im already following you because of a music thread you were in like 2 weeks ago.
good stuff man
not sure how to help
i like singing better than rapping in general so i would want more singing and less rapping, but i'm obviously in the minority on that one judging by the top 40 of the past 30 years.
the 3 parts dont go together at all
i know that's the point you're trying to make
you think you're being clever but you're not
you need more chord changes its too repetitive
you need vocals or rapping too, its boring without
get rid of those long pointless intros, no one can stay interested long enough for the song to start
a black lodge dream is really boring, i hope your not finished with that, theres no song there yet.
bardo dance has potential, needs a top line,
I dont really get what youre trying to do with these tracks, theyre just long pads and background noise
I guess they could work as soundtrack shit for vidya games.
You need collaborators
disparity is smooth
Ozone, cut those instrumental parts in half, and get to the rapping much sooner. Aint no body got time for those long ass boring breaks
Portrait of my life needs a bridge and chours but its smooth dont stop working on it
this could be really good if you didnt settle on those off key guitar and vocal parts.
keep it up man it needs a chorus and bridge in different keys to keep it interesting.
but good vibe.
Also accentuate your vox and guitars more than the drums when mixing, because those are the main attraction in your music. Everyone's heard drum machines and perc. loops a million times before, but your voice and guitar is YOU baby.
yeah its cool
you need a Bjork type chick to colab with
too weird for me
makes me want to smoke meth and kill loved ones
i'd love some sweet vocals on top
youtube.com/watch?v=1BkBetXGXjQ
>Rocktronica