Sup Forumsco/'s Bizarre Adventure: DORARARARA! edition

aka "WE PART 6 NOW" edition.

Old Thread: Past Threads: pastebin.com/s1NhCLbS (update this)

MAIN TOPIC: Part 6 planning. Stand Suggestions are OPEN. Go nuts

READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)

>Canon Stand Info for the Ignorant and Forgetful
jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands

>Plot summaries and character list
pastebin.com/vbD28iMx (haha fuck it this is never getting updated)

>Abilities and Stands
pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
docs.google.com/document/d/14_R9UFLN28p0gcpJWiXHztmrhdSswFbsi9H8uhnFrIs/edit

>Every part, in order
1 - docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 - docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 - docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg/edit?usp=sharing
6 - docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY/edit?usp=sharing
7 - docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ/edit?usp=sharing
8 - docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ/edit?usp=sharing

>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
pastebin.com/bsmui6f7
>Sup ForumsCo/ Comic
imgur.com/a/Un5xq

>Images
ccba.booru.org/

>Fighting Game
drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B0lqXHlZXEFTaFppZV96ejU5b2s&usp=sharing

>Voice Impressions
pastebin.com/DcZUTVx1

>Sup ForumsCo/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
youtube.com/playlist?list=PLLWEiXuZ9FOaYfU_0hIoo6qadB1yEO_Km

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So, guess I might as well pitch my part 6 revision, because nobody fuckin' likes it as-is. It's building on and switching around what we've got in the doc. (I didn't mean for it to get this long.)

BACKSTORY
>Following the mass production of Jawbreakers and corresponding increase in Stand user activity across the world, groups within Strickland and Interpol - albeit ones opposed by other members, such as Penny - become determined to find a way to better contain Stand-using criminals, an attitude that gains more traction after the events in Molly's Gamble and the Man of Murder Finale. The US Government agrees, even if they aren't as knowledgeable about the supernatural as Strickland or Interpol, and give them full license to do what they need to about it.
>Though nobody's quite sure how he first got into contact with Strickland or why he's trusted enough, the two organisations put into practice the plan of a mysterious third party known as the Warden, who aims to convert an ancient panopticon, Blackwater Prison [NOTE: Name of a prison from the GI Joe cartoon, since I don't know what we're going with] into a state-of-the-art jail facility to contain Stand users.
>The Warden has, in fact, had access to Pure Imagination for some time, but doesn't have what he needs to increase its scope across the world, and is collecting Stand users to try and find those whose powers he can use in conjunction with his own.
>Now, the Warden has cut off all communications with Interpol, and is limiting those with the government and Strickland to those absolutely required to obtain prisoners and propane tech. Interpol is obviously concerned by this, as they are with the apparent doctoring of prison files and the sending into Blackwater of more prisoners than it should be able to hold, and as such deploy one of their finest agents to try and discover what's going on.
(1/6)

ROUGH OUTLINE
(Story's split into two parts.)
PRISON SECTION
>Dora is brought to the prison by Ms Frizzle after being caught smuggling; as a suspected Stand user who refused to answer questions or confirm whether she possessed one, she isn't given a trial, and is taken to the prison alone.
>After her introduction scene, she fights and recruits Suzie, and then we get an introduction to the workings of the prison.
>Chapter in which Penny arranges a meeting with Dora, asking her to find out what's going on with the Warden in exchange for Interpol arranging a heavy reduction of her sentence. Dora is suspicious, but accepts; she secretly continues with her plans to break out, though, because she doesn't even know if she'll be able to discover what's up with the Warden. Penny secretly gives her a two-way communicator.
>Misadventures, fights, and investigations in the mundane prison, maybe recruiting another team member/some minor allies who don't end up completing the escape? Maybe they break into the evidence locker to get Dora's shit back, but it isn't there.
>Eventually, they discover some plot by the Warden that ISN'T Pure Imagination, instead being a red herring, that convinces Penny that he's gone completely rogue. (Planning to execute all Stand users regardless of crime, perhaps?) Dora persuades her to aid with the break-out, since the Warden wouldn't release them.
>With help from Penny, Dora's team initiates the breakout based on everything they've investigated; they manage to get out of the building, though their minor allies are taken out along the way
>Though the jailbreak is successful, just as they are about to leave the prison grounds, they are confronted by the Warden out of nowhere
>"Give up, /enano/. You're outnumbered, and there's no way you can stop us from escaping."
>"No way? Don't be so silly. You should use a bit of [IMAGINATION]!"
>The Warden opens a portal to Pure Imagination that sucks all the escaping prisoners in. End of act 1.
(2/6)

