The actual problem with the video is that it's wrong. The best thing in BvS are the moments, no one is really saying that Zach (albeit a hack, they might say) didn't deliver decent to good visuals.
The problem with BvS, as numerous threads and posts here and elsewhere have stated was, pure and simple: lack of narrative focus.
Pacing, dialogue (or lack thereof), decisions made on what to cut and include (whether specious, necessary or unnecessary, or simple plot seeding for future films), etc. and more along these lines all deal with narrative. Which is supposed to be the point of story-telling.
Which is what a film is - another form of story-telling. Avant garde films do have a form of narrative. It may not be traditional and you may find it confusing, but that doesn't mean it's not there.
Random images strung together is just a different way of saying:
dialogue was omitted/dialogue was never written/dialogue wasn't considered necessary/editing was too severe/material was not included/editing was confusing
In other words, as narrative, the film failed. Using 'moments vs. story' is idiotically simplistic. Any visual medium is going to include moments and even the very worse versions of them will include memorable moments.
IF all anything offers IS just those moments (memorable or otherwise) then YES, it is a failure (as narrative and otherwise). But if it's simple moments, memorable or otherwise, and incoherence, poor pacing, etc., then it's just a shitty film because they screwed up the narrative, not because, like every other visual medium out there, it included moments.