Would you dare to defy her fists, Sup Forumsnons?
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Also some QC would be appreciated since some of the lines sound weird af.
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Noah Lopez
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Jeremiah Davis
this gonna be back on schedule or a one time thing?
thanks for the effort anyway user
Joseph Nelson
My finals are over so I'm quite free. However can't be sure about the schedule since it depends on translator user.
Luke Jenkins
Also I'm too lazy for now you will see a lot of dust left uncleaned. When I'm in the mood for it I will go back to clean them properly.
Caleb Hall
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Matthew Price
Yuusssss.
Robert Watson
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Dominic Johnson
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Jose Bennett
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Bentley Baker
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Angel Diaz
2nd to the last panel
>The previous adviser was my senpai when I in the dojo
Is it supposed to be 'when I was in'?
Brayden Rogers
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Cooper Johnson
TL user here. You want a schedule? I mean, you still have about 2 chapters and 2 extras to go.
James Baker
Thanks. will fix later.
William Martinez
You have the raws? I have some suggestions for rephrasing, but I'd like to make sure they fit within the original meaning.
Kevin Martinez
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David Martinez
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Not him, but you can look them up here.
Henry Howard
Ryder Barnes
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Ryan Reed
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Justin Morgan
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Levi Lopez
Maybe once per week or every two weeks till we catch up?
Anthony Young
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Christopher Green
3rd to the last panel.
>really respect Nii-chan for some reasons.
The 'reasons' should just be the singular 'reason'.
Easton Martinez
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Justin Torres
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Levi Barnes
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Jace Thompson
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Christian Brooks
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Brandon Lee
>No matter how I see it, you're lacking - In your head
"In your head" should probably be "in brains/smarts, that is."
Austin Rivera
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John Butler
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James Mitchell
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Levi Green
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Liam Ortiz
"we're already full up" might be better as "we don't need more."
"Damn you, pick your guy friends" might be better as "Damn it, pick your guy friends better." "I preferred the normal idiots you picked while you were in middle school."
William White
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Owen Miller
>"I preferred the normal idiots you picked while you were in middle school."
Is the 'you picked' here really necessary? Seems 'you had' fits here better, unless the raw says the same thing?
Jayden Taylor
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Alexander Brown
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Elijah Rogers
"you had" is fine, maybe "the normal idiots from middle school" is better.
It's all a matter of preference, really.
Ian Baker
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Eli Wright
Last panel
>My body's at it's limit.
Should be
>My body's at its limit.
Christian Stewart
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Joseph Clark
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Hunter Wood
Maybe change "Your house?" to "Where will you live?" just to make it more clear what the next line is referring to.
Aaron Roberts
Or, rather than 'house', use the word 'home' instead.
Adrian Butler
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Ryan Morgan
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Ryan Long
am I having deja vu or wasn't this chapter already translated
Cooper Peterson
Well that's it folks. Will go back and fix all the errors later.
Chase Phillips
Last panel
>Here really is a super scary person
Change that 'Here' to 'He'.
Just typesetted right now. TLer translated it before, but it's only now that the translations are actually on the pages.
Isaac Evans
>But could you stop her with your strength somehow, Nitta-san?
>Murder that insane monster!
This should be translated as:
"Nitta-san, could you use your power to stop"
"The brutality of that insane monster!"
Maybe play around with the wording to make it flow better across panels. The point is, they're not asking him to "murder" her, they're asking him to stop her from beating the shit out of them.
Andrew Lee
This page could be stitched better
That sounds fair to me.
Cooper Hughes
And thanks for looking over it. I'm guessing you also know Japanese?
Robert Jones
>My fists are completely undetectable by your dodges
This should be "I can't predict how you'll move from the way you dodge."
Chase Bennett
>Hina being proud of Nitta
there are hardly any sweet moments between them but the few out there are worth waiting for.
Blake Rodriguez
Like a real family
Jack Hernandez
Hina worst daughteru
Jose Sanchez
>The way you're raised will affect your moral values!!
He's referring to how weird it is that she wants him to hit her in the face, so a better translation would be "What screwed up your morals so badly?" or "What planet did you grow up on?" for a more liberal twist on things.
William Edwards
Mika look surprisingly like Hina in those bottom panels.
Ian Howard
Anzu best motheru
Adam Stewart
>You're unbearable
Should be "I'm no match for you."
>I found the person who I'm gonna follow for my whole life!!
Maybe "the rest of my life" instead of "my whole life"?
Jace Davis
All your corrections are making me feel incompotent. But that aside, thanks.
Easton Gutierrez
The absolute madman
Charles Wood
I stopped reading after the timeskip happened, did the art worsen or something?
William Adams
Hina is such a good girl, helping his dad and shit.
Who's losing to Anzu now?
Thomas Smith
This fucking guy
Jeremiah Wright
>This page could be stitched better
The distances are fine, you'd need to draw the missing art yourself. It's honestly better to just have that white spot and to try cleaning up the mess that's likely in the raws.