give eachother feedback / constructive criticism in this thread
Give eachother feedback / constructive criticism in this thread
Juan Sanchez
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Austin Cooper
new H E A T bois!
prod by GFBEATS!
from the collab project coming nov!
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>hip hop
>boom baps
Jaxson White
Easton Torres
I already gave you feedback in another thread. do I have to do it again?
>Lo-Fi
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Nicholas Hernandez
>beats
Jordan Watson
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>dark trap
>eerie & heavy
>sample
check out my other beats if u like
Brody White
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Hi, this is my band
Nolan Perez
I made this track, here's the video
William Myers
sup everyone it's ur buddy dvd.gnome.
i had a bunch of songs i made this week i was gonna release one-per-day,, but really fuck that.. who cares even!
ill put them all up tonight. 6 songs with visuals
i'll post back again when it's up
here's some from last month:
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>sample based beats
>i put popular vocals over the music so you can get a f u ll experience
>sample based videos
>amidoinitright?
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highly recccomondod
Austin Scott
It's getting more and more apparent that at the current rate of technological progress, artificial intelligence will eventually supercede the human species.
Being alive in such an important time for mankind is thought provoking. This is a toast to life during one of humanity's final chapters.
James Johnson
i didn't mean to rec OP, i meant to click instead
also dig this
James Garcia
armsdealer.bandcamp.com
Arms Dealer-MANNY, THA WHITE
>industrial hip hop, electronic, footwork, techno, remixes of trap bangers
New Arms Dealer release. First track is 3 consecutive remixes of Bobby Shmurda's Hot Boy, Princess Loko's verse on Tommy Wright III's Still Pimpin, and A$AP Ferg's Work (Remix).
Second song is a dance track sampling French Montana's verse on A$AP Ferg's East Coast Remix.
Third track is done in the theme of Gucci Mane's First Day Out with ambient-esque synths and choir voices.
I'll be keeping an eye out for the peeps postin' their work in this thread. Have a good Friday night.
Nicholas Jenkins
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rock alternative, indie
Jordan Martinez
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top 40 pop
Hudson Harris
>electronic
>analog
>spacey
>dreamy
>warm
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I prefer your vgm projects to the lofi, if the mix was a bit tighter they'd sound awesome.
Some cool sounds but feels a bit lackluster otherwise
Your composition is a lot stronger than youre voice, your voice isnt necessarily bad but it detracts from the rest of the piece. If you sung with a bit more confidence/worked the levels a bit better it could sound pretty could.
All just my 2 cents
Jordan Ramirez
hey, thanks man i appreciate the honest feedback
Landon Reyes
shouuld i pastebin my entire music library?
Jordan Wilson
Yes
Anthony Hughes
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>soul
>hiphop
Jose Miller
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>Indie pop
>pop rock
>punk rock
James Wood
>Industrial Hip-Hop
>Noise
>Ambient
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Already gave my thoughts on this the other day, think it's solid math-rock, but needs some more work.
Really like the bassline, and the sampling is nice, noticing a Kanye influence, but I could be wrong on that one. My only issue (which I keep saying a lot in these threads) is that it's not really a fully developed song, it's nice for what it is, it really is, but it needs variety, and leaving 1:30 minute ideas won't leave too much of an impression, unless you're going for that.
It has the potential to be a catchy song, but the vocals need work, and I'd also suggest if you worked a bit more on the arrangements, doesn't have to be anything spectacular, but it could sound more full.
Another thing that kinda doesn't stick are the drums. In my opinion, either go full authentic drums, or use the synthetic tone more, because this is somewhere in the middle and it doesn't really sound all too pleasant, it kills it for me at least.
Jace Bailey
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Ian Evans
>surf rock with a metal twist
towerofbabel.bandcamp.com
Ryan Robinson
Get your daily fix of Exotica!