SUPERJAIL SECTION
(This part, I have fewer ideas for, which is a good thing since everyone else seems to have more ideas for Superjail than the normal prison.)
>Dora, Suzie, and whoever else they recruited in Blackwater land in Superjail. Illusory Warden welcomes them to a world of [PURE IMAGINATION].
>Our heroes are encounter the contents of Superjail for the first time - part gladiator tournament, part themepark, part riot, part Hunger Games. They take some time to explore and get their bearings, getting in a few fights along the way.
>After someone suggests that Dora's gear might be stored in Superjail somewhere, they go on a quest to find it; this introduces the staff area of Superjail, and culminates in the fight with and recruitment of Giffany.
>Fights, exploration of the jail, fights with inmates, trying to work out how to escape
>POSSIBLE: Some fights with guards leading to Dora and Suzie being thrown into the Supermax Security section, where they encounter the most dangerous Stand users in the jail, including Daffy Duck's sons. They have their arms twisted into agreeing to take the Supermax prisoners with them when they escape in exchange for their help.
>More fights, more planning.
>Eventually, they manage to rally the prisoners to riot and attack the staff area/guards, causing chaos. Through the riot, they slowly make their way to where the Warden is, fighting guards and holding off rioters along the way.
>Finally, they reach where the Warden is, who's finally putting his plan into action: with Jackknife and whoever else he's using to enhance Pure Imagination, he begins to project Superjail out into the real world. Dora and the others have to fight him, and possibly the likes of Dredd, as Pure Imagination and the real world begin to merge.
>Eventually, Pure Imagination is destroyed and everyone else is projected back into the world, you know the deal. Follow with either a Part 2-style where-are-they-now, or just a final teaser for part 7.
(3/6)

DAFFY'S SONS
>As it stands, Daffy's backstory has him eat the Stand jawbreaker, then immediately knock Tina up, then leave without ever knowing about Plucky. The main effect of this is that Plucky never knew his father; however, this means that Daffy having other sons won't work.
>I feel like Daffy's sons could be an interesting plot element (particularly the idea of Woody resenting his father and wanting to surpass him), so I'd propose that we move Daffy's backstory around as follows:
>Daffy spends 5-6 or so years with Tina, during which time his children are born; instead of leaving before Plucky is born, he leaves when Plucky is only one year old, so Plucky still doesn't remember his dad.
>Either he ate the jawbreaker before this time period, or only just before Plucky was concieved; I'd be inclined to go with the latter, because it would explain the WB only being interested in Plucky.
>This way, Plucky's relationship with his father isn't really affected, and rather than Daffy finding out that a son he never knew about surpassed him, he discovers that the son he abandoned surpassed him, which I think is more powerful.
>From the list of suggestions, I'd go with Woody Woodpecker, Gandy Goose, and Heckle and Jeckle, as they seem closest thematically to Daffy.
(4/6)

ASSORTED THOUGHTS
>"Waifu" theme and the Fetish Gangs should be toned down. We can still use most of the characters, though I think it'd be neat to bring in some more preschool cartoon and adult cartoon characters to complement Dora and Suzie/the Warden. We could allude to the waifu element by having an older inmate in Superjail refer to the Stand users as the Warden's "flavor of the month", as he's had different capture obsessions before, and what he really wants is to imprison everything.
>No gang fights. Really, we don't want more than two or three opponents per fight AT MOST.
>As Suzy exposits fairly early on, Blackwater doesn't only contain Stand users; in fact, over half of the prisoners don't possess them. However, near every criminal in the country known or suspected to have supernatural abilities is sent to Blackwater, and often from there into Superjail.
>In either Blackwater or Superjail, or both, there should be at least a few [RETIRED] villains from previous parts - WB higher-ups, members of the Lonely Hearts Club who managed to survive their beatings, et cetera.
>Relatedly, there's actually several prisoners who were arrested pretty much on the basis of having Stands on trumped-up charges, often thanks to those in the US government and Interpol who influenced the creation of the prison; such as Huey Freeman, arrested on terrorism charges for protesting against the government and possessing a Stand.
>In Superjail, the opponents tend to be stronger and smarter than in Blackwater, forcing the heroes to rely more on their wits and brains to win.
(5/6)

OPENING NARRATION
[Play through narration boxes over a montage of a prison bus winding its way through the landscape around the prison.]
>In the aftermath of the discovery of the Lonely Hearts Conspiracy and the fall of the Warner Brothers, elements within Interpol, the Strickland Foundation, and the United States Government became concerned with the threat posed by those possessing supernatural abilities; most prominently, Stands, those emanations of a being's essence attained through will or use of contraband Stand Jawbreakers.
>To ensure that dangerous Stand-using criminals could be safely contained, Interpol sought Strickland's experience with the supernatural in order to renovate Blackwater Prison, a defunct penal institution, to create a maximum security prison under the command of a mysterious Strickland contractor known only as the Warden.
>This project was known within the organisations responsible for it by a simple codename:
>Sup Forumsco/'S BIZARRE ADVENTURE PART 6: [TOON OCEAN]

Anyway, y'all, these are just the ideas I came up with while we slogged through part 5 to make the whole thing a bit more interesting. Pick and choose what you like or you don't. Get some discussion going.

Maybe instead of the waifu theme, the enemies could be linked to one of the previous parts: we already have Daffy's bastard sons, maybe a demon formely allied with the Red Guy, and a murderer connected to the LH club.

So what's the main party again? I know it's been established over and over about Dora, Suzie, and Giffany. Was there anyone else, that we missed?

I like a lot of this, but I'd suggest the prison be called Belle Reve after the DC comics super prison. Or Blackgate. Whichever. Blackwater Prison just doesn't flow I don't guess. It reminds me of that old pirate thing though, but as far as I'm aware, Warden doesn't socialize with pirates.

