Rate my friends April story

Rate my friends April story

archiveofourown.org/works/12119991

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"My friend's"

Sure, OP.

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What did you think of the story?

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Give this thread a bump in a bit if you want to see more (and also read the dudes story)

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i suppose if ninja turtle rape fan fiction is your thing it not bad.

It needs more plot or less plot depending on what your "friend" is gong for. its to much for straight up erotica but not enough for an actual story.

Could you clean that up and post it as a comment on the story? He needs critique but I don't want to say it.

(Scroll down and use a fake email.)

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no but you can clean it up and use a fake email.

Nah