Thoughts on my series "Sonic the Sissyhog"?:

Thoughts on my series "Sonic the Sissyhog"?:

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Would appreciate ideas for a sequel

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lol, these are two pretty random things to put together. Why Sonic of all things? I mean I both like Sonic and sissy porn, but I wouldn't think of putting them together.

There were several artists doing versions of the Sissyhog. It's just a great design

Maybe, but a pretty crack one none the less. Why not just go with something more established like Princess Marco, Zelda or Shezow. Or something with potential like OS Ben 10, Adventure Time or Danny Phantom.

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Thought of writing something with Shezow, but I think most of those other designs are pretty overrated or weak

Could you show me sissy Danny Phantom?

Just started on the first one and it's weaksauce from page 1.
>glass tube
OK, useful in some situations, like chemical influence, A/V brainwashing, sense deprivation.

But instead:
>metal tentacle
Lazy as fuck, this is for when you want to manipulate something robotically but don't give enough of a shit to figure it out mechanically.

>instant transformation
Lazy and rushed as fuck. He's a tech villain. Why not use some sort restraining machine. Slow brainwashing trough a VR helmet, body change trough stimulation/suction/injection. Maybe apply some mechanic devices like collars or chastity that serve in gradual training, instead you seem to have low-tech elbow grease approach as I'm reading on.

Fair enough. Maybe for chapter 2.

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Here are some, there also a number with him not specifically sissified, but acting like a sissy.
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Well anyway, from my perspective, as someone who enjoys the process more than the result, my main qualm with this is that both his physical and mental transformations are way too fast. And some of the funnest moments is when a character resists, appears to have a real chance and fails in the physical aspect, and is slowly noticing changes, but rationalizes them away in the mental aspect.

I'll try and fix that in future chapters. I'm more into the idea of fucking the result of sissification, rather than going through the process, so I'll have to look into it.

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Well, you see that OK with OCs, but when you actually use an established character it's just wrong to change both his mind and body in a flash and have him be almost someone else by chapter 2. At least from a fanfiction storytelling sense.

In a perfect world you could have even had Eggman come up with idea that if he can't defeat Sonic, he can just change him and design robots that aren't meant to win against sonic and prisons that aren't meant to hold him, but affect either a part of his body or psyche in a way that would eventually lead to sissification. Or devise plans that are easily and obviously foiled by something like crossdressing or some sort of other fetish. Like designing an electrified corridor to his base and leaving a sexy latex suit next to it so Sonic just has to wear it, while some sort of subliminal audio waves or aphrodisiac gas would give him a latex fetish by the time he passes the tunnel (this is pretty stupid, came up with it on the spot, please don't use unless you make it less stupid somehow). Making the chapters as close to the formula of the show's episodes as possible.

A bit too complicated for a fap story. I mean I see what you're saying, but I just like a confident and sexy trap Sonic.

He can be that. Just not by the end of chapter 1. But again, I'm biased as our fetishes differ. There are people who like to hike somewhere beautiful and people who would much rather take a 5min helicopter ride. Both are perfectly legitimate.

If you have any situations or such in mind and you don't quite know how to get a character into them, ask while I'm here. I suck at writing, but I'm good at outlines.

Do you have a Discord or Skype?

I wouldn't mind a new co-author or someone to ask questions of for sissy stuff

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>discord/skype
Don't use them. You on any platform with a messaging function?

Messaging over Gmail?

Nah, I mean do you have a profile on any website so I can give you my e-mail.

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My gmail is literally my author name, so contact me that way and I'll let you know if you did it

I got it

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Yep.

Had this laying around my Sonic folder.