What does Sup Forums think about these rap lyrics I just made?

What does Sup Forums think about these rap lyrics I just made?

ey ey, i fuck a bitch
ey ey, she suck a dick
ey ey, i flip a brick
ey ey, she take the dick
ey ey, i hit a lick
ey ey, i broke my wrist
ey ey, she on my dick

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>ey ey, i fuck a bitch
So this is a fictional story then?

I fucked a bitch about a month ago, so I guess not, although this is not even supposed to be a story.

But you didn't tell me what you think about my lyrics man

OP on suicide watch

Good meme, I forgot it even existed. I guess my lyrics are just too good for anyone to comment on them.

OG LOC OG LOC

Did you know that his voice actor is white?

nah
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you are an awesome poet. even Kendrick Lamar isn't so good as you

Change the second half.
ey, ey, IHITALICK
IBROKEMYWRIST SHEONMYDICK
HITTINDATBITLIKEIMFUCKINGTHATBITCH
IMMABLACKCOPYOTAINTEDWHITEASSDOWNTODANIGGAHOOD

look at da flicka da wrist
my emo bitch like her wrist slit

Kekd and rekt

Nice op, just get purple dreads and a septum piercing and you're there

As long as you got a good producer behind you, it doesn't matter what your lyrics are.

Honestly, rather repetitive with the same "ey ey" chant in front of each line.

How about bumping up the intensity midway with some triplets?

ey ey, i fuck a bitch
ey ey, she suck a dick
(faster, quotes delineate triplets)
i "flip-pin a" brick and she "take-a the" dick
i'm "hit-tin a" lick and then "brea-kin my" wrist
(slower now, relaxed)
ey ey, she on my dick
ey ey, she on my dick.

Too complex

awful shit. nothing worthy of putting music to

Sounds like BNM material to me!

I'm almost positive these are Young Thug lyrics.

jewish producer*

Would be better if you add the "ey ey, i fuck a bitch" one more time at the end so it amounts to 8 lines.

brb making this into a real song

Bestiality is not cool

k i did it user

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enjoy

>vocaroo.com/i/s1CDLw0mSqAu
Hey this is pretty good not cringe at all

wtf, lil pump posts on mu?

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their too different. Have a coule of the same lines in a row or you'll lose peop

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