Also, what did you mean by
>They find out Warden ISN'T Pure Imagination
You aren't suggesting Pure Imagination is a sentient stand like F.F., are you? Because that's not very good.

Also, I do like Daffy's sons, and the idea you've suggested for them. Part of me would say fictional ducks would work better than just random birds, but I suppose it would be whatever. I REALLY do love Woody being a son, but the rest I feel a bit iffy on.

Be careful on that. Some of part 8's villains will be connected to earlier parts as per Ethan wanting to give himself more of a presence.

Currently Chernabog's daughters are assassins, and he has an assortment of abominations from earlier parts, and possibly a weakened TA.

Dor, Suzie, Giffany, Penny, and Toki and Pickles I think? Since it's starting from scratch, I guess we'll need to decide on that.

I do want some emphasis on Penny though. I have a few ideas for her. Seintercepts the prison as a spy for Interpol, and has a wristwatch communicator with the heads of interpol, who currently consist of

>Callie Briggs (her commanding officer)
>Major Monogram
>Jerry
>MOM
>White Knight
>Changed Daily

She also talks to an older Robert "Bobby" Hill over her phone. He works as a therapist for Interpol and talks with her when things get to rough. Like Rose in MGS4. Might provide insight on other inmates issues.

Plus we're putting in Dinosaur Dan from The First Bad Man as a call forward to the Scope Men, right?
We could have one enemy linked to each of the other parts, including the upcoming ones. Not necessarily as the full on theme of the part, but as a reference.
Gaz and Toki were planned to be in the party, but the former was changed to a guard, and I don't know what's going on with the Metalocalypse gang.
I guess people just gotta suggest characters.

It makes sense. But if anything, Why not call it [Super Ocean]?

But besides that, this is perfect user-kun.

They appear in the prison, but they are more like Mandark's fight than anyting else. The protags didnt fight them in their parts (Except maybe Penny recognize one or two LHC guys), and the villains don't recognize them either.

We had more, but I really like that we ditched a lot of the other ones.

Giffany has potential in my eyes. After all she had true sentience in her own universe but still got murdered in cold blood. We can go somewhere with that.

Isn't Jerry long dead by now?

Yeah, that's fair. I picked an obscure one, but it doesn't really flow too well, so we can change it.
You're misreading that line:
>they discover some plot by the Warden
>that ISN'T Pure Imagination

The idea's that they're non-ducks and, for the brief time that Daffy was still in their lives, he gave preferential treatment to Plucky for being a duck, which is part of why Woody's such a yandere nutcase.

I was just suggesting super spy characters. I didn't know he was referenced earlier.

I guess it could be an AI, like Alfred from the oh so wonderful Batman and Robin.

That makes more sense.

>Why not call it [Super Ocean]?
I thought it'd be too much of a coincidence for Strickland's project and the Warden's secret plot to have the same name. Again, it probably doesn't matter, and we should go with whichever name people like better.
>I do want some emphasis on Penny though. I have a few ideas for her.
Oh, yeah, I had a few too. Here:
>After the cast is forced into [PURE IMAGINATION], Penny's communicator no longer works. She manages to get through using [MAIL-UPGRADE IT] (an ability she discovered in between parts 4 and 6), which lets her connect to any communication device that she understands the workings of, no matter where it is; however, since she needs to actively use the ability for it to work, this means she can only contact Dora, not the other way round.
>We need a scene where Penny's fighting off Jailbots by using Technologic to disassemble the safety features on their fuel tanks, and detonating them with well placed bullets.

>Isn't Jerry long dead by now?
I think is the one from Totally spies

That was my intent.

Should Callie Briggs be siblings or at least related to Tom, seeing as they're both cats who get shit done? Her motivation for sending an agent to Superjail can stem from sympathizing with the experiences of Tom, who in this universe is her brother/cousin/uncle/whatever, who has went face-to-face with the megalomaniac M.E. LeTerally and suspects that The Warden is trying to plan another goal of stand-driven world domination.

Someone suggested a while back that the deaths of Stand users inside Pure Imagination be used to fuel it. Given all the unexplained resurrections in Superjail, how about...
>When a Stand user dies within [PURE IMAGINATION], the Warden will choose to either revive them, or convert them and their soul into a [FIGMENT]. [FIGMENTS] will be destroyed utterly, consumed to increase the power of Pure Imagination.

well, we made Johnny bang a humanoid cat, and Callie is more anthropomorfic than Tom. Maybe as cousins, given the different surnames.
I also had the idea that she was the unseen secretary of Patrick in part 5, stealing data right next to the big boss.

That's slightly disturbing if Warden can erase someone from existence.

After the Warden is defeated, perhaps everyone killed inside will be revived somehow, but they won't be like who they once were. Their entire history and life is changed. Could be a reference to Made in Heaven without the universe reset.

I know we shouldn't try to do a 1:1, but could it be that Dora was framed in some way? Like she had a previous criminal record but was trying to reform herself, but through some misunderstanding she gets sent to prison?

