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>goth rock >shoegaze >industrial influences >noise rock >post punk >the cure on speed >harsh vocals
ive had a lot of feedback on the track which has been fantastic, im really glad people are liking it, im actually working on the 2nd track for my demo ep now so keep ur peepers out
I recommend you listen to "Blood" and "Intoxication" first.
Hit me up with some of that good ol' feedback.
I'm not that big of a fan of the whole "early 2000's slut-pop" aesthetic, but as far as I can comment on it the production's well done (if a bit simple, although that's probably intended). The problems with mixing you described aren't really noticeable, although you should try experimenting with how you master or record your voice as it's somewhat muffled sounding, unless that is what you were going for. For advice, I'd say you could add some layers. If there was more stuff going on in the background it would be more dynamic and a bit more interesting to listen to. The tricky part here is doing that without sacrificing the pop simplicity. I believe it can be done, however.
>P-107v0.4 (Stripes) Right off the bat: great sample choice, combined with those synths it does a great job of setting the mood. The song itself evokes great nostalgia, great melancholy, although it's still playful enough to keep you interested. I'd say: keep it up. The repeating samples are a bit too much though. I feel as if the sample would hold more power if you would've left out the few parts of it you repeat through the song. The "There's nothing I can do for you now" would be a great way to end the track by itself without the "ever heard of this story". Except for that all I can say is: go on in this direction, friend.
>ANALOG1-89v010 Chill stuff. Does exactly what it says on the tin, I'd say. The vibes are on point and there's not a lot there I can criticize, especially seeing how short of a sample it is. I'd advise you to kick things into gear a bit later on, add something to make it more dynamic and give it some variety. A lot of techno falls into the trap of overt repetition and even though it's a genre staple I feel something more balanced has higher peaks.