>At what point does using the word "nigger" become artiscally unacceptable?
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
Could it be that /lit/ is redpilled?
Just when you thought /lit/ couldn't be redpilled
Colton Morris
Christopher Watson
Post your full novella, senpai.
Josiah Stewart
Almost forgot, here's the thread #
Joseph Diaz
sorry I'm phonefagging this shit
Hunter Morgan
Your standard of writing is abysmal famalam.
Gavin Williams
Care to do a full critique? I mean, I know this isn't /lit/, but fuck man... don't just blueball us here like that.
Gabriel Robinson
Not mine, the OP in the /lit/ thread's. Go and tell him his shit sucks. I just think it's hilarious
Jace Mitchell
I think he uses some shitty syntax at some points matched with oddly placed vocab words that definitely need a revision. Otherwise I think it's hilarious. Bump
Logan Edwards
This is some kino shit right here senpai. I like it.
Jayden Taylor
/lit/ literally has an average IQ of 150, of course we are redpilled
Nathan Bailey
>abysmal
Besides a few grammatical mistakes, the style is pretty poetic and well-done, the average person can't write like that.
Levi Myers
It’s really well done. This is the kind of art the world needs right now.
Isaiah Brooks
You had one fucking job.
Kayden Campbell
>Every nigger looked at me as if waiting for me to call them what they, as niggers, knew what I, as not a nigger, knew them to be.
this is fucking gold
Isaac Carter
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Brandon Flores
>Nearly 22% of the words in this book is just nigger
Do another draft and get that up to at least 35% then I will consider that board on the road to redpill.
Jaxson Cox
Fuck you this is cutting edge poetry.
Finally a writer who has captured the zeitgeist of this generation.
Charles Torres
nigger
Eli Hughes
Bro this is heavy handed as fuck, a little subtely goes a long way my dude
Blake Perez
>when the nigger was freed the world became the nigger's slave
this is fucking great
Brandon Walker
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Isaac Miller
saw the same shit on the /lit/ thread
Logan Taylor
This is hilarious and you have some solid concepts. You need to read more and learn to write better and I'll look forward to reading it in a few years.
Keep it up OP. You're not a faggot today.
Noah Carter
>'ger'
Economical, aggressive, brilliant.
Zachary Smith
I like it. It's like the fight club of the 2010s.
Levi Young
>Story written by Terry A. Davis
Jackson Gomez
It reminds of Philip k dick for some reason.
Jordan Powell
i would pay for this book nigger