So can the other Stand using main villains. Daffy overwrites people with himself, Fred can cut people out of existing, Red Guy can do what he wants to people's souls after they die, Nobody retcons people away, and Ethan wants to erase reality. I just wanted him to be able to do something that fits the theme.
If it helps, he can only do it to people who have already died.
How about she's trying to get out of the criminal lifestyle, and takes on one last job smuggling the jawbreakers so she can start a new life in the US?
She wants to provide for her grandma.

Since we're at part 6 now, I'm gonna repost my reworked Vicky suggestion:

User: Vicky (The Fairly OddParents)
Stand: 『SID VICIOUS』 (Sex Pistols lead singer)
Appearance:, 『SID VICIOUS』 resembles an Araki-fied Jason Voorhees with Sid Vicious' hairstyle, with the hockey mask cut in half from the nose down, exposing its mouth which constantly bares large, sharp teeth and dripping with blood. Its body would be covered in barbed wire and multiple scars/wounds, as well as V-shaped motifs and spikes.

Ability: Causes and multiplies collateral damage caused by attacks done by either Vicky or 『SID VICIOUS』, including focused weapons. For example, punching a single person in the face would cause him/her to have dozens of punch wounds all over their body with the same damage as the original punch, or even be spread to other people in the area, as if she is punching multiple people at once, but the damage done is reduced based on the distance of her (stand) and her victims(s). Applicable to all forms of destructive actions. Vicky has free control over which area/direction the collateral damage will spread.

>Stats
>Destructive Power: S
>Durability: A
>Speed: A
>Range: C (manifestation range)
>Precision: B
>Developmental Potential: A

>Role: Part 6 as a Supermax inmate who gives the MCs a run for their money, similar to alt Diego Brando and 『THE WORLD』 from SBR.

Excuse my poor MS paint skills on the stand. Vicky pic is by anordinarymage.

I WAS going to suggest Commissioner Gordon as an Interpol head too, and one of the ones Penny consults with. Over time though, he begins going completely insane and it turns out that it was really the Warden disguising himself as Gordon in order to spy on her, but I wasn't too sure about it.

Feels a bit unnecessary, but I don't know. Plus I can't think of a reason for him to be an active contact with Interpol, moreso than the others. Callie is her boss and Bobby is her counselor.

She's in jail for murdering Timmy, right?
I dunno about having her be like alt Diego, though. I mean, he was the final boss. That seems a little prominent for her.

Maybe add Amanda Waller to the Interpol heads? She's an asshole, but she's also one of the ones who was pushing the most for an investigation of Superjail.

She's more of a mid-boss I'd say.

Either fought at the end of the Jail arc or the start or mid-way of the Superjail arc.

She's just a difficult opponent the heroes overcome. She's nowhere near the last though.

Part 6 is now? Hooray! Reposting my suggestion from a few threads ago:

I suggest that Gaz should control her stand as if she is playing an RPG character in a video game, and that she has two parts to her stand; one's a "controller" resembling a portable video game device, and the other is the stand itself resembling what's in the original description, with its eyes giving a first-person view that is broadcasted to the controller. Her stand gets progressively stronger as she "levels up" by defeating or killing more "monsters" i.e. inmates, without a set limit.

In most video games, the RPG character is usually given a set amount of lives or sometimes only one which means game over if they lose, but Gaz has basically "hacked" her "video game" stand; it has infinite lives, and when it's "defeated", it simply respawns back at a checkpoint, usually beside Gaz, with no damage transmitted to her, as a nod to how infallible she is in IZ. The stand can only be truly defeated by knocking out Gaz herself, but how to get to her (and then confronting her infallibleness) is another question entirely.

Her cold and apathetic nature means she treats the world around her as if they were nothing but mechanics in a video game; she treats objects as if they were obstacles or breakables containing loot, inmates as monsters that give XP and more loot, and her own colleagues as if they were NPCs or expendable party members.

It would work because it allows her to sit back in a closed room, working as if she is playing a real-life video game and casually eating pizza, without having to deal with unnecessary shenanigans such as interacting with other people.

>towards the end Warden!Gordon keeps encouraging Penny to do horrible things "for the mission"
>"Do it Penny! Rape this joker!"

Or because she's so dangerous to the MCs, the Warden revives her later and gives her and her stand steroids, causing even her stare to decapitate heads.

I could see her being the last user fought at the end of the "normal" jail portion. At first it seems as though Dora and Co. have beaten the last threat, then comes Superjail.

Part 6 ED and/or name of the chapter where Dora gets her Stand.
youtube.com/watch?v=32G4wn13LxU

So what's the verdict on Dredd's stand? A lot of people especially from cripplechan didn't like it; they said it was a shittier version of The Lock:

「I AM THE LAW」 (Anthrax song)
Ability: Dredd's stand amplifies or reduces damage done by people and stands based on their "sense of justice", i.e. if the user has a high sense of justice, they will deal much more damage and take less damage from those with a low sense of justice, and vice versa. This justice system is based on "true justice" (doing the right thing), not personal justice (i.e if a person's sense of justice would involve them doing harm to others for personal gain, the stand would treat them as if they had low justice).

At his max power, [Pure Imagination] can target the whole world. When he is defeated the surviving inmates are scattered across the globe and the Panopticon blows up, giving the impression that there were no survivors, this fuels the public outrage and puts the elections in Nobody's bag.

