Yuragi Yuuna 67

Curse you catnaps

67: The mad chocolate concerto 1
[Left] Handmade chocolate says how you honestly feel...

[right] A meeting before the (Valentines) fight

"Chocolate..."
"For valentine's day?"

"Yup!"

"Hibari thinks that Yuuna-chan and Chisaki-chan"
"Are gonna do the best they can to go for handmade chocolate!"
"Hibari also wanted to try... handmade chocolates"
"But even if she tried, she's sure she can't beat Chisaki-chan..."

hibari

"So I want some kinda plan to...!"
"Are these three going at it again..."

"I understand the situation, but... why're you talking to me?"
"Nakai-san is much more knowledgeable about cookig"
"And if you want a plan, there's Urara..."
"Nakai-san said she doesn't know much about western sweets"
"And I already talked to Urara-chan..."
"So a way to beat Miyazaki-san and Yuuna-chan, huh"

"There's a buncha ways to do it!"
"Really!?"

Yep, this confirms this is going to be a 2 chapter story at least.

i hope we get some karura too

"You could just steal the enemy's chocolate!"
"That's just terrible!!"

"Or you could send legendarily bad chocolate under the enemy's name"
"Or confine them right on the day..."

"Wait wait!!"
"Does Hibari have to play dirty so she can win!?"
"She can only ask you now, Sagiri-can...!"
Ugh uuugh...
"Oh my god..."

"Valentine's day..."
"So... the custom of giving the guy you like chocolate"
"This is something way beyond what I can do"

"I mean, I don't even have someone to give choco..."
"!?"

>Curse you catnaps

"Wh-why did Fuyuzora Kogarashi's face just pop up now!?"
"D-d-do something about it, Ameno Sagiri!!"

"Sagiri-chan, are you gonna give some chocolate to Kogarashi-kun?"
"Wha...!?"

"Wh-wh-why do I have to give that an ch-chocolate...!?"
"Well, we all live in the Yuragi inn..."
"Just give him some duty chocolate, right?"
"Duty...?"

"O-oohh, duty... chocolate!"
"I see!?"
"This fluster...!"

"So does Sagiri-chan also like...?"
"...yeah!"
"It's dishonorable to do nothing despite seeing each other's faces everyday"
"I should prepare some duty chocolate, at least"

The next day, after school

"Woooow!"
"There are so many varieties, and it's so hard to choose!"
"Ah, maybe we can buy some for ourselves"

"Hmm..."
"Every one of them is too cute, so it doesn't suit me..."

>Yaya only gives him a fish
Dammit mangaka, why even bother?

"Hmmm... here!"
"Wait, this one doesn't feel like a winner..."
"Is this really worth mulling about...?"

"Well, Hibari's giving this to Kogarashi-kun"
"She can't afford to pick things randomly!"

"Handmade chocolate... comes in so many shapes and sizes!"

"That shape..."

"...got it!"
"Hibari really will make some handmade chocolate!"

"Hm... handmade"
"Then I can give a piece of advice"
"What's up, Sagiri-chan?"

The Author has made it clear she is his pet.

"I made some curry rice before... but it was a damned as a failure"
"It's safer to avoid using the Ameno family's natural remedies...!"
"You don't need to say that!!"

"There's no way we're gonna use those!"
"Did you just say... those!"
"And you still call yourself a member of the Ameno family!?"
"But like, those are bitter and sour, and only Obaba-sama likes taking them, right!?"
"You're just weird, Sagiri-chan!"
"Wha...!?"

"...heh, fine then"
"Then I'll just redeem myself"

"That I can not only use the Ameno family natural remedies..."
"But also make some delicious chocolate!!"
"Why're you going the hard way about this!?"

>[right] A meeting before the (Valentines) fight
>"Chocolate..."
>"For Valentine's Day?"

>"Yup!"

>"Hibari thinks that Yuuna-chan and Chisaki-chan"
>"Are gonna do the best they can to go for handmade chocolate!"
"Are gonna do they best they can and go for handmade chocolate!"

>"Hibari also wanted to try... handmade chocolates."
>"But even if she tried, she's sure she can't beat Chisaki-chan..."

>"So I want some kinda plan to...!"
>"Are these three going at it again..."
"Those three are going to go at it again..."

