My first composition. You'll prolly think is shit and you're probably right

My first composition. You'll prolly think is shit and you're probably right.
Have a good one :(
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it's shit and I'm right

it sounds like you just bought a flanger pedal the night before

i don't even have pedals nor know to use them lel

i have no software to record the guitar. i just put my shit blue snowball mic in front of the amp.

whether you like it or not i'm going to sample this in a dark ambient song i've been working on.

there really isn't enough content to justify a 4 and a half minute length

have the song climax (rhythmically, emotionally, dynamically) somewhere. ex:
youtube.com/watch?v=fgdvf4Mzkg8

can you please give me some shit i can contact you on and then send it when it's done ? I'm really curious.

maybe. what do you use?

>Have a good one
What did he mean by this?

if you have skype i'll add you there.
a good day/afternoon/evening

not if I beat you to it user

I swear to fucking christ above if this hasn't been recorded to a click track I will shove a remote control up my asshole

if you do it naw, please post it here after you finish m80.

I probably wont get it done before the thread dies, so I'll send you a message on your youtube channel when it's done, unless you have somewhere else to send it to


by the way, just reversing the audio you've got a pretty cool Kid A sounding thing

50:0-54:0

the things that happen in between those time stamps are very interesting and i suggest you implement more of that. the rest sort of reminds me of faster maggot brain plus lyrics with more a alternative/indie twist. you're not going to go far in a crowd of people with music very similar so i believe you have some gimmick to stick out amongst all the boring alt rock

pretty decent though sometimes out of sync but given your limitations i can look past it

fug
i meant 0:50 - 0:54

it's pretty good, could really use some extra ambience or percussion though

Thanks man. Youtube will do cheers !
You da real mvp man. Thanks for the tipz.

Yea will look for percussion in the future. I used my shitty blue snowball mic against the amp and recorded in Sony Vegas. Kinda new to this recording thing. Will join the music society at my uni anyway.

Thieves go to hell

I fucking love it man,you've inspired me to keep learning how to make music

w-what ? Well, if you're for real then thank you and the best of luck :D.
If you're sarcastic, thank you and the best of luck :D

I like it desu, keep going user

no joke bro :) I'm looking forward to your next composition

need this for an edgy bus ride. the chord progression does what you want it to. its addictive enough and played with enough for me to not be bothered by the lack of change in the progression.

>have a good one :(

that's the name of the next sad bois style album I'll produce

clyp.it/3m1dt3gj

the flip so far. sorry if i'm shitting all over your original vision op

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>being so cucked you let another man sample your song without permission

>implying he could stop him even if he wanted to

this is literally my first composition/recording. Anyone interested even in sampleing my song feels makes me feel good man. When it comes to playing i'm the shyest person ever, can't even play in front of my best friends without having my hands full of sweat.

without feels. i wanted to say something else but apparently i didn't delete the whole thing.

I wanna hear the finished version of this, where will it be?

Sounds really good desu just needs some mastering

I think it sounds great dude, love the winter-y vibe. Keep up the good work :)

t-t-t-t-t-THANKS !

No problem :). I'll follow your youtube channel.

ever heard of drums?

This is beautiful user. Keep up the good work.

The only thing I don't really like is the vocals, but they aren't terrible. I seriously love this.

i was too lazy today to learn how to do them on software.
I LOVE YOU TOO user, any particular reason why not like the vocals ? The voice is the problem ? Do i not hit the notes ?

Really loved it man, perfect relaxed song to listen to before bed and a long week ahead. Please continue to make music not just for you but also share it with the rest of the world. Peace and love

The vocals were underproduced, quiet, and too raspy for my tastes.

I second this

oh guys i love you so much

not bad user
11/20 (-1 because the vocals are too buried, appears too late and are pretty weak desu)
keep working anyway

you're a big frusciante fan, aren't you

THANKS MATE.
actually never heard of...BUT I DO THANK YOU A LOT M80.

Good instrumentation, vocals need work

god DAMN IT. I appreciate the critique tho. You da real mvp dawg.

going to sleep. will bump one time to keep it tilll 2morrow.