A lot of that stuff further up the thread I'm going to go through later, and a lot of it I'm going to either butcher or outright toss out (like Daffy's bastard sons, I'm pretty sure we decided we weren't doing that).

Anyway, here's some ideas I had for part 6:

It begins on the prison bus ride to Super Jail.

There are only three, maybe four people on the bus (excluding the driver), all female. Dora is one of them, she got caught trying to transport jawbreakers across boarders, but then she tried to eat the contraband when she was captured. She has yet to awaken her stand.

Something happens to the bus, one of the other prisoners on it did something to make it crash on its side. They're trying to escape, one of them is stuck in the bus.

Whoever did it runs off, but then they are quickly brought back, beaten and bloody by game boy. Dora and the other prisoner who wasn't pinned also get a lighter beating from him. Whoever was pinned is spared his wrath since GB saw no attempt to escape made by them.

The bus is righted and they're back on their way to Super Jail.

One of the prisoners on the bus is actually an undercover Interpol agent.

Dora discovers she has a stand in the prison, there's a prison riot, a lock down, the Warden declares the Hunger Games are in effect.

Penny wouldn't be under cover, she'd get trapped in the jail when it goes into lock down during a prison riot. She was visiting one of their undercover agents at the time.

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Every time a stand user dies in [Pure Imagination] the canon is sounded and a live video broadcast is played of the Warden wearing a large wig doing a Caesar Flickerman impersonation as he talked about their best moments, their short comings, dashed expectations, and whatever other whimsical bullshit he feels like rattling off to taunt the survivors.

cont.

What if the Rescue Rangers or Rescuers Society are like a spy branch of Interpol and they have agents in the jail hiding in the wall?
This is on top of having undercover agents are prisoners.

I really just want to set up a joke about there being two agent Gadgets in the jail: Penny Gadget and Gadget Hackwrench. But that can be scrapped if we don't want to have Gadget Hackwrench in part 6. I still think having agents in the walls as part of a support network for the undercover agents would be a good idea.

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The cartoon "The First Bad Man" is about the world's first criminal and how cavemen built the first jail to contain him. At the end of the cartoon it switches to modern day (1940s/50s) where the jail still stands and the narrator is revealed to be the criminal, still imprisoned in it, who asks something like "When are you gonna let me out?" while a tear rolls down his face.

What if the Warden builds his jail on top of the first jail ever built by human kind and the first criminal from the short is still alive because he's a Scopeman (our Stoneman equivalent)?

I don't think we should just copypaste the whole Hunger Games idea right into this part; otherwise it'll just be a glorified Hunger Games session thread

>especially from cripplechan
Why do we care?
They might have a point, though. "X gets stronger based on Y" Stands are pretty overdone.

Wasn't saying we would, but I do want to take something from those threads and stick it in here where applicable since we've been big on the "meme magic".

>a lot of it I'm going to either butcher or outright toss out (like Daffy's bastard sons, I'm pretty sure we decided we weren't doing that).
People seemed pretty evenly split.

Don't call it Hunger Games then, call it "Free-for-all" or "Battle Royale" since its basically more of a direct gladiatorial fight wih (Super)jail as the Colosseum.

I had an idea for the design of [Little Girls], that is, if it is still spearing in Super Ocean.

Typically it either manifests as a humanoid figure made of black hands or a swarm of black hands in a cloud of dark purple smoke.

When anyone who isn't the user enters the smoke, they lose any ability to see where they are going or even walk in a straight line.

I still think his "fight" should be the first one Dora has. A scene where he gropes her and she mutilates him.

It could be done as a reference to this.

Also, be careful to reference it as "Hunger Games" too much often. Sup Forums's mods are still un-friendly with those threads since last year, as sometimes threads get autosaged just for having the HG term.

>One of the prisoners on the bus is actually an undercover Interpol agent.
Why would they need to recruit or work with Dora, then?

How about just if they die?

It makes repeat fights interesting and makes EVERYONE really not want to lose.

I like this.

Just because of your dedication to having this work, we ate going to use this man.

I vote to have it now. No matter how OP it may be. That'll just make the fight funner.

And she ends up raping the Clown from Astro City instead.

I agree

That and the psychedelics he gave out like candy.

The odd child of Kronk and Amelia.

It issad that Kronk couldn't keep it in his oven mitts.

3 ideas.

-keep Daffy's kids.

-fuck the hunger games ideas

-SEVERELY limit interpol. They're still allies. Espionage should be made by an expendable few.

I like this too. Her brutality here is what makes Suzie like her.

Also, Robo-Dale plays the role as a Strickland rep.?

Makes sense. I still want to keep his fight against Giffany.

They have a Battle Royal in Superjail though, otherwise it's just them standing around doing nothing. Warden NEEDS the inmates murdering each other, and a free for all tournament is the quickest way to resolve that. And Interpol is only interacted with by Penny who talks to them Metal Gear style with her wristwatch communicator. Sometimes they provide useful insight onto her situation.

She loses contact with them when sucked into Pure Imagination though. Except Gordon if we're using that thing.

Why not this guy?

Prison riot, fire forged alliances.

We spent a fourth of a thread going over how that was stupid. There's no reason why he'd have bastard sons and there's no reason why any such bastard sons would be in the prison in the first place.