Today in Extendo-vision:
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> Complete Permutation of G7#9
>Beefheadian Free-Jazz
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> Sceneries of Decay
>Rural Folk
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>Trip to the Batcave
>Exotica
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>Tokyo Basement Transmissions
>Electroacoustic / Noise
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>Can't get no Hawaii
>(clean)Drone
Full album on Bandcamp
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Send Me on My Merry Way is pretty nice overall. Love the bass work and and of course the twang. The surfrock/metal mix is definitely something you should explore more.
But production and mixing need some work in my opinion.
Love the way it is mixed and produced - sounds super oldschool. The playful bass is another good part. But, in total the record gets pretty boring - although the noisy-parts at the end of the record spice things up
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Elijah Collins
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>Vaporinet
>Dream
>Vaportrap
>Chillwave
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as always
Nice tracks !!!!
Juan Rogers
ivonnevancleef.bandcamp.com
> rural psychedelia, lo fi, portastudio, drone, ambient, bedroom recordings, loops, noise
recc
Cameron Torres
oc russian black metal
Carter Taylor
>stoner, doom, fuzz, metal etc
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>electronic, industrial, space
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Christopher Lopez
No
Gabriel Green
bamp
Xavier Davis
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bandcamp: eccogangrecords.bandcamp.com
>blushcore
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Jordan Murphy
morning fellows
Mason Morgan
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>synthwave
>retro electro
Jace Evans
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>Novice, first draft.
I can't tell if the beginning vocals sounds completely out of place or not compared to the chorus near the end.
David Butler
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>fun trap
>posted up in germany
>hyphy Trap
Adrian Wood
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YRR - OverKill Interlude (Prod. by SANTOS SANTANA)
A little interlude from my P4P Mixtape comin soon :)
>Trap
>Rap
>Hip-Hop
>meh
Robert Sullivan
epiglottis.bandcamp.com
>FINAL EPIGLOTTIS ALBUM
>Loop-based ambient music
>A concept release about love and decay
>World's falling apart as the years pass you by
Don't forget to review these thing on RYM
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Caleb Ward
up
Isaac Foster
Anthony Adams
NEW music from The dvd gnome!
>fun
>sexy
>naive
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That’s the album ^^^
Those are the singles vw v
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>lil uzi bird
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>Jennifer lopz
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>xxxtemptasions
Aiden Morales
Cooper Morris
Yeah man i mean i dont even know what collaboration entails in this cyberspace future we fund ourselves in but I’m down for all of that. Your music sounds great! I keep pretty low standards for my own stuff
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Brayden Sullivan
xxxtemptoton and oozey are real nice
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>electronic
>shoegaze?
Jaxon Bennett
> hip hop
> industrial
> electropunk
> chamber rap
> acid house
Like if Richard D James had a butt baby with Leonard Cohen and Prodigy.
Noah Sullivan
alternative rap w/ an emphasis on lyrics. hoping to collab more soon and release my 3rd tape.. here are the singles
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Bentley Adams
>underground trap type shit
>cool sounding
>real shiet
will return feedback almost always
hmu
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good rhythm
Wyatt Rogers
Brody Flores
Leo Richardson
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Jordan Turner
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sounds sick, something that bones would spit over
The first and third track are good, nice flow
sounds great, the snare and hat rolls are done well
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>chill hip hop beat
Landon Barnes
Luke Cox
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sounds like a demo, a decent one
up ur production quality, either pay for engineers or learn urself
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Robert Bell
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>rap
>melancholy
>sing
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I love the vibe the song myst. Its chill but noisy and big.
u again is really great. I love the vocal sample and how you chop them place them.
Surrender is a really great idea. I wish you were singing louder and had a more interesting way to present those chords.
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Nathaniel Peterson
thanks man I'm working on uping my production quality now
I like the flow at the 1min mark really original and makes your track stand out from other rap artists
Beat is comfy as fuck
overall 8/10 good work my man
Asher Flores
damn that was chill man great beat and nice lyrics too
tell me what you think of my track my man
Jack Robinson
i already did check my post again.
Surrender is a really great idea. I wish you were singing louder and had a more interesting way to present those chords.
