Rate my catchy melodies, user. Which one is best?

Rate my catchy melodies, user. Which one is best?
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boring

i cant say im a huge fan of any of these OP

but if youre looking for actual helpful criticism, and concrete reasons why they are bad, go to

fucking seriously? boring? then show whats not boring, lamer

you just said theyre bad? why theyre bad?

no no you misunderstand op, stop being a fag and listen

i dont like these, but since i dont have a degree in music theory, i dont know why i dont like them. so my advice to you is to go to to find out why they are bad

so you can fix them

>i dont like these
why?

gtfo newfag

1 fine
2 annoying
3 sick (as in made by a psycho)
4 ok then goes bad at some time
5 wasnt listening
6 meh
7 meh
8 meh
9 meh
10 really meh
11 now that's better. wait. slightly better yeah
12 meh, lacks creativity

so #1 then #4
I"m not into that kind of music btw

Dude clubland isn't even a thing anymore.

hey op, i make midi, i could give you some.. i also use the same cubase

sorry, nerd?

you still there OP? give me some info so i can send you midi

say something op

what midi? are you retarded?

there's no dynamics at all
there's little variety in rhythm
chords are safe and boring
melodies are predictable and all have the most basic call/response to them

different user here.

what do you guys think about my work here?
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you posted a picture with a bunch of midi, did you not..

are you retarded? you posted midi and are questioning me?

pretty nice but the staccato bits of the bass sound kind of off beat

trying to help you OP, give me some contact info.

I like this alot, i like the flutes and guitar come together nicely, great stuff

>> mu

Anybody board uses the term dad rock should not be giving criticism

its not a midi, retards, its a channel

thanks anons.

ill clean it up.

dude.. the little notes.. that you are writing down, those are called MIDI notes. you can literally save just those notes, and drag n drop them into cubase.

please tell me you know what MIDI notes are man, thats really sad if you dont even know what youre writing down.

Really like this. Nice work.

yeah I know what midi mean. what do you want to say?

tough choice
they all gay

im saying, you could give me your skype or something and i could send you midi files (melodies) and you could play with them.

ok. send you midi here
[email protected]

your mom is gay, tard

There is no variation in the synth it is pretty boring tbh

are you fucking retarded?

Better question is if you are retarded. You only have a polyvoice club saw synth playing, with no variation in volume.
Add more synths, more lines, and then we are talking.

God you don't take criticism well do you, you fucking cuck

Im just asking about melodies, fucking retards!

>polyvoice
fuken lold. youre a fucking dumb

>polyvoice
What the fuck do you call a synth that plays multiple voices? Fucking polyvoice.
NICE MEme

youre truly retarded

just a lil bit :(

i was gonna help op n give him some good midi, but just the fact he didnt know he was making midi notes, makes me really not want to help at all

Pretty damn good, I'd love to see all of these made into their piece or at least extended.

But as said before Sup Forums is the place to go.