Sex stories with Jill Valentine from Resident Evil 3

Sex stories with Jill Valentine from Resident Evil 3

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I love Jill but fuck off with this.

The actress who plays jill in the wii remake is Julia Voth. find her on facebook and good fapping.

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There,I read them. Now post the rest of the pictures.

Thoughts?

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Hurry up op

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Marry, Fuck, Kill

Pick from pic related.

Marry Claire
Fuck Jill
Kill Rebecca

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Marry Rebecca because she's probably a QT virgin
Fuck Claire because she's a college biker chick
Kill Jill because sadly I can't do anything else with her

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Will post this if somebody wants it

I just don't want more nigger dick tbh

Agree

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If there's no nigger dick lay it down homie

Sure I'll fap

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Btw, what did you think of the stories in the OP?

Not big in to text erotic without.images

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Not bad, a little subtly goes a long way in writing, you beat us over the head with ever idea so the ones you want to carry impact don't really have the hit. Also I'm not a fan of the rotting rapists, other than that better than your usual crap, that or I'm drunker than I thought.

So please more detail on what you mean

You go into detail on the unessential, this is when you get right down to it, porn. I don't really care what every single thrust feels like, or in your case I dont really need a whole paragraph on the nemisis monsters apperance, just oddly thin would do. I ended up skipping half of what you wrote because, while good, it wasn't where you should have focused your effort.

I get you, and I'm hoping to improve. Story was written in 2013 btw.

cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095195

Uploaded this pretty recently. Check it out. It's a collab, but I think it'll show some changes. (I hope)

I hope you know you've enlisted the help of a drunken asshole.

Taking it with a pinch of salt obviously, but if it makes sense, it makes sense.

Alright so my concerns are as follows:
-I don't get the opening paragraph, maybe I'm missing a reference but it makes no sense to me,
-Your simile and metaphors are a touch to literal.
-The line 'Sucked his face in again' was just terrible and you know it
-It's hard to grasp what's going on without a line or two telling how the characters are positioned before hand. It's all well and good to tell me that she has her legs up but is the man holding her, so on an so forth.
-You very much arch typed but that is a bit of hazard in this line of work.
That's basic impressions, still good, It flowed, had all this good things you needed, just missing that special something.

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Now I must pass out my good sir.

Rawr! x3c *nuzzles* how are you? *pounces on you* you're so warm ~o3o~ *notices you have a bulge* O: someone's happy ;) *nuzzles your necky wecky~* murr~ hehehe rubbies your bulgy wolgy you're so big :oooo *rubbies more on your bulgy wolgy & it doesn't stop growing* ·///· *kisses you and lickies your necky daddy likies* (; *nuzzles wuzzles* I hope daddy really likeys $: *wiggles butt and squirms* I want to see your big daddy meat~ *wiggles butt* I have a little itch o3o *wags tail* can you please get my itch~ *puts paws on your chest* nyea~ its a seven inch itch *rubs your chest* can you help me pwease~? *squirms* pwetty pwease *sad face* I need to be punished *runs paws down your chest and bites lip like I need to be punished really good~ paws on your bulge as I lick my lips* I'm getting thirsty. I can go for some milk unbuttons your pants as my eyes glow you smell so musky :v *licks shaft* mmmm~ ;) so musky *drools all over your cock your daddy meat* I like fondles Mr. Fuzzy Balls hehe puts snout on balls and inhales deeply oh god im so hard~ *licks balls* punish me daddy~ nyea~ *squirms more and wiggles butt I love your musky goodness bites lip* please punish me licks lips nyea~ suckles on your tip so good licks pre of your cock salty goodness~ eyes role back and goes balls deep mmmm~ *moans and suckles*