The alternative is The Warden has Professor Membrane injecting birds with Daffy's DNA for shits and giggles.

Some of the Hunger Games stuff could work - I like the idea of the Warden going on long, rambling rants over the intercom after people die - but otherwise, yeah.

Why would it be stupid, though?
And in all the actual contributions to the idea beyond "uuuuhh daffy has some sons and uhh theyre in superjail", they're his legitimate sons. Keep up.

Having Woodpecker as a unhinged lunatic, you can say he was caught after a failed attempt on Plucky's life, that he wants to be the only son of Daffy

>There's no reason why he'd have bastard sons
Prior to the La Cucaracha plot, he wanted sons to feed his ego and leave a legacy.
>there's no reason why any such bastard sons would be in the prison in the first place
They turned to crime after he left them.
These have been suggested before, man, and there wasn't really any arguments against them. If people on the whole don't want them, fine, but don't try to insist people were unanimously against before.

Just got back from the paraplegic ward. Here's what they said:

>Dredd's Stand basically works the same but with the target's "sense of true Justice" rather than guilt, the target will become weaker over time just and potentially kill you just like The Lock. Polite sage because this thread is sentenced to Death and OP is up for 20 years in the Iso-cubes for being a faggot

I'm going to try my hand at an outline

>Bus ride to prison
>Failed escape attempt
>Arrive at the prison, Warden does his greeting to new inmates
>Dora meets her cellmate who beats the crap out of her using a stand that she keeps hidden from the Warden
>Daily life at jail, establish the hierarchy of Superjail
>Establish who the top dog gang leader prisoner is (I'm thinking Daolon Wong from Jackie Chan Adventures)
>There is only ONE gang, either you take orders from the gang leader or your life is a worse hell
>Dora gets roped into some bad shit by them
>Plan is the get her into the lower level punishment chambers to get her to confirm if a certain person is down there or not
>Unlocks her stand while in the shitty punishment levels
>Finds "the first bad man" who explains stands to her in more detail (she had only passing knowledge of them before despite trafficking something that gave people stands) and the history of the prison
>Get back up topside, confirm "the first bad man" is down there
>Get start a war against the ONE gang in the prison
>Gets visited by Penny from Interpol
>Penny wants to cut her a deal, she'll get her support and a trial if Dora cooperates with her
>Prison riot breaks out, Dora has to help Penny escape the prison
>Penny gets out, Dora and whatever Brojos we have get wrist watches
>War on the ONE gang continues
>Eventually the prison staff catch on that they're stand users
>Warden throws them all into Pure Imagination which is like a messed up death game amusement park
>Still in contact with Penny

That's as far as I'm getting with what we have right now in the cliff notes.

Feel free to rip it apart.

I don't like the Daffy's sons idea but I do like this.

Alright then.

I can do with the fighting. Having the announcements is unnecessary. He isn't broadcasting this.

Why not make Dredd a muscular Hol Horse and give him Lucky Luke's Stand?

Meld this with the other stuff we have. Rework the Jackie Channel guy, and you're golden.

>He isn't broadcasting this.
Or is he?

The Warden is crazy enough to be broadcasting the carnage somewhere.

Have his "sons" be revealed to not be his at all?

It could work. At first you think they are. Then it's revealed theyre not

In the Combaticus episode of Superjail, he made all the inmates that didn't participate of the coliseum games to watch them.

You can say he does coliseum-like games two times per week in the prison as a way to entertain the prisoners.

I kinda need the ONE gang leader to be someone old for what I'm thinking.

Which is, Daolon Wong is a former apprentice of Yzma's. He's in the prison because he wants to talk to "the first bad man" a Scopeman, a cousin to the Pillarmen, to find out where the other Scopemen are hiding. Even if the first bad man has been in prison for 50,000 years, he can still tell which direction the other Scopemen are in.

That's a good way to lose his allies.

It's not crazy. It's retarded.

The way we're making the Warden, he's less of a crazy authoritan and more of a lolsorandumb xP fuck.

Basically. Fuck. The. Hunger. Games.

How'd he get involved with a Pillar Lady?

If it's an internal thing. I think it works.

What does that add, though?
Feels like a lot of these "compromises" miss the point, somewhat. The sons concept, other than being a part 6 parallel and being a source of powerful Stand users, is meant to illustrate what a shitty guy Daffy was - a neglectful father who played favourites and knowingly abandoned his kids. Them being criminals shows how much a shitty childhood can mess someone up.

>He isn't broadcasting this.
Yeah, but 99% of stuff in Superjail is just the Warden amusing himself in stupid ways.

Exactly. Then why does he need to make the commentary with nods to Hunger Games?

You don't think we can do better than ripping off a shit type teen novel?

Well, the Flickerman impression and cannon sounding is just an unnecessary reference. It's stupid and should be cut.
Once you cut that away, there's nothing that really ties it to HG, since there wasn't any commentary or retrospectives in the books.

Warden wouldn't want to stick with one type of broadcast anyway, he'd get bored too quickly. He'd probably switch it up every bout to keep himself amused. Like, one match he does that hunger games shit, but the next he's talking like a WWE announcer or an auctioneer or something. From what I remember from Superjail, Warden's main goals are "imprison everything" and "have fun doing it". Correct me if I'm wrong.

