Like I promised, I finished Unmarked in a week. However, this is first-pass TL from the CN stuff; I still need to check back against the JP. There are several minor contradictions that I haven't sorted out yet, and some of the place names like Kitayado/Nakayado and so on are a bit off. However, those will be checked, though feel free to point out any errors you find. Once everything is done, I'll move the Unmarked folder over and post a link.
Unfortunately Pastebin has a limit of 10 guest pastes in 24 hours so I could not include the afterword. I did that too, however, and it will be in the final folder.
Unmarked seems to be Ripple's story more than Snow White's, IMO. She fits the role of the everyman learning about being an MG, she goes through character development throughout the story, handles most of the important fights, and Snow White is only relevant because she's the most famous of the N-City MGs.
Noah Evans
I don't.
Adrian Price
I feel neutral to her, but I like Stuntchika.
Christian King
A life without knowing the friendship of Puk Puck is a sad life indeed.
Sebastian Sullivan
It's Stanczyka.
Blake Flores
Everyday I'm Shufflin.
Brandon Nguyen
Yeah SW is the series's protagonist, not the protagonist of each book. Roughly:
Interestingly Deluge is the same as SW, becoming a series protagonist through the making of the JAQ triology.
Brody Miller
Deluge seems to be set up to be the next Pfle, the Queen from a Princess.
Owen Miller
I don't see Cherry as the protag, Filuru/Styler Mimi is more of the protag
Connor Campbell
You're right, I brainfarted. Filuru is indeed Jokers' protag.
Lincoln Gomez
It's always been Ripple's story in my mind. Anime should've realized that. I didn't feel connected to Ripple at all in the Anime but I did in the novel
Levi Peterson
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Adam Watson
Leave Deluge to me.
Dominic Bailey
Dat fickin' dyke wos lackee dat she wos off'd by een midget engel beeforr ai got her.
Levi Richardson
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Logan Clark
Nana won't like this.
David White
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Ryder Roberts
>top girl is dead >people still watch this trash
Christian Sanders
>Chinkanon's: "She swung over a valley on a vine. She was getting closer. There were several notes of tension in her heartbeat. Given the effective time of the Vitality Medicine, she would have to make an attack now. Dropping her pretense, Clamberry stepped into a patch of vegetation and stabbed her right hand into a rock without any warning. After impaling the human-sized rock with her right hand, she raised it and smashed it heavily onto the ground."
>Plat's Suddenly, a large rock began flying in the air towards Clamberry. Fast. Durable. This wasn’t a normal rock. The rock kept hitting her. It was fast. The arm, then the back, then it flew over to her shoulder. Clamberry focused on the movements, her reflexes are far too fast for the rock to anticipate, and calmly, she aimed her fist at the incoming rock."
And I used to think that Lerche changed this scene.
Anthony Richardson
Thank you for the hair work user.
Brody Baker
I had a dream the translators and I went ghostbusting except I looked like myself and they looked like Bluebell and Marika.
Tyler Fisher
>the Queen from a Princess. >Deluge is SwimSwim 2.0 Makes sense, considering she murders best girls (Shufflins).
Mason Cruz
>Osk mass produces waifus Why do people hate Grim Heart?
Jaxson Edwards
>Next Arc everyone loves Deluge again >inb4 it's her turn to get brainwashed
Hey, Ripple and Snow got their turn. It's Deluge's turn now
Benjamin Wright
I want to know more about Joker.
Noah Peterson
>Deluge gets her arm chopped off >gets SwimSwim's arm attached to her, causing her to become Swimming Deluge
Justin Ward
Fuck off Delude, stop samefagging. You aren't a protag and you never will.
Austin Diaz
Can't wait to see Deluge pay for committing genocide. Truly LoM's Hitler.
Daniel Morris
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Christopher Parker
>Unmarked re-TL is done
FUCK YES WAITING FOR THE EPUB
REMINDER THAT SWIM SWIM DID NOTHING WRONG REMINDER THAT NANA IS A MANIPULATIVE DAMSEL-IN-DISTRESS FETISHIST REMINDER THAT SNOW WHITE IS A SHIT FRIEND REMINDER THAT LA PUCELLE IS A SELFISH CUNT WHO DIDN'T CARE ABOUT THE REAL SNOW WHITE AND ONLY WANTS HER SO HE CAN KEEP RESCUING HER TO FEEL BETTER ABOUT HIMSELF REMINDER THAT MARY WAS A GOOD HOUSEWIFE WHO GOT HER LIFE RUINED BY A WORKAHOLIC HUSBAND, A BRATTY KID AND EVERYONE ELSE NOT GIVING HER THE RESPECT SHE DESERVED
Brayden Rodriguez
Nobody cares about your garbage headcanon that you derived from two out of context scenes in a drama CD
Kayden Carter
>You are fake this is the real SW reeeeeee >Oh wait you are actually the real one my bad >By the way I'm not going with you but with the fake one instead
Totally headcannon. Why can't you accept the truth Boipucellefag?
Parker Baker
>REMINDER THAT SWIM SWIM DID NOTHING WRONG That much at least is true.
Charles Campbell
All of this has been addressed in previous threads, going through this dumb argument for the umpteenth time is a chore.
Ryder Anderson
More you like you have zero argument towards my statement.
Ian Davis
If you don't even remember the last few threads where we've went over this what's the point of going over this yet again?