>"I understand the situation, but... why're you talking to me?"
>"Nakai-san is much more knowledgeable about cooking."
>"And if you want a plan, there's Urara..."
>"Nakai-san said she doesn't know much about Western sweets."
>"And I already talked to Urara-chan..."

>"So a way to beat Miyazaki-san and Yuuna-chan, huh?"
>"There's a buncha ways to do it!"
>"Really!?"

>"You could just steal the enemy's chocolate!"
>"That's just terrible!!"

>"Or you could send legendarily bad chocolate under the enemy's name"
>"Or confine them right on the day..."
"Or trap them on the big day..."


>"Wait wait!!"
>"Does Hibari have to play dirty so she can win!?"
>"She can only ask you now, Sagiri-can...!"
"You're the only one I can ask now, Sagiri-chan...!"

>Ugh uuugh...
>"Oh my god..."

>"Valentine's Day..."
>"So... the custom of giving the guy you like chocolate"
"That's...the custom of giving chocolate to the guy you like..."

>"This is something way beyond what I can do"
"I'm way out of my depth here."

>"I mean, I don't even have someone to give choco..."
>"!?"

She could at least act like a pet then, and snuggle with him.

"Did Yuuna-chan make some chocolate already?"
"She said she's making them at Chisaki-chan's house"
"Huh!"
"I wonder what they're gonna make?"

"...they actually invited Hibari too"
"But if she watched Chisaki-chan do it,"
"She might just lose heart...!"

"Sagiri... that stinks"

"S-sorry!"
"I wanna finish this as quickly as possible...!"
"Sagiri-chan... you're actually doing it"

"Wait, are you making some too, Koyuzu-chan?"
"Can't you just whip some up with leaf techniques?"
"I can!"

How did Hibariposting start?

Oh shit, Sagiri is starting to fall in love!

>no Yuuna
>lots of Hibari
this looks like a pretty good chapter

>two panels of cat

Well, I'm satiated.

"But I can't transform food products because it's prohibited under village laws"
"But I can make a bunch of molds!"

"I'm also making some chocolate for myself since we're at it"
"Take a look!"

"Ta dah!"
"Life size Chisaki-chan boob chocolate!"
"Whoa!?"
"You can't show that to Chisaki-chan...!"

"Hibari-chan, if there's a mold you like, I can make it!"

"...thanks! But"
"I wanna use... what I chose myself"
"I see"

I guess Hibari is super-genre-aware.

HIBARI

"...if Hibari confesses now"
"She's sure to get dumped"

"So she can only do her best now!"
"She doesn't think that she can grasp his heart with a single chocolate"
"But maybe, just maybe..."
"She can get him to think that she's cute!!"

"...why"
"Why are my family's remedies so terrible...!?"

So she already knows what her fate is then.

>dat Sagiri
WEW
Also more Chisaki mom when?

Which is why she is fighting against it. Had she confessed before the others became aware she might have succeeded.

"It's already this late..."

"Everyone else... went to sleep"
"I've held out so long, but I can't do it..."

"When I was little... being able to drink this medicine made my proud..."
Blegh...
"I was convinced... that liking bitter things made me into an adult..."

"So is it... really impossible"
"For me to make delicious chocolate...!?"
"But... if I give in..."

"I'll just end up giving the guy..."
"A product which isn't up to standard"

More or less. But poor girl's still trying.

"I just can't"
"Do something so pathetic!!"

The morning of Valentine's day

"Yuuna-chan's been waking up earlier than Kogarashi-kun and heading to the waterfall, so now's her chance!"
"He's probably gonna get a lot of chocolate from everyone, but..."
"If Hibari gives him the first chocolate today"
"She might leave a bigger impression on Kogarashi-kun than everyone else!"

"Whoa... Hibari!?"
"Morning... what're you doing here?"
"M-morning, Kogarashi-kun!"
"Uh-uhh..."
"Today's valentine's day, right?"

"Here! Take it!!"

"These chocolates are shaped like shurikens! There's a lot"
"Hibari's worried about a number of things..."
"But she thinks this is the most Hibari-ish..."
"...are these handmade?"
"Y-yeah!"

Come to think of it:
Are (duty) chocolates kind-of an "Ata-boy" (You are on the right track.).

Or a veiled offer of more, if you consider me.

