Tomo-chan

It's all over
for the next ten minutes

>That fourth panel blush

HAPPENING!

Kissu incoming.

Calling it
>Wait if I actually think about what Jun is doing I might make progress

They look so derpy in the last two panels.

But Tomo still looks cute

...

Has Jun always been wearing one of those baseball necklaces?

sudden kiss incoming

>that last panel
FUCK DAMMIT FUMITA MAKE IT HAPPEN

>inb4 we jump to the three stooges tomorrow

Don't jinx it!

Title: Another Try
Panel 1
Jun: The fireworks are gonna start soon. Let's go see them and head back.
Tomo: Y...yeah.
Panel 2
Tomo: (He really has been acting weird today...or even just recently in general.)
Panel 3
Tomo: (Could it be that he's finally become aware of me? If that's the case...)
Panel 4
Tomo: (Maybe now...I could actually get through to him.)

WE MADE IT BOYS

CONFIRMED, blowjob next chapter

Sounds like it's time for Misuzu and Carol to show up

Tomos gonna fuck it up isn't she?

She will be pussyblocked by the dyke and CC isnt she?

Who is going to confess first???

>that 4th panel

>Dat blush
>Dos eyes

Well she's a tomboy, so probably?

>Maybe now...I could actually get through to him.
I want to believe but I just know Misuzu and Carol are going to show up and fuck up everything

>Maybe now...I could actually get through to him

PLEASE DO NOT RUIN IT FUMITA, I SWEAR IF YOU FUCK UP THIS I...

Tomboys are for
Getting in fights with her
Playing sports with her
Watching kung-fu movies with her and trying to copy the moves
Teasing her and laughing when she gets mad and pouts
Letting her pin you so you can feel her body pressed against yours
Flipping her back over so that you can stare into each other's eyes
Protecting her from bullies even though you know she can handle herself
Walking home with her at sunset after a long day of running around and getting into trouble
Cheering her on and always supporting her, win or lose
Throwing her a victory barbeque where you make all her favorite foods
Massaging her legs, shoulders, and back
Holding her close and telling her you love her
Reassuring her that she is the most beautiful girl in the world when she gets jealous of the more feminine girls
Accepting all of her girlish sensibilities, no matter how much she hates you finding out about them
Patting her head
Getting caught in the rain during a cross country run and having to huddle together with her under an abandoned bus stop waiting for it to pass
Holding her hand in public
Making her try on cute dresses when you're out on a date even though you know she'll never buy one
Buying her sexy black lace lingerie, only for her to wear spats over them
Tracing your finger over the tanlines she got during the summer and feeling how warm her skin is
Having her jump into your arms and kiss you after spending time apart over vacation
Introducing her to your parents
Marriage
Carrying her over the threshold of your new home to start a life together while she punches you in the shoulder and pouts that she can walk just fine herself
Gently laying her down on the bed
Whispering into her ear how much she means to you while caressing her toned body
Spending an entire night making passionate love to each other
Raising a new generation of tomboys with
Loving unconditionally as you grow old together
These are the things that tomboys are for

Fireworks incoming!!! Everybody freak out!!!

>Maybe now...I could actually get through to him
Tomo will be the one trying to confess again.
Fuck no, this is bad.

I love you too bro!!

Go Tomo, go!

It's like you've never seen a "confession drowned out by fireworks" scene before.

>Jun, I lo--
>BANG BANG BANG
>Eh? What?
>N-nevermind...

colored when?

Get ready for the good old "Eh, nandatte?" during the fireworks.

>they both confess at the same time
>simultaneous "eh nandatte?"

I'm on it.

Wow!

>fireworks

You know he's going to fuck it up.

WAIT
Maybe Tomo knows that Jun won't be able to hear her over the fireworks, and she'll be prepared. She'll yell as loud as she can that she loves him and wants to be his girlfriend
in between fireworks and everyone can hear her

PREPARE FOR FAILURE

i can tell within the next few days i'm going to be insanely mad about how this turns out

EH NANDATTE?

Incoming

...

This is what everyone is expecting to happen.

Which is why I fully expect Fumita to come up with someone completely out of left field.

please for the love of god can we turn this from "making a tomboy blush" to "making my tomboy girlfriend blush"

>every time Jun says no fireworks drown him out
>he's married and has 2 kids before the night os over

SCRENNCAP THIS

DAKARA

WATASHI

COCKBLOCKING ALART

What.