Internship on his way to becoming a dark chi wizard?
Or maybe he's a rouge pillarman with his own ambitions.

He's probably going to die in Pure Imagination though.

I like the idea of him being a Pillar Man if we're doing the villains with links to other parts shit.

Exactly. It should be FUN. I think youre getting it.

A pillarman with an OP stand.

I love it.

So, uh, Stand suggestions are open, huh?
Here's one that I'm very sorry for.
Mr. Pickles
Stand: [INSTINCTUS BESTIALIS]
>Appearance: A red, glowing sigil of Baphomet appearing behind Mr Pickles' head like a halo.
>Ability: When someone has performed an act that Mr. Pickles believes to be deserving of punishment, his Stand will activate, giving him incredible strength and dexterity solely for the purpose of punishing that person. This allows him to bend iron bars to pursue them, for instance, or to surgically mutilate and modify victims as punishment.
>Generally, Mr. Pickles will not attack people for the crimes they committed to end up in Blackwater Prison, as they're already being punished, but his boundary for what behaviour is enough to require additional punishment varies wildly depending on his whims. Additionally, he will generally allow the Warden (or those acting on his orders) to bring prisoners into [PURE IMAGINATION] if they wish to. Mr. Pickles can move freely between the "real world" and [PURE IMAGINATION].
>Role: The Warden's beloved dog. Seen early on with all the inmates shitscared of him, pursues the BroJos and kills one of their allies during the first escape, and finally has the shit murdered out of him during the attack on the Warden's office.

Hey, if we're using adult cartoon characters like says...

>Sup Forums project
>adds retarded Sup Forums meme

>complains about Sup Forums memes in a Sup Forums project.
>using an Sup Forums image.

>Dexter's on the stand now.
>"Ze damage to ze city from ze demons pooshing ze tower over must haff keeled thousands of people. Buildeengs crushed by ze rubble, collapseeng from ze shockwave... and for no reason. Zey could have fought us without it, but zey keeled all zose people to make a point."
>He pulls his glasses off and wipes them, shaking his head in disgust. "I only weesh ze Red Guy had offered us zees "deal" before zat happened."
>Lydia questions him about the deal. "He said zat eef we defeated zem in a Stand battle, zey would be banished from ze Earth for a thousand years and a day. I just regret zat it happened too late to save ze city."
>"OBJECTION!" Monstroso stands in the Phoenix Wright pose.
Which one? This project is so full of shitty memes that I lose track.

Fuck, sent that before I finished. Oh well.
>Monstroso triumphantly points out that, under the terms of the deal, the Red Guy needs to be defeated in a Stand battle to be banished; and WITHOUT his official banishment, the court does not have the authority to punish him.
>The entire court starts yelling and disputing this. "Order! ORDER!"
>Jack distorts into an enormous, nightmarish skeleton monster. "ORDER IN COURT!"
>Everyone in the courtroom gets shocked white youtube.com/watch?v=SF_hfyIvids
>Jack sits back down. "I'm afraid that Mr. Monstroso is right. We technically cannot punish the Red Guy unless he is banished - which means that the Urban Rangers need to have defeated him in a Stand battle. Unless you can prove otherwise, Ms. Deets..."
>Lydia is thinking, looking seriously annoyed. Suddenly, though:
>"'scuse me, your honor?"
>Jack looks down. "Oh? What's this?"
>Plucky is standing up. "I may not yet have beaten the Red Guy's Stand, but... you were only able to take him to court right because I summoned you with Wayward Son. Right?"
>The jury are murmuring to each other.
>"Because of that, if he's found guilty here, you could consider that a victory for me in our battle."
>"Aha! Excellent reasoning, Mr. Duck! I'll allow that line of thought."
>Red Guy yells at Monstroso "Is it even legal for him to butt in like that!?"
>Monstroso is flipping furiously through a book of Underworld Law

>Jack allows the jury to leave to make their verdict. Squidward whispers to Plucky "Now, we just have to wai-"
>The jury immediately returns. Hank Hill stands up at the front. "This jury finds the Red Guy to be God-dang guilty of all charges!"
>Jack bangs his gavel. "Then I sentence him to one thousand years and one day in his own personal hell." Beetlejuice pulls a lever, and a trapdoor opens below Red Guy, and he plummets, screaming, into a firey hell.
>Hank: "That's a clean-burnin' hell, I tell ya hwat."
Now there's the post-trial conversations... if anyone's willing to contribute to those, please do. Otherwise, after that, we'll be done with part 5, at last.

>Heckle and Jeckle
Their Stands should be [DR. HECKYLL] and [MR. JIVE].

Welp, here I go with my suggestion.

