Vocaroo thread for shit you've written, rate and critique original compositions

Vocaroo thread for shit you've written, rate and critique original compositions

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Really liked the picking parts, very smooth playing, the melodies played both into predictable and unexpected conventions, which was good. But at the strumming part, the chord progression becomes a bit to 'same-y' and safe compared to the plucking

Continued: but the strumming part created a memorable tune none the less.

Thanks for the feedback, I've been trying different patterns/rythyms to spice up the progression, but it always seems to veer off from the tone of the whole piece.

I'm honestly surprised more aren't willing to post, I've always wanted to hear mu play their own stuff.

picking was pretty great, i did like the strumming parts too though

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noodling into a loop pedal for 8 minutes

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New track

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Here's something that I recorded the other day

Nice stuff, I really like the "atmospheric" stuff that you can do with a loop pedal. Sounds great

Here's a song I'm writing. Still got to fix a lot of stuff up but its something.

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It's always kind of hard to judge just a guitar part like that, but from what I can tell I think it'd be nice when paired with some other instrumentation/vocals.
Really liked this, I'm a sucker for thick acoustic guitar layering like that and I think it came out really nice.

You accidentally posted the link to my thing. Thank you though, I've been meaning to do something like this for a while

>You accidentally posted the link to my thing
godammit

okay here it be

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gimme a bit and I'll post some shit

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FUUUUUCKKK RUSSIIAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

INDIANA JONES THEMES SONG COVER POSITIVE FEEDACK ONLY

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go to bed Gus

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Indie pop song im working on

I think u got a number 1 hit on your hands.

Since no one's replying to the thread I made about it here you go:

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It's not original but I try
Guess what it is

seinfeld theme song

god damn it

For real? I think its got a good pop sensibility

add some thick bass and a synth line and you betcha my man

Will do! I just need to get a band together (the eternal dilemma innit)
Thanks youve made my night!

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Written 2 songs recently, here is the first one- The Postcard
I apologise for bad quality of audio btw

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Second song i've written- Junkie Love

you sound obnoxiously british.

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Here's a song that I just started recently. I've only done about 30 seconds, and there aren't vocals yet, but I think it's pretty good.

You do sound very English, but it's somewhat endearing

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that's because i am british

That's not an excuse.

That's cool. The accent reminds me of spacemen 3
Now you know how it feels for non Americans to listen to anco

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Remember when vocaroo threads actually used to be good places for feedback?

yeah, me neither.

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Song I wrote. Its supposed to sound like Marina and the Diamonds but I only have acoustic instruments.

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lazyposting ruins everthing

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are you a stand up comedian?

no

its what they deserve for no feedback

all the same person

"no"

you tried
I suppose you're right

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choke to death on a cock you autistic faggot

Damn you're mad. Just give feedback, jesus

Drunk and confused about my ex

Gave House of Cards a very impromptu shot

I think my voice works better for this song than most other Radiohead stuff

I know it's very rough but here you guys go

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what does this have to do with Kevin Spacey

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Soundcloud.com/morrano

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(you)

(you too)

My mic sucks, apologies in advance.

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Why? Is it my composition or my playing?

its your lack of feedback

Today I got home and wrote and recorded this all by myself on my dumb lil' laptop. LOVE ME FOR IT

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sounds like a pirate war song
i like

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My masterpiece from the Sup Forums creates an album thread from last week. I think it's fucking awesome.

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this sounds great!!! acoustic instruments make me feel really melancholic, great song! the only think I don't like as much is the voice

I think it's a really good start, but when expanding upon it I would say take extra care to make sure it stays interesting. I love spacey chords like those but they can often sound kind of same-y so watch out for that.

For mine: vocaroo.com/i/s1b0flaLr77K

This is something I did the other day just messing around. It was a sort of half serious kind of thing but the more I listen to it the more I think there might be something there. Or it might suck shit, I dunno.

nice voice, dude

That's was pretty cool. I love the guitar work

Also, sounding samey was the main criticism I got on my ep, so thanks for reminding me to steer clear of that again

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Here's one of mine. Its a rough draft and i'm shit with lyrics but I really love how it sounds.

Something I wrote today...Singing is quiet because 2am but I think it's turning out nicely

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where are you from?

Utah

This is only loosely related to the thread theme because I had to upload the clip to vocaroo but I heard this song while out shopping today and I figure only Sup Forums would know. It sounded like a female singer, heavy bassline, kinda 70's vibe to it. Couldn't hear what the fucking lyrics were but this is kinda what it sounded like? Mind you, I'm neither a singer nor female so grain of salt.

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very very nice, kinda baroque pop-ish which i'm a sucker for