>"Wh-why did Fuyuzora Kogarashi's face just pop up now!?"
>"D-d-do something about it, Ameno Sagiri!!"
"G-g-get a grip, Ameno Sagiri!!"

>"Sagiri-chan, are you gonna give some chocolate to Kogarashi-kun?"
>"Wha...!?"
"Wha-!?"

>"Wh-wh-why do I have to give that an ch-chocolate...!?"
"W-w-why do I have to give that guy a ch-chocolate!?"

>"Well, we all live in the Yuragi inn..."
>"Just give him some duty chocolate, right?"
"So you should give him duty chocolate, right?"
>"Duty...?"

>"O-oohh, duty... chocolate!"
"Oh-oooooh! Duty chocolate, huh?"

>"I see!?"
>"This fluster...!"
"She's panicked...!" or "That blush...!"

>"So does Sagiri-chan also like...?"
"Could Sagiri-chan actually like...?"
>"...Yeah!"
>"It's dishonorable to do nothing despite seeing each other's faces everyday."
"It would be shameful to give him nothing when we see each other every day."

>"I should prepare some duty chocolate, at least."
>The next day, after school

>"Woooow!"
>"There are so many varieties, and it's so hard to choose!"
"There are so many kinds, it's hard to pick just one!"
>"Ah, maybe we can buy some for ourselves."
>"Hmm..."
>"Every one of them is too cute, so it doesn't suit me..."
"They're all too cute, none of them fit me..."

>"Hmmm... here!"
"Hmmm...This one!"
>"Wait, this one doesn't feel like a winner..."
"Actually, it doesn't feel like a winner..."
>"Is this really worth mulling about...?"
"Should.... you really be that picky?"

>"Well, Hibari's giving this to Kogarashi-kun!"
>"She can't afford to pick things randomly!"
"She has to be serious about it!"

>"Handmade chocolate... comes in so many shapes and sizes!"

>"That shape..."

>"...Got it!"
>"Hibari really will make some handmade chocolate!"

>"Hm... handmade."
"Okay...handmade, huh?"
>"Then I can give a piece of advice"
"Then, let me give you some advice."
>"What's up, Sagiri-chan?"

>"But she thinks this is the most Hibari-ish..."
Hahahaha

I wanna titty fuck that chocolate

"Handmade...!"

"...huh? What's this?"
"Is he more aware about the situation!?"
"Yeah! It's good!"
"Th...thanks Hibari!"
"Yes! So handmade (chocolate) really was a sure fire winner!"

"This situation isn't as bad as she thought..."
"Maybe now's the...!"

"Uh-uhh..."
"Kogarashi-kun...!"

hibari a cute

No, they're like getting Valentine's Day chocolate from your mom.

"Uhhh..."
"Morning"
"Ah! Hibari-chan, did you give your chocolate already?"
"Yaya! Koyuzu!"

"We all made some yesterday!"
"Here! Kogarashi-kun"
"We all...?"

"O-oh so that's what's happening...!"
"Thanks Yaya! Koyuzu!"
"Yeah!"
"I'm looking forward to white day...!"
"The value of handmade chocolate just crashed!!"

"Uuugh..."
"And we finally had a nice atmosphere going!!"
"...looks like everyone gave their chocolates right away"

"Sagiri-chan!"
"So maybe you can take mine too... Fuyuzora Kogarashi!"
"S-sure...?"

>"I made some curry rice before... but it was a damned as a failure"
"I tried making curry rice...but it was damned as a failure."
>"It's safer to avoid using the Ameno family's natural remedies...!"
"It's safer to avoid using the Ameno clan's traditional remedies...!"
>"You don't need to say that!!"

>"There's no way we're gonna use those!"
"There's no way we'd use that junk!
>"Did you just say... those!"
"You called them...junk!?"
I don't really want to use "junk" here but it's a little too ambiguous otherwise.

>"And you still call yourself a member of the Ameno family!?"
"And you still call yourself a member of the Ameno clan!?"
>"But like, those are bitter and sour, and only Obaba-sama likes taking them, right!?"
>"You're just weird, Sagiri-chan!"
>"Wha...!?"

>"...Heh, fine then."
>"Then I'll just redeem myself"
"I'll wash away my shame..."