>Stand User: Julie Winters (from MTV's The Maxx and the comic book of the same name)
>Stand Name: [WELCOME TO THE JUNGLE] - named after the song by Guns N Roses.
>Stand Appearance: a giant purple humanoid wearing a contorted mask
>Ability: Julie and her stand can enter and bring foes into [THE OUTBACK], An alternate reality resembling a fictitious version of Australia filled with very alien and dangerous wildlife. While in [THE OUTBACK] Julie and her stand become their alter egos, [JUNGLE QUEEN] and [THE MAXX] and are given enhanced strength, durability, senses and reflexes a hundred times beyond that of their previous senses and Julie, while as [JUNGLE QUEEN] can control a herd of leopards and Julie's stand, [THE MAXX] is independent while in [THE OUTBACK] and can attack and think as a separate being but still usually acts as Julie's defender however, [THE OUTBACK] is filled with highly dangerous wildlife that both Julie, her stand and their opponents are under the mercy of, Julie and her Stand are unable to manipulate [THE OUTBACK] itself or it's wildlife (besides leopards) and can be attacked by them. The longer they stay in [THE OUTBACK] the more they believe they are their alter egos. In addition, [THE OUTBACK] also changes depending on Julie's current mental state, if she is angry or depressed, [THE OUTBACK] will become a dark and contorted wasteland and Julie becomes a hateful and helpless being that only brushes a doll's hair while her stand can still attack and defend her independently but is severely weakened due to being directly linked to Julie's mental state. If Julie is feeling helpless or powerless she'll become a child while the Maxx is reduced to a skull, while in this form Julie is capable of lowering her foe's defenses and simply talk to them.
Power - B>A
Speed - C>B
Range - E>D
Durability - B>A
Precision - E>E
Potential - C>C

>Their Stands should be [DR. HECKYLL] and [MR. JIVE].
>Not(The System of) [DOCTOR TARR] and [PROFESSOR FETHER]
Shame on you.
youtube.com/watch?v=TrOQ3GKmIBk

I wanted to broach the idea of Swiper being the catalyst for Dora as well as a few of her cartel's members' incarceration by acting as a mole either for a rival cartel or as an undercover DEA/ICE agent. After Dora gets the map of the caches, he sets up the raid that gets her and a good few members caught. Still deciding if he should be one of the Warden's plants on the outside, keeping Stand users coming into the jail and Pure Imagination by extension.

Goldie O'Glit
Stand: [COLD HEART OF THE KLONDIKE]/[NIGHTWISH]/[ECSTASY OF GOLD]
>Appearance: A punchghost wearing Scrooge McDuck's "King of the Klondike" outfit
>Ability: Goldie's Stand can use its pickaxe as a dowsing rod, allowing it to search for various things: precious metals and jewels (such as on jewelry), underground items (buried treasure, underground rivers, etc), and supernatural entities (such as Stand users).
>Role: Minor ally in Part 7. Scrooge McDuck's old lover.
youtube.com/watch?v=j7JwprGVSjA

Maybe he used them as a scapegoat to get the cops off his trail while halfway through Texas, or something.

It might not be that OP, but a pillarman with a stand would be pretty OP even if it turns out to be a shit stand.

Not sure what his stand would do, but it'd have to be something discreet to avoid the Warden having already chucked him into Pure Imagination.

I figure Beetlejuice conversation with Plucky would be last.

So who else gets talked to and by whom?
Does Jerry say some words to Taffy?

We have

Jerry and Taffy (have fun MoC ;) )
The coco's meet up and have a moment.
Daffy meets his son and admits he didn't give a shit about him and his mom in life. And although he can never be truly sorry for that, and cant honestly say he would do things differently given the chance, he can see now it was pretty shit type of him.

I like it.

Part 7 has the cast exploring western themes and adventures in between psychedelic episodes with inner city jives and hallucinagens.

How about
>Squidward, Dexter, Toph
>Gadget, Rex, and Morocco
>Jerry and Taffy
>Courage, Hank and Johnny with the Urban Rangers as a whole
>Plucky and Beetlejuice
>Plucky and Daffy (already done)
In that order? Gives us the more personal conversations, the Generations Of Heroes, and then the ending.

And here's a stupid one.

Part: Sup Forumsrge Sup Forumsstar
Name: K'nox "Knuckles In A Hat" The Praetorian (AU Knuckles)
Stand: [ASSASSIN'S CREED]*
>Appearance: A ghostly trail of Knuckles' ancestors following after him.
>Ability: [REVELATIONS]: When Knuckles punches someone using Revelations, he will retroactively insert himself or one of his ancestors into a point their background/history, changing both their past and his. This effect is cumulative, allowing him to significantly alter the past by punching someone multiple times.
>Its secondary ability, [BROTHERHOOD], allows Knuckles to insert people into others' pasts if he has altered their histories previously, based on the number of times he punched them; for example, if he punched Hank Hill five times and altered his past in five places, he could then insert Hank into others' histories to a maximum of five times.
*I know the current plan is to use book names, but I feel like using vidya would be funnier; using books instead of films feels like a bit of a reversion.

My thinking was that, since the plot of Sup Forumsrge is still pretty up in the air, we could include a plotline of the villain being aware that the story isn't canon, and planning to fuse the Sup Forumsrge timeline with the Sup Forumsco/ timeline to force himself into canonicity, with K'nox being part of that. Maybe the timeline diversion point was Knuckles obtaining his Stand, and the other differences in canon are due to the butterfly effects of its use.

I had almost forgotten about human Gadget's ghost. He is supposed to have some kind of message for Rex and Morocco to pass along.