Superheroine porn comic I wrote and drew. Let me know what you think -- looking for feedback...

Superheroine porn comic I wrote and drew. Let me know what you think -- looking for feedback. Any and all criticism appreciated.

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color it you cuntbag

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Eventually this will happen

I like it man

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Thanks! Let me know any particular likes and dislikes

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I think I remember reading this last year

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I went back and inked it and changed some dialogue, and added pages.

I read this comic like 2 years ago stop pretending you made this and are just now looking for criticism

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Refer to

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if you made it, so far pretty good.
if you didn't, thanks for the dump

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Thanks!

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keep going...

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Good stuff OP.

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thx very much

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I feel that her legs need work in some of the pages, but I feel that her upper body and face are always really good. I also feel that the male body is very good. The buttons on her coat that obviously give a foreshadowing of nipple exposure I think? Are overtly "lewd" and take away from the serious atmosphere.

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Thanks for the critique! Believe it or not, I did not intend for the buttons to be lewd, that was just a style of coat i wanted her to wear and that's how they would be.

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Keep those comments coming !! I have plenty of chapters and lots of time to hang

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you need to work for superheroine comixxx

This is actually pretty good OP! Got a site where you post these comics?

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Thanks! Benchleyfan01.imgur.com

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Neato. Will definitely check out.

Love the concept on this one.

Good stuff OP.

1) what paper and pencil do you use
2) were did you learn to draw

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I use a mechanical pencil 0.5 mm lead. Normal sketchbook paper. I'm self-taught. Mostly reading comic books

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do you take requests

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sure what's your request

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What are you down for?

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sorry i'm thinking of a good one

really love your work, been following it for awhile and it looks great inked. quick question: where do you post your work normally? aside from here and r34 I never know where to look.

it has a lot of words for some reason

I mean like what do you feel good about doing? Because I got a list of requests I could ask for, but I don't wanna ask for one that you don't feel like doing.

can i get a lewd of DC cyborg and 1980s verson star fire

post if you need a ref

I'm not the artist is the my dude, is.

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Would be pretty dope if you could make one on Fire Emblem, pecifically on Florina. I could post more pictures if needed.