>"That I can not only use the Ameno family natural remedies..."
"By using the Ameno clan's traditional remedies..."
>"But also make some delicious chocolate!!"
"To make some delicious chocolate!!"
>"Why're you going the hard way about this!?"

>"Did Yuuna-chan make some chocolate already?"
"Has Yuuna-chan already made her chocolate?"
>"She said she's making them at Chisaki-chan's house."
>"Huh!"
>"I wonder what they're gonna make?"

>"...they actually invited Hibari too"
"Actually...they invited Hibari too."
>"But if she watched Chisaki-chan do it,"
>"She might just lose heart...!"

>"Sagiri... that stinks."

>"S-sorry!"
>"I wanna finish this as quickly as possible...!"
"I'll finish this as fast as I can!"
>"Sagiri-chan... you're actually doing it."

>"Wait, are you making some too, Koyuzu-chan?"
>"Can't you just whip some up with leaf techniques?"
>"I can!"

"Hearts are a good idea... so I made the most beautiful gem packed with how I really feel!"

"H...heart chocolate cookie!?"
"Hm...?"
"Well, I just picked a standard shape, so that's not important part"

"The real point is that I kneaded the Ameno secret remedy into the mix!"
"I finally discovered that...!"
"If I only extract the super bitter remedy, it goes really well with chocolate...!"
"And so I just managed to finish it"

"Wow, Sagiri-chan...!"
"If you stayed up all night to make it, you must be super serious!!"
"S-Sagiri-chan you went so far...!?"
"So you really do like...!"
"Wha...!?"

"S-serious...!?"

"What's everyone talking about?"
"My chocolate isn't that..."

Fix pan 3 bub 2:
>Is he more aware of the situation than she thought!?

"Fuaagh... morning everybody"
"Oh? Is that Sagiri-chan's chocolate?"

"How passionaaate!"

>"But I can't transform food products because it's prohibited under village laws"
"But the village rules don't let me transform food."
>"But I can make a bunch of molds!"
"So I create a bunch of molds!"

>"I'm also making some chocolate for myself since we're at it."
>"Take a look!"

>"Ta-dah!"
>"Life size Chisaki-chan boob chocolate!"
>"Whoa!?"
>"You can't show that to Chisaki-chan...!"

>"Hibari-chan, if there's a mold you like, I can make it!"
"Hibari-chan, if there's a mold you want, I can make it!"

>"...Thanks! But"
"Thanks, but..."
>"I wanna use... what I chose myself."
>"I seeee"

"...if Hibari confesses now,"
>"She's sure to get dumped."

>"So she can only do her best now!"
>"She doesn't think that she can grasp his heart with a single chocolate,"
>"But maybe, just maybe..."
>"She can get him to think that she's cute!!"
Having her speak in third-person all the time seems weird.

>"...why"
"WHY..."
>"Why are my family's remedies so terrible...!?"
"Why are our remedies so... terrible!?

>"It's already this late..."

>"Everyone else... went to sleep."
Everyone else... went to bed."
>"I've held out so long, but I can't do it..."
"I've been at this so long, but I can't do it..."

>"When I was little... being able to drink this medicine made my proud..."
"When I was little...I was so proud for being able to drink this..."
>Blegh...
>"I was convinced... that liking bitter things made me into an adult..."
"I was convinced... that liking bitter things made me an adult..."

>"So is it... really impossible"
"Is it really...impossible"
>"For me to make delicious chocolate...!?"
"To make a delicious chocolate like this!?"
>"But... if I give in..."
"But...If I give up..."

>"I'll just end up giving the guy..."
"I'll end up giving him..."
>"A product which isn't up to standard"
"Something I can't be proud of."

"D..."
"D..."

"Don't misunderstand mee!!"
"I-it's true that I stayed up all night and it's heart shaped"
"But it really is just what they call 'duty chocolate'...!!"
"Y...yeah, you're right! Duty, right!?"
"Okay! I get it, Sagiri!"
"Then why is your face so red!?"
"Accept with more composure! Composure!!"
"Sagiri-chan, calm down!"

By the way, a chocolate cookie with the remedy in it is still too bitter for normal people.
[Left] The power of handmade...
[Bottom] Next issue, Chisaki's situation...!

Color dump.

