Critique my voice and this song that i came up with just now

Critique my voice and this song that i came up with just now

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Smoking is bad for you

so is being a fag but that doesn't stop you

them dicksucking lips

wanna be phill earvum, but if I'm being honest it's not bad. Nice little eerie guitar vibe, your vocals are decent for this type of music. But please, work on your fretting. Too much buzzing, even if it's intentional it's a bit irritating. The little part at the end is a bit necessary, especially with the previously mentioned fretting problem. The melody is fine in the song, and it was hard to hear the lyrics. Decent though my man, good work.

Bluesy. I like that.

Thanks my guys, thanks for the tip on the buzzing, its a bad habit

I really don't have any particular tips, just that compliment, I guess, When people post stuff like this you kind of expect it to be terrible, but I really liked this.

Has a Niel Young Dead Man vibe that resonates with my taste in music.

thats a really great soundtrack. Do you have any music of yours would like to share?

No, I'm not a very prolific songwriter.

It really is. I'd say it's the best soundtrack around.

m.youtube.com/watch?v=9SJAt2UkXzo

Here's my tribute to Italian culture

Sounds like a drunk mexican

Sound like standard Sup Forumscore

Its really not that great. Its generic, the lyrics are the only good thing in folk/singersongwriter and yours are so lame holy shit... anyway hope you work on it, this wouldnt get you anywhere not that you intend on it

i'm really into this, reminds me of vincent gallo. is OP still here?

yo, still here

lol, i'll work on them ;)

do you have a soundcloud or anything of the like? v interested in hearing more. if you need an email address, let me know

epic

be more confident, take a shot or two before you get on the mic if you have to lol. the lyrics and music is good. you should really upload this to bandcamp or soundcloud.

the abrupt ending doesn't help, i liked the sounds i was hearing.