The OC thread we had yesterday was preemptively deleted for some reason

The OC thread we had yesterday was preemptively deleted for some reason.
Since the last one never actually ended naturally, here's a new one.
Post your characters and maybe talk a bit about them. Ask each other questions! World-build! Maybe even give each other fanart!
HAVE A GOOD TIME.

I'm writing a comic about WWII GIs fighting monsters from Doom

Give me names

Dick Kickem

John Stalvern

Frank Hardoff

Aron Cibor

issac yankem

What is your opinion on the design of this character? What needs work? What would YOU change?

Clay Jackson

Make it more androgynous. The head is too round, make it more slick.

Something about the lack of a nose and the head shape is a little unnerving to me, but the rest is endearing.

top of the head is very round, giving me an impression that without the hat she will look like one of those middle-aged balding dudes with a ring of hair
but the hat mostly covers it up

don't know honestly how i'd make the design different
possibly claws thicker eyebrows and a small fluffy tail like a deer
but thats a personal preference im not an expert in character design

Would you add a chin, or at least a point at the bottom of the head to curb the roundness, or something else? Also, more androgynous- that's interesting. Any particular reason behind it, or just personal preference?

Too wide?

Claws could be interesting for her. Also, she has a goofy looking tuft of hair on top of her head, which is why she wears the hat.


Any other thoughts on the design? I'm generally curious.

Play around with the head shape, you can perhaps make it shape like an arrow. The reason for my suggestion for going more androgynous is because the head and body seem incoherent. I think it will make the character more organic if you go with that approach.

A few other head shapes

Bottom right is quite interesting.

I like the top right one, try to draw her her with a chin. Maybe it will help.

bottom right is more interesting stylistically in my opinion

The head doesn't really fit the body. Either make the body more cartoony, or the head more human.

And here's some of Vivian, another character of mine. Thoughts?

I'm waiting for others to show off their OCs, it's part of the fun of these threads

Thank you all for your help and ideas!

She's big boned. I like her. She could do well without the gloves. Too similiar to Dexter's mom.

This character is a minor antagonist in a space opera setting; she's a Russo-mongolian mercenary with cybernetic arms that give her enhanced strength, and a neural implant that inhibits pain.
I can't draw mechanical parts for shit though so I can't really finish the design.

For mechanical parts, I'd either streamline and make them more organic looking, or study how others draw them.

I think that the implant is something that you could really push, especially as a weakness later on.

BIGGER ASS

Here are my thoughts.
Vivian is fucking adorable.

Oh my goodness. She looks great in your style!

Hope this thread sticks around till i can draw my OCs myself, so maybe...2 years give or take.

Reposting my beaver gril from the last thread. Might try to draw more before this thread goes down and post it.

I need to dig out my sketchbook sometime tonight. I had an idea for a super-villain-in-training who had no actual super powers, but instead survived super villain boot camp by becoming besties with some of the villains, and becoming useful to the rest of them.

theres also VERY MINIMAL LORE if anyone wants to actually hear about the characters/setting

I already posted these two good boys on the last two threads, so hi again. He makes self-help/instructional VHS tapes with the help of his puppet pals and blahblahblah.

Don't say anything about the hands, I already know

And that's it, I'm working on a proper ref sheet for them tonight. Hopefully it'll show off their personality better, even though I'm not 100% how I want to portray the bear puppet yet haha

I won't let Jim die as he has got a few drawings from the draw thread.
I was there in the beanface thread where he was drawn. I wrote a few stories about him and the artist liked it alot, haven't heard from him since.
I'll post the others too.

So Far We Have Jimmy, And Snake-Gal[Needs a Name]
There is a boy with a gator tail, but he was scrapped for lore purposes.

Hello


please I want a request from one of my original characters (oc 's)

What you used to do that lineart?

Mina, Jimmy's Mother, A Happy go-lucky foil to Jimmy's edginess, But there seems like she's hiding something as she is friends with some shady looking characters....

A few months ago I tried to see how hard it would be to draw decent stuff with a mouse.

Needless to say its possible but hard as fuck and takes way too long.

Here is a random robot, never finished it, couldn't come up with an idea for its legs.

Wheels

I've seen you post these is a couple threads. I love them, especially the colors and expressions. Is there somewhere that we can follow your progress with them?

I'd like to hear it!

No time like the present to practice.

May or may not pursue this design, but I doodled a candlewax gal a little while back.

thought those hands were BOOBS

>There is a boy with a gator tail, but he was scrapped for lore purposes.
you monster! alligators are awesome.

There He Is on the left, the reason he was scrapped is because all people have animal tails, but only animals on the chinese zodiac,Each race has a few strengths and weaknesses.