And have fun tweaking it, phrasing user

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>"Yuuna-chan's been waking up earlier than Kogarashi-kun and heading to the waterfall, so now's her chance!"
"Yuuna-chan's been waking up earlier than Kogarashi-kun and heading to the waterfall, so now's my chance!"

>"He's probably gonna get a lot of chocolate from everyone, but..."
>"If Hibari gives him the first chocolate today"
>"She might leave a bigger impression on Kogarashi-kun than everyone else!"

>"Whoa... Hibari!?"
>"Morning... what're you doing here?"
>"M-morning, Kogarashi-kun!"
>"Uh-uhh..."
>"Today's Valentine's Day, right?"

>"Here! Take it!!"

>"These chocolates are shaped like shurikens! There's a lot"
"These chocolates look like shuriken! And there's a lot!
>"Hibari's worried about a number of things..."
"Hibari worried over a bunch of things..."
>"But she thinks this is the most Hibari-ish..."
"But she thinks these are the most Hibari after all..."
>"...Are these handmade?"
"Y-yeah!"

>"Handmade...!"

>"...huh? What's this?"
>"Is he more aware about the situation!?"
"Did he realize some of my feelings!?"
>"Yeah! It's good!"
>"Th...thanks Hibari!"
>"Yes! So handmade (chocolate) really was a sure fire winner!"
"I did it! Handmade really was the sure-fire winner!"

>"This situation isn't as bad as she thought..."
"This situation isn't as bad as I thought..."
>"Maybe now's the...!"
"Uh-uhh..."
"Kogarashi-kun...!"

...

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Best girl.

I'd pay anything just to have that chocolate Chisaki sculpture

Sagiri doesn't like Kogarashi, huh?

I'm gonna dispute page 248.

>Did he realize some of my feelings!?
There's nothing in the text about realizing her feelings, just a general awareness about what handmade chocolate actually means.

>I did it!
I chose a phrase which doesn't specifically use the first person pronoun.

H I B A R I
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Kogarashi as he tasted Sagiri's dessert.

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>all this red

And done. Now we wait for TS user.

Also, I'll look through the changes since I think some of the nuances are being changed.

Thank you.

Thanks a lot for the dump and TL.

TS user here, I'm working on it.

Doesn't the title say Valentine Concerto? The thing about chocolate was just the teaser at the end of last chapter.

>"Uhhh..."
"This-!"
>"Morning."
>"Ah! Hibari-chan, did you give your chocolate already?"
"Ah! Hibari-chan, did you give him your chocolate already?"
>"Yaya! Koyuzu!"

>"We all made some yesterday!"
>"Here! Kogarashi-kun!"
>"We all...?"

>"O-oh so that's what's happening...!"
"O-oh, so that's all it was!"
>"Thanks Yaya! Koyuzu!"
>"Yeah!"
>"I'm looking forward to White Day...!"
>"The value of handmade chocolate just crashed!!"

>"Uuugh..."
>"And we finally had a nice atmosphere going!!"
>"...looks like everyone gave their chocolates right away."
"...It seems you couldn't wait to hand over your chocolates."

>"Sagiri-chan!"
>"So maybe you can take mine too... Fuyuzora Kogarashi!"
>"S-sure...?"

>"Hearts are a good idea... so I made the most beautiful gem packed with how I really feel!"
"The heart was the best form... for me to craft an absolutely beautiful gem packed with my true feelings!"

>"H...heart chocolate cookie!?"
>"Hm...?"
>"Well, I just picked a standard shape, so that's not important part"
"Well, I just picked a normal chocolate shape. That's not what's important."

>"The real point is that I kneaded the Ameno secret remedy into the mix!"
"The important thing is that I was able to add the Ameno clan's secret remedies into it!"
>"I finally discovered that...!"
>"If I only extract the super bitter remedy, it goes really well with chocolate...!"
"If I only used the super bitter ingredient... it goes really well with chocolate!
>"And so I just managed to finish it"
"I finished it just in time."

>"Wow, Sagiri-chan...!"
>"If you stayed up all night to make it, you must be super serious!!"
>"S-Sagiri-chan you went so far...!?"
"S-Sagiri-chan, you went that far!?
>"So you really do like-!"
>"Wha...!?"

>"S-serious!?"

>"What's everyone talking about?"
>"My chocolate isn't that..."