There's also been at least two times where it ends with you going "w-well la pucelle's a faggot and I'm entitled to my opinion so there" and now here we are again.
Here's your last (You). I'll be waiting for Promise of a Magical Girl and Magical Girls vs Shark.
Charles Sanchez
What's wrong with Souta? Why did he design such a whorish looking character? Why couldn't he have designed a classy lady instead?
Tyler Young
Because a teenage boy who makes a female character in a video game isn't looking for a classy lady. Must have been especially awkward becoming someone you probably jacked off to.
Justin Fisher
R-R-R-Remix!
Kevin Cruz
>episode 2
I knew this was coming from a mile away, but it still hurt pretty bad.
At least I should be good for the rest of the anime, since I can't imagine caring about any of the other girls as much as I did about Nemu
Samuel Peterson
>since I can't imagine caring about any of the other girls as much as I did about Nemu Oh boy, see you soon.
Liam Williams
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Brayden Jackson
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Thomas Murphy
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Colton Sanders
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Levi Hill
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Alexander Gonzalez
Pechicken!
Mason Flores
Lazuline is best restart, but Clantail + Pechika are the cutest couple.
Mason Bailey
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Lincoln Kelly
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Charles Jenkins
You. I like you.
Hunter Morgan
They're cute but Pechka is a hetfag so I don't consider them a couple. LazBell thus still the cutest. Unless Clantail planned to make Pechka fall for her with a deer dick.
Luis Lopez
You mean buck cock
Carson Harris
What would you feel if I change Rain Pou to Rain Pow?
And Pechika to Pechka, as an user had been mentioning.
Alexander Green
Explain further.
Daniel Carter
That makes sense. Also I bet Clantail will use HYENA CLIT to thank Pechika for the tasty food.
I think what I liked best about LazBell was when she was on the verge of tears after Melville walked out and Laz just said she'd stick with her.
And on a more tragic note, there's Miyo/Rio... poor girls. Right until the end they were still fighting for each other's (and Pechika's) lives.
Cooper Watson
ペチカ is Pechka, the Russian oven. It's a pun that would be lost if you romanizing it as a simple "Pechika"
Rain Pow (レイン・ポゥ) is a pun from Rainbow (レインボゥ). It didn't occur to me all this time because it's more common for nips to use レインボー , レインボウ, or even レーンボー. My bad.
Xavier Perry
Not that user, but Rain Pow references her rainbow powers more, while sounding the same in JP.
Personally I think of a bad 60s sound effect when I see Pow, but I can get used to it.
Pechika should stay as Pechika, though. It's a reference to Chika's real name just as Nokko-chan refers to Nokko-chan's nickname when she was young.
Ryan Lee
Pechka can still be understood as being derived from Chika, whereas Pechika will make the oven pun completely lost.
Eli Walker
Well, someone who knew it was derived from Pechka would probably understand the pun with Pechika (Chika, the oven). I feel that directly using Pechka detracts a bit from that.
Still, it's not like the meaning's completely lost and the pun is obscure enough that it could use more highlighting, so...
Lucas Perry
I don't mine one way or another.
Logan Brown
Didn't Pechika only like that boy because he reminded her of a girl she liked and forgot about until her memories were restored?
Thomas Wilson
Desert warfare model.
Bentley Perez
I say keep Rain Pou as is since that's more consistent with the katakana and the pun in her name would get lost in translation.
Easton Cox
Slav model.
Ryder Miller
Jungle warfare model
Justin Edwards
She still liked him even after remembering, and her relationship with the other girl didn't seem yuri.
Luis Rogers
Where is the "A shit" model? Because Shufflin a shit.
Ethan Stewart
I love you Deluge.
Jordan Hughes
Friendly reminder that Deluge is nothing but a discount Snow-White.
Jaxon Butler
True love.
Jack Martin
>WAITING FOR THE EPUB This please, I would do it myself if I'm not computer retarded.
John Gomez
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Jordan Gray
I wonder who could be behind this post?
Jaxson Flores
Rain Pow is consistent with the katakana. As stated, rainbow in katakana is レインボゥ. The pun is a simple change from ボ to ポ much like geek to Keek (キ to ギ).
Colton Thompson
I ship this.
Ryan Mitchell
>175cm tall at 17 while being Japanese Why is Kano such a genetic freak?
When I first read Restart I thought that Detec was alright, I didn't hate her, she just kinda existed. Now that I've been rereading Restart, she's really grown on me.
Josiah Adams
Pechika's never been hinted to be bi before or after getting her memories back.
Oliver Gray
What do you regard as "hint" to a character's sexuality, when you promptly dismissed her possible crush on the old friend?
Had the old friend been a guy, anyone who read "Chika came to like Ninomiya only because he reminded her of another guy who died" then nobody would have questioned it had been a crush.
Evan Bell
>Dislike a character on the first read >Appreciate them a ton more and notice all the little details about them you missed at first and now realize how much important she is than you thought she was on the second read
What's her name anons?
James Cruz
Pechika has never been shown to be romantically interested in girls at any point throughout the story. You say I'm shutting down any possibility of a crush, but at the same time you seem to be trying to imply one exists when nothing seems to imply that.
Holy shit, where shall I start. -Everyone in Limited -Melville
Cameron Sullivan
Limited is kinda cheating considering almost everyone was practically a different character.
