Hi Sup Forumsros, I'm gonna release an EDM song and I want you to comment on it first. What's wrong with it?

Hi Sup Forumsros, I'm gonna release an EDM song and I want you to comment on it first. What's wrong with it?
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What's wrong with it? It's fucking EDM. Sounds like your school for the autistic let you have access to a mac with garage band on it for five minutes.

How is it technically and musically?

Overcompressed. A 909 needs to slam.
Also, fucking techno saw. Really? Is this germany in the 90's?

Thought about bringin' back the good old days

dont ever take advice from Sup Forums nothing good can come from it.

Haha, true that, but I do it for the honesty, when I ask a friend?
"- Oh user its so good i love it blabla"

oh and i dont know much about EDM but i enjoyed it keep it up.

try a music fourm/community they would have better critique

that honesty comes with a lot of trolls

>bump

Anymore comments?

B8 > R8

>bump

its a basic tune that actually sounds not too shit (got it in background at moment)

Composer/Producer here
I have to agree that it really feels very over compressed. Specially the kick drum and the bass. There is no punch and it feels very soft (which it clearly doesn´t aim to be).
Also after a while the same synthies become kind of boring and I crave for some change.
Apart from that it´s well written and it works nicely.
Keep up the work!
My soundcloud for reference:
soundcloud.com/aidan-dunmore

Thanks for a good comment :^)
I have already begun adressing the compression issue, increasing attacks and decreasing ratios.

Thanks!

Btw, you got very interesting music!

>one more bump

I lick it

I'll shoot a gay club to it/10

Improved the compression ratios for the bass, does it slam more now?

soundcloud.com/the-official-scraphead/drive-Sup Forums-updated-faggot/s-5g2jm

>maybe last bump