>"Fuaagh... morning everybody"
"Fuaagh... 'morning, everyone."
>"Oh? Is that Sagiri-chan's chocolate?"
>"How passionaaate!"

If Risa Taneda ever comes back, I could totally imagine her voicing Sagiri in her Rize voice.

>"D..."
>"D..."

>"Don't misunderstand meee!!"
>"I-it's true that I stayed up all night and it's heart shaped"
"I-it's true that I stayed up all night and it's a heart-"
>"But it really is just what they call 'duty chocolate'...!!"
>"Y...yeah, you're right! Duty, right!?"
>"Okay! I get it, Sagiri!"
>"Then why is your face so red!?"
>"Accept with more composure! Composuuure!!"
>"Sagiri-chan, calm down!"

>By the way, a chocolate cookie with the remedy in it is still too bitter for normal people.
By the way, a chocolate cookie flavored with traditional remedies is still too bitter for most people.
[Left] The power of handmade...
[Bottom] Next issue, Chisaki's situation...!

I really hope she's getting better, I want my usagi's S3 with her voice.

Shes dead Jim.

It seemed implied by the situation, but maybe instead of
>"Did he realize some of my feelings!?"
something like
"Is he more conscious of the situation!?" or
"Is he more aware of the situation we're in!?"

It does, sorry about that. The preview from last week just floated into my head.

I disputed it before because she was very clearly not in love with him. Even now, the impetus for her making the chocolate was trying to prove that traditional medicinal ingredients that benefit the body can be used in modern food, and not confessing feelings of love for Kogarashi.

I put Maaya Uchida voicing either Yuuna or Hibari.

I really want Akane Fujita to voice Chisaki. I know it may seem a bit unfitting but I would love to hear her voice whenever Chisaki does her naughty thoughts and her doki doki moments

fair

Is Sagari just being a dork or is she also in love with him?

>I finished it just in time.
I don't think she was stressing the fact she finished on time, she was putting emphasis on the fact she finished it.
So maybe 'I just managed to finish awhile ago'

Shes a big dork in denial.
Doesnt know how to manage those feelings because all she knows is how to be proficient as a taimanin.

>'I just managed to finish awhile ago'
How about
"I finished it just now."

I always took Sagari as harem level dense.

>I don't really want to use "junk" here but it's a little too ambiguous otherwise.
How about 'stuff' instead of 'junk'?

>Having her speak in third-person all the time seems weird.
I agree. Unfortunately, need to keep things consistent and constant. And that's how I did it back then. Damage already done.

>Yuuna-chan's been waking up earlier than Kogarashi-kun and heading to the waterfall, so now's my chance
Once again, I'm just avoiding first personal pronouns. As awkward as its sounds (and I prefer using 'my' too), I'm trying to keep it constant.

>But she thinks these are the most Hibari after all...
I think using '-ish' works better since it works better as an adjective. Also it makes the speaker sound childish, and Hibari still is a child.

Hm, that sounds fine.

Anyways, I'm looking at it again when TS user finishes to give it a final glance over.

Sagiri in a nutshell:
When she realizes her feelings for him, she will fall for him hard.

Stuff works.

If you want to keep it the same for consistency, that's fine.

>Yuuna-chan's been waking up earlier than Kogarashi-kun and heading to the waterfall, so now's my chance.
can be
>Yuuna-chan's been waking up earlier than Kogarashi-kun to go to the waterfall, so now's a good chance.

Hibari-ish works, but I didn't use it because I thought it made the speaker sound too detached, as if they weren't talking about themselves. I worded it that way because it's like saying "These are me" rather than "These are like me."

I don't know any other alternatives.

>She will fall for him hard
But she won't have the courage to DO anything about it.

You know the moment she does make a move for them, the series is near its end.

Okay

Yeah, back then, I thought it was a good idea to keep her speaking in 3rd person, but now not so much. But might as well keep rolling with it for consistency.

Sure.

I guess it does. I'll just leave it to the typesetter to pick which one he likes.

>"But she thinks these are the most Hibari after all..."
Hibari-ish its perfect you dingus

Someone forgot to add slippers.

That would be a damn good promotion. Shueisha, partner up with a chocolate manufacturer and make it!

I get the feeling that by the time she does realize her feelings for the dude she'll also come to the conclusion that her shot has long gone, so she'll just pick a girl to support.

Thanks.