So the antagonists from something I've been working are basically a horde plant monsters, and I'd like some more ideas on what else I could have in there. Bonus points if it's not based off something carnivorous.

Quick list of what I have so far:
>A dandelion hydra
>A giant tree golem
>A shapeshifting mass of kudzu vines
>Seeds that link together to form structures
>Tulip not-xenomorphs
>Exploding pinecone suicide bombers

Repostan from the old thread. What do you think of these two character designs?

1/2

Also, what should they be named?

2/2

As for Villains, There Was an Idea of having a shadowy figure known as the monkey king. But we do have Jim's rival Dan. An arrogant pretty-boy dragon-tail, he's quite skilled at fighting and using dragon-tail abilities. but his pride makes him gullible.
As for his look was a fusion of Silver(Pokemon) And Jack Spicer. I think his look would benefit from a poker aesthetic.

This is Steve, from my comic "Steve the Depressed Musician"

Basically, Steve's a sad man that makes music that no one around him relates to.

Rough page practice

>captcha: avenue avenue

Chad Dickinson

I made these two a long time ago, what should I name them? It's a boy and a girl based on the crow family. They are also thevies like those damn birds.

Just finished this about 10 minutes ago, my arms hurt.
I think Hogan or Slick or something smooth like that would work for the boy. Not sure about the girl.

I actually like those names, what's your guys name

Luna Knight for now. I'm still thinking out the little details about her, but I know she's not going to be a major character for anything.

Is she a villian?

Chaotic Neutral, she's just kind of out for herself.

i don't post in these threads because everyone picks me apart and makes fun of me

post it anyway, at least you'll get some attention

>having OCs
>ever

That's pretty cool user, I'd like to see more of her.

>Making your own original characters for your own original works.
>Ever.

This is either bait, or you have the wrong idea about these threads.

This thread is only fishing for compliments and dick sucking.

Make up, Movies,Tv shows, and clothes are made for the same reason user.

Is something bothering you, user?

duh
why else would you post your oc here

>making an OC for anything but pornographic purposes

...

thats why i made my ocs
so my friends could draw porn of them
and i would post the porn too if it wasnt a blue board

I keep wondering if I should go straight lewd with my OCs, but I feel like it'd be weird.

I mean, that's only a small part of the fun for me.

wheres the lewds blog dabble

>making an OC for non-lewd stuff only to only use them for porn anyways

Big McLargeHuge

I want to write about a character that has a super-esque form (something that gives 'em a power boost for a limited time, but different than your DBZ shit). But I know that's your average, cringy, uninspired, character ability.

How do I make it work?

Make it so he only changes under extreme stress, and have him go totally apeshit when he goes super, a lá Hulk

It could be interesting to have a sort of "superhero on a timer" angle, which is something that I don't see often, and is something you could play up. They may have to plan their day around exactly what time they should go super. That plan could occasionally be interrupted. Or, you could create a dilemma by making them chose between helping in a seemingly smaller situation, or waiting to power up later for a potential larger threat.

Working Title: Canadian Furries
>This is the protagonist, BEATRIS MACLIVER or BEA
>Thick Scottish accent
>Chubby
>Braces
>Wears stupid shirts
>Lazy and apathetic
>Her family recently immigrated to Canada from Scotland
>Canada is perpetually stuck in the 1980s
>She will grow up to become prime minister

Haven't figured out any kind of actual storyline, but I've been thinking of some supporting Canadian/immigrant animal characters with stupid pun names, such as a French-Canadian loon and polar bear duo named CLAIRE DE LA LUNE and BERNADETTE POIRER and an as-of-yet unnamed, undercover KGB agent stout.

Excuse my poor art skills, I'm an amateur who barely practises.

i've got ideas but no actual comics planned yet. i just wanted a reason to draw shoes.

Out of curiosity, what would you all assume Vivian is like, based on her design? Personality, likes, dislikes, hobbies (besides gardening or fears?

she seems to like taking care of things
like a housewife/mom personality

shes scared of ghosts

>power boost for a limited time
So, Ben 10?

>Ghost Poké tattoos
Rad.

How does her lower half work?

Make her Bone to be wild or Bad to the Bone

i want her to sit on my face

Not one of those characters looks like someone I'd want to read about.

my bad

Eh...I guess. But something the character can only use maybe once a week if he/she concentrates a pool of energy. Or something similar to what this user said:

Not an OC, but she did come from my subconscious. I thought it looked nice for something a dream puked up, maybe even a good design for an OC. What do you think, Sup Forums?

I WANNA GIVE HER THE DICK

Thanks, man. Your art is neat too and I think Vivian is super cute. And...I guess I have an art blog? I'm not that active on there, but I'm jenkart on tumblr.