Connor Sanders
think he didnt get it cause u replied to Me with ya review for his my g
Michael Ortiz
yeah that was the case
thanks for the feedback I'll incorporate a louder voice
Luke Cox
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torontofag here
Ethan Ross
New stuff just put up love u fellas xoxox
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>beats
>trap
>electronic
>synths
>samples
Jace Jones
Bump
Eli Gonzalez
released this couple of weeks ago.
in the mid of recording first EP so feedback will be very much appreciated. thanks!
>post-hardcore
>melodic hardcore
Henry Walker
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>EDM, Hip Hop, Rock and Classical
Kevin White
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>eyo check out my beat
>lofi sampled
>i hope you enjoy any feedback at all is appreciated
Hunter Roberts
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>Dreampop
>Soft Rock
>Indie
The first link is a cover of Childish Gambino´s "Redbone". Let me know what you think!
Easton Williams
>lo-fi funk
>psychedelic
>sampling
>R&B
>trill
Carson Flores
nice raw work
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>Simplicitys
Evan Collins
What would you say the average amount of plays would be for a song that was released roughly two weeks ago? It's my first release and I think it is doing quite well but I have nothing to compare it to stat wise. Any help would be appreciated.
Luke Howard
which is your song?
William Cook
Here's a video of my playing electric guitar for the first time. Any tips?
Aaron Taylor
have fun
Xavier Torres
Honestly I haven't posted it in one of these threads, and I'm a little hesitant to. Just from observation the less associated I am with this website as an artist the better, even if you all are mostly well intentioned in these threads. I'm just looking for a little information on statistic averages which might help me plan my next move.
Aaron Brown
I see, I'm here to promote small artists
Brayden Cruz
these guys xD, they always do interesting things
Lucas Jenkins
Well actually this would be my first release, I just want to know if I'm above or below average in terms of play count. It's currently sitting at 96 plays, with a ratio of 43 complete and partial plays, 10 skips. Do you think this is average for a song that has been out two days shy of two weeks?
John Young
Thank guys for your comments. I value him.
Charles Garcia
Pretty low, IMO. My first song was a cover of a small time band and it's over 300 plays. Was at around 250 views after two weeks.
Isaiah Diaz
Benjamin Smith
Elijah Lopez
Ok, that's good to know. Considering I only shared my song with like 10-15 people personally, don't play live, do no advertising and have like zero connections to any other musicians I don't think I'm doing overly bad. I only put my song on Bandcamp as well. Thanks again for your input, it helps a lot.
Jose Lee
Yea no problem. I posted a link to my song on here, from bandcamp. Nobody personally, as I have no friends, but I reckon quite a few people ended up clicking it through that. You are doing fine if you didn't post it to a big audience.
Robert Price
You don’t do AdWords? Bro everyone does AdWords go get an AdWords account ;)
Dylan Diaz
I shared it on Facebook for the first time today, which honestly did boost my plays quite a bit. But for the most part it's been a very small audience. I like to think that the ratio of complete as opposed to partial/skipped plays is more important than the overall total. Like the culture of bandcamp kind of encourages skipping through songs that you don't particularly care for on first listen, so having lots of complete plays is more important than just having lots of plays period; it means people are enjoying your stuff, and word gets around. I might be wrong and I don't have much credit in the music scene but I feel like this is just sort of the natural order.
No thanks, Google.
Nathan Collins
>I respesct anyone who writes and records black metal highly reck
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>experimental black metal project called skaldic
>new album free download
Jose Price
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>hiphop
>trash
>mallsoft
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so chill and so smooth, love this man.
>big rare you always got the fire hits, keep it up bruh.
its always a pleasure to come across your beats homie, love em.
Adrian Morales
>Grunge, Alt-Rock
We recently put out our first single. Give it a listen and tell me what you think!
Digging this genre crossover!
Brayden Allen
Guy’s lets ALL COLLAB on ONE NOTE
Ryan Murphy
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Nathan Barnes
yames.bandcamp.com
watery ambient, temple music, tunes for your moods
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