One upon a time, a young firecrotch noticed something totally normal about her brother.
Unfortunately, she's been repeatedly fueled with stories from Mai, her naive classmate (who explained how she's been stuck, much to her embarrassment, with no choice but to "help" her boyfriend multiple times to save him from injury)...
And, because of the misinformation she's heard, she misjudges the severity of the situation and takes action!
Can she get her brother out of the sticky mess she thinks he's in... Without getting a sticky mess inside herself in the process?
Well, hope you enjoyed this one. I'll still work on it a bit more and may post a fully-translated and uncensored version in the future. Until then, what did you think?
Camden Bell
Loved it
Gavin White
your commentary was autistic, so dont do it again
Josiah Richardson
Yeah this was great, less autie commenting next though
Levi Brown
Fair, fair.
Ryan Rogers
Good shit OP. Did you draw this? Or just translate it. Either way, good shit
David Robinson
Found it, redrew and edited a lot of bits. Plot was pretty basic originally. So made the dialog from scratch to lead her into thinking she's justified in what she's doing with a little backstory and a lot more inner dialog and conflicting feelings. *shrugs* It's just what sounded hot to me.
Luke James
*shrugs*
Isaiah Thomas
I b a l to ur s
Adrian Garcia
Damn that was hot
Sebastian Reed
So many great moments The moment she slams down on his cock and finds herself totally in all of it Trying desperately to convince herself she's in her right mind Finally snapping out of it at the last moment and trying desperately to come down from the edge of no return only to be helplessly blasted over the edge And finally seeing that she's totally content with how things turned out ...... and her little hint that she's totally going to do this again the moment she gets a chance
Sebastian White
So you basically took someone elses job and edited the dialog without his consent. Nice.
