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I love jangle pop and this is right in my alley. I do have some personal preferences in regards to singing and I feel you have to work on it a bit more. But otherwise - great job!
The acoustic intro is so bloody quiet compared to the rest of the track which is basically a problem of bad mixing. There should be some normalization, EQing going on which doesn't happen at all. Learn to balance these things because the song needs a good mixing to be pleasing, no matter how good it might be.
Solid indie rock, with a very nice guitar sound. The Vocals are solid, but fail to match the quality of the rest of the track. I thing with some work you could do a Joey Ramone-like voice and delivery.
familar recs:
Austin Hughes
...and I think the abupt ending is a bit out of place and like a rude awakening. The dreamy sound of the track demands a more organic ending that is more like slowly waking up.
if you like my music on youtube comment on the vid so i can check out yr channel
>blushcore
reccs:
Landon Cruz
Fine stuff, sir. I really like the lyrical structuring and that bass...yes. Funny, I accidentally had your tracks playing in the background, and it was very fitting. I got lost, but not lost...if that makes any sense ? Great job >an interlude
Ya got me. Nice reverb I made this vid ( and the track )I'm pretty new to both fields. Please tell me your thoughts. I'd really appreciate it. Anybody else here make music videos ? youtube.com/watch?v=GPranlr24Dk&t=107s
>Industrial Hip-Hop/Noise/Ambient >FFO Death Grips, AFX, Whitehouse, NIN, Clipping
soundcloud.com/sun-at-midnight/shades-ov-pink
Listening to graphene, it's pretty solid, even on my earbuds, I really like the warm synths, but the percussion is what does it for me the most. Bunker is also pretty groovy, but could use more variation. All in all, totally up my alley. IAWOITE has some nice vocals, but could use some more confidence, they're not terrible by any means, just need work. I do dig the noisy section way more, reminds me of Air for some reason, it's really good. Other than that, here's what I also recommend that I'm already familiar with: All of these are solid, check them out.
Easton Morgan
thank you for the feedback, very much appreciated
I can't really compose a good melodic part atm, so repetition and boredom are just around the corner, the one thing I can do now is break some loops with some unconventional drumming, so if the rhythm section is working, I'm very happy
I really like your production, I was wondering if you've been using just softwares or maybe some nice hardware like a drum machine or something
I like the use of samples here and there, very free jazz
Sebastian Scott
Thank you! For now it's just FL 12, will make the switch to Ableton eventually, don't have money for any hardware, so I use what I have.
Jack Long
wow FL? that's impressive dude, well at least for me: I could never work with that, I just doesn't click for me
switch to Ableton ASAP: VSTs, MAX/MSP: it's veeeery fun
I'm already used to FL, I find it comfortable for work, so that's why I stick around with it to this day, it's way better than what I previously used, but I am aware that Ableton shows way better results, that's a fact.
Michael Turner
Fruity Loops all day everyday. This track made with only FL and the DIVA VST
>ph210068330.bandcamp.com/album/meditation-tapes-lp I never really got into this kind of music, though I appreciate it's existence and I can tell this was actually thought out and intentional as opposed to some other ambient stuff that's just holding down one note on a keyboard for like ten minutes.
>gitah.bandcamp.com/ You got my attention with John Fahey and Sandy Bull. I never new nightcore was a thing so this is disorienting but in an enjoyable way.
>yames.bandcamp.com/ Are the more aqua-ish songs guitar? I really dig this, as in "would actually leave my room to see this live at some basement show".