>girl attempts to confess a second time
>at the fireworks
we've seen this before

>Maybe now...I could actually get through to him.
>fireworks

my heart cant take this shit

senpai and miszu confessing at the same time.

DAISUKI

She already tried that once and Jun was a fag about it
AISHITERU

I'm mostly doing these pages for fun, since i like typesetting. But holy shit. This was annoying to clean up, and it's clearly a a tad faulty, but fuck it, it's not like i'm trying to be professional. I think it's because it's a bunch of dots in making the lights in the back.

Here you go, my half assed try at it.

>i regret

That's not a terrible job, man

Wait for me, senpai, once my pen works again, I might post something better than last night if my Editor stops picking up a fight, that is

Were you the one outputting in jpg? You gonna try png and see if it yields better results?

I just noticed the letter A on "today" got eaten.

Hey, autists who complain about translations - I have a problem you might be able to solve.

So here are two translations from a certain panel in a certain chapter of a certain manga - the official translation on the left, the fan translation on the right, and the original dialogue from the raw on the bottom

The official translation has been established as almost always better than the fan translation - Mangastream's reputation isn't that great.

But that's why I'm curious. The mangastream/fan translation translates "眩しい光" as "a dazzling light", while the official translation translates "眩しい光" as a "bright and shining light."

From all I've seen, "dazzling" is the most on point way to convey "眩しい", so why does the official translation go for "bright and shining?"

The inclusion of "bright" I'm interested in in particular - what's going on with the official translation to make it "bright and shining" instead of "dazzling?"

Thanks user.
>Tomo is gonna confess again isn't she. Well, damn it. I don't wanna read the first page all over again.

It's pretty good for a half assed try

I did for my QC one. I guess it looks slightly better.

Refer to now.

I just added the missing leg on the letter A.

>She'll confess
>F I R E W O R K S
>"Huh?"
>"N-never mind, let's go home"
>Tomo goes ahead
>last panel, suddenly Jun
>"There's no turning back now, is there?"

But not the one you're thinking of.

>Tomo about to confess

...

Patched her shoulder for you.

mizsu is shit
so therefore carol has shit taste
carol a shit

NO REPEAT CONFESSION.
I will drop this shit if it goes that direction. It's time for Jun to have a taste of the awkwardness.

Pretty sure tomo wears the same hipster sports necklace too. It's mentioned in one of the extras.

THERE WON'T BE ANY FIREWORKS!

Thanks. Like i said i just kinda started doing these pages for fun like a week ago, so i'm not trying to be super serious about it. But i am trying to improve on cleaning.

No worries. I just do edits, no idea how to clean.

IF THERE EVER WAS A TIME

IF THERE EVER WAS A CHANCE

TO UNDO THE THINGS I'VE DONE AND WASH THESE BLOODSTAINS FROM MY HANDS

IT HAS PASSED AND BEEN FORGOTTEN

THESE ARE THE PATHS THAT WE MUST TAKE

BECAUSE YOU AND I ARE WOMEN

AND WE CAN BEND AND WE CAN BREAK

...

They really should've given Chiyo blue ribbons.

Those don't look right on her

When will based Tanabe come to destroy the evil wenches?

He won't show up.

...

...

Who does Tomo go to when she needs a real man?

>Carol Hatches Her Plot
To completely fuck up any chance of Tomo and Jun getting together during the festival.

>her fangs disappear along with the rest of her tomboy outfit
This is why you don't make tomboys act girly.

So this page is pretty much setting up a failure as these scenarios never work as intended. Either Carol and Misuzu or some stupid shit like Tanabe interrupts or she chickens out.

Or Jun will just run away after hearing her confession again. Something bad will happen.

>he thinks fangs = tomboy
it's a japanese beauty standard since they think crooked teeth are cute

Guys, i know this may be crazy, but listen to me here.

What if, she goes for it and it works and they start dating.

Yes user, that's the point.

It's premeditated on Carol's part, my amigo. Besides the obvious bit where Carol drags Misuzu along to the festival, there's more "subtle" stuff like Carol wearing the Onimask around her.

What if it happens in reverse?
What if
>Jun confesses
>Tomo gets overflustered and
>"I love you too, bro"

That's crazy talk. You've clearly lost your mind.

And I'm back

That would be gross. You shouldn't date your bros.

Tomo will confess again, Jun actually gets what she means, manga ends before we hear his response.

I would quit lurking Sup Forums

It's 100% sure the blunder will come from Tomo
Jun seem to man up at real high pace
She'll fuck up

nice