Hey Sup Forums! I'm an aspiring screenplay writer. I've written down a few ideas and I'd like some feedback. I have access to actors and I live in Utah so I have any setting I want.
I just need you to help to pick what to write. Or if you have any suggestions.
Bentley Jackson
The true story of harambe
Austin Morris
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Lincoln Rodriguez
Idea one
Grayson Howard
Idea two
Jason Jenkins
Idea three. (Last idea)
Joshua Howard
2 and 3 seem like good stories you can build off of. Have you had experience Writing in the past?
Ryder Howard
This could work with in dark future sci fi setting
Gabriel Davis
Very tiny amounts. But I think I want to write movies as a career. Maybe direct them. I've been practicing lots
Adam Stewart
Hmm that's interesting. I don't have the cash to do that but I'll save it for later
Thomas Jenkins
Are you going to school for this?
Austin Lee
Cont. Like a colonized moon with him being part of the secuirty force at day while hanging out with criminals at night
Michael Wright
>Hey Sup Forums! I'm an aspiring screenplay writer. I've written down a few ideas and I'd like some feedback. I have access to actors and I live in Utah so I have any setting I want. >I just need you to help to pick what to write. Or if you have any suggestions.
Have you tried idea 4?
Jayden Sanchez
SLC Punk 2: Electric Boogaloo
Jose Russell
I'm going to
Adam Martinez
And this could a simple man in the wild west who moved from the east coast but instead of him peacefully walk off the train its him being taking upstate to a looney bin
Levi Powell
Hmm I can see that
Nathaniel Foster
A story about my girlfriend.
Jaxson Adams
Was she a meanie?
Ryan Garcia
I'd personally rather see some more avant garde things, like a spy thriller where the main character (good guy spy) dies in a firefight midway through and the rest of the movie is about the villain's unrelated psychological problems. Or a movie about an adult trying to learn the secrets of their lost heritage, only to find that there are no secrets. This is probably why I don't write screenplays.
Jordan Martinez
edgy 18 year old idea done in that disney movie about feelings.. forgot what it is called.
too vague, in over his head how? by walking around at night alone?
this is the same premise as the film stay except it wasn't a panic attack it was a car crash. still a good film i would recommend checking it out.
Honestly I would say read more, watch more films, and try to blend genres and ideas to your liking. Your ideas aren't bad they are just generic and have been done many times before already.
Parker Robinson
Hmm na I like those
Oliver Turner
Well here's the thought I'll leave you with, then: I think The Lord of the Rings would have been far more interesting if Galadriel took the Ring.
Austin Diaz
To write screenplays you need an apple fagbook, then you can sit in Starbucks and tell every passing person you write screenplays on your fagbook.
Brayden Perry
Hahaha no damnit I'm trying to not do that.
Samuel Russell
I loved movies where the main character did shit with ill intent the end up being great ideas like in Brewsters millions where stuff he does to lose money makes him more money