Previous thread: Continuing with Chapter 6 after a break, so stay with us.
What do you think of the story, art and characters, so far?
The Second Seconds Thread:The Sloppy Seconds Storytime Edition
Ethan Edwards
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Liam Clark
Thanks OP.
Art is fine, most secondary characters are ok/cute but the MC is an unsufferable cunt.
Xavier Stewart
thanks for posting OP, enjoying it so far
Aaron Peterson
>What do you think of the story, art and characters, so far
Art is comfy
Katie isn't completely awful, I can respect her as a MC, but she done goofed way too much.
Hazel a qt. A QT!
Nathan Adams
This has all been so amazing. I started reading this out of nowhere! Seriously, OP, I can't thank you enough for posting this. It's been just what I needed.
Colton Flores
Lis needs more porn
Angel Jones
Seconded.
Yeah, thank you so much OP. We really appreciate you doing this. I've always wanted to read this but never got a chance to.
Jace Bennett
Hey, glad you guys enjoyed it!
Tbh, I am in the same boat. I only today got to read the book so I saw the thread, got reminded of having the book on my laptop and went "Fuck it!" and here we are.
Thanks for reading so far! Two chapters left so, bare with me, if this gets slow, tho. Is getting late here.
Jace Bailey
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Evan Jones
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Noah Fisher
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Owen Long
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Easton Murphy
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Connor Ramirez
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Matthew Long
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Nathan Peterson
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Zachary Lewis
So what ethnicity is Hazel supposed to be?
Cameron Scott
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Ian Flores
She is definitely of CUTE origins.
Ian Sanchez
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Xavier Cook
Grim Fandango?
Connor Rivera
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Nathan Nguyen
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Joseph Cruz
OP from the last thread here. Thanks for tge great work!
Caleb Carter
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Bentley Fisher
AAAWWWW SHIT.
This part is so silly.
Liam Hall
Agreed. Thanks, original OP, for making the first thread and finally making me read this book!
Austin Cook
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Charles Moore
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Christian Myers
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Charles Fisher
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Juan Hernandez
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Austin Scott
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Evan Jenkins
She killed the black guy!
Aaron Kelly
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Aiden Bell
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Caleb Peterson
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Brandon Cox
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Nathan Murphy
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Brandon Perez
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Cooper Wilson
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Hudson Nelson
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Joshua Wilson
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Bentley Bell
I want to go to a restaurant where the waiters dress like skeletons and there's a skeleton band and there's axes and shit on the walls.
James Gray
oh oh
Sebastian Brown
If you have a toilet themed restaurant in Japan, I am sure you can find one with skeletons and axes.
Joseph Young
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Daniel Nelson
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Tyler James
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Tyler Collins
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Jacob Cook
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Jaxon Smith
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Chase Powell
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Hunter Wilson
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Gabriel Gomez
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Chase Walker
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Bentley Flores
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Anthony Hughes
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Andrew Rodriguez
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Jose Edwards
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Mason Murphy
bumping the thread
you da man OP
Hunter Garcia
Beautiful page~
End of Ch.6, guys. Last chapter.
I'll brb and I think I'll be able to post the rest of the book in time.
Meanwhile, how is everyone?
Nathan Gomez
managing to get by
i want to throttle katie because of the blantant time fuckery with the shrooms to stay with her twotiming shoulda stayed her ex-boyfriend aand how manipulative she is with the minor characters to make her perfect world.
i became confused with all the do over stuff, but the art and the outcome of her actions kept me rooted for more
Austin Sanders
crawling out of a dump, life's been kinda rough. I can't complain too much, it'sn othing particularly serious, but some days I think I might develop anxiety.
Also, y'know. Thinking about her. So that's fun.
Either way, that second spirit had been trapped in the damn fireplace for god knows how long, now I wonder if it became an eldritch abomination BECAUSE of its imprisonment or if it was trapped because of what it was
Benjamin Phillips
AHHHHHHHHHH
S P O O K Y
Nicholas Gray
I love you user, thanks for this
Kayden Stewart
Ha that monster hunter reference
Jacob Martin
Sorry to hear that, user. We all have our off days. You just hang in there!
Hunter King
You're very welcome, user!
Chase Wilson
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Matthew Lee
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Caleb Adams
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Evan Butler
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Jaxon Gonzalez
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Evan Cooper
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Ryan Hill
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Ethan Evans
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Mason Wilson
We boss fight now
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Jonathan Parker
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Kayden Rivera
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Cooper Brooks
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Matthew Parker
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Ryan Wood
Nega Katie!
Liam Gutierrez
Andrew Lee
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Lincoln Nelson
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Tyler Gonzalez
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David Morales
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Andrew Johnson
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Jordan Richardson
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Samuel Williams
That is one cute dark spirit
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Tyler Torres
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Jackson Allen
Nightmare Katie a QT
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