Hinamatsuri

Chapter 64. Needs proofreading.

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Is this like father x daughter incest?

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"But I have to help prevent this family from falling apart" is more grammatically correct.

Alright gimme a minute

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My sides. She's gonna have to punish him at work.

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>second panel
Might sound better without "today".

>third, first bubble
"Have plans"

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pan 2: You had to tell me in advance if it was today.
pan 6 bub 2: But your dad came home and the three of us are finally together

pan 4 bub 1: Like going out for some lessons.

pan 4: That was the first time in my life I got so pampered.
pan 5 bub 1: I was nervous before because I'm just an old housewife.

pan 1 bub 2: I feel kinda bad since I got a legendary item as a present.
pan 3: Maybe she's just jealous of me because I'm a young woman.

And then there's THIS bitch.

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This fucking page.

Does Hitomi's mom know the truth about her?

pan 6: Everything's a mess.

pan 1 bub 2: I was the one doing the best I could and I was always all by myself!
pan 5 side: Heheh

pan 4 bub 1 part 2: He doesn't tell me anything.
pan 5: Everyone online is treating me so nicely.

pan 6 bub 1: I made your mom work so hard all by herself because of my constant business trips overseas.
pan 6 bub 2: So it's really hard to talk to her about this seriously...

pan 1 bub 2: But that's not the issue here...

pan 3 side: That's what we were talking about this morning!!

[I think the font should be a little bigger in panel 1]
pan 1 side 2: If you screw this up, this could end in a divorce...
pan 4 side: *Oolong tea
pan 5 bub 2: Do you talk about serious issues with your wife?

Yes. She went to her party in her hotel room or whatever that was after all and met some of her bosses.

pan 1 bub 2: I can't say them because I get embarrassed, and that's all.

pan 1 bub 2: They won't just follow your shadow in silence.
pan 5 bub 1 part 2: So what is she suggesting here?

pan 8 bub 1: We're going on a trip tomorrow.

pan 3 bub 1: Hitomi, you're coming too.
pan 5: Thinking about it, I've never spent any time with my family.
pan 7: [You're alright with side 2 not being on the left side?]

pan 6: But I have to help prevent this family from falling apart...

pan 5: This place is...

pan 2: It's already been 16 years since then.

pan 1 bub 2: I forgot about what happened in the past.

pan 4 bub 1: Oh my, a parent and his child... that's cutting it way too close.

pan 3 bub 2: But it's still way too early for you guys to go through with this.
pan 4: But as for this hostess,
pan 5 side 2: You can only be so inconsiderate.

pan 5 bub 1: You actually like girls with big boobs and asses, don't you!

pan 3 bub 1: That day, I couldn't tell you what was important,
pan 3 bub 2: And you sat there silently in pain.

pans 1-2: [I feel like changing it to bad Japanese English since it was originally like that, but this is okay too I guess. Lemme know if you just wanna stick with that]

pan 4 bub 2: Wow, you deserted your wife in the blink of an eye.

pan 1 side 2: Now you can have your revenge against that fucking rude waitress!!

And this guy's suggestions for pan 3 bub 1 are fine too

Still there?

Who are you asking that to?

The typesetter

Yes, I'm still here. Why?

Oh no, just wondering if you're still working on it.

>Hitomi chapter

Oh yisss

Wait, I can't remember. What chapter she got back to live with her shitty family?

My sides have achieved orbit with the power of his incompetence.

Hitomi is a true boss, she still working even on a trip. Soon she will take over Japan

I love Hina so much.

Still has brown hair for me.

Oh it will continue, he can try to say something next chapter.

Hilarious as always, i dont think Hinamatsuri ever dissapointed me.

Great chapter. Thanks for the dump OP.

No, no. The series will be continued, not this particular story. That message is on every chapter.