love tucking away, by the by: viz.com/wsj-survey

>Shame, would make for a cute girl.
>glass half-full, glass half-empty

This shit is Black Clover tier bad.
It's the kind that it's not even bad in a way that makes it fun, just sad.

>Namedropping the title
WEW

Oh man, i completely forgot about Iron Knight, i remember reading the first chapters and thinking i would catch up with it at one point and i never did.

What a shame.

Eh, mite b cool.

>This shit is Black Clover tier bad.
Now that's not fair at all. This at least has a unique setting and SOYLENT GREEN IS PEOPLE tweest behind it. It has at least "something" that it can sort of call its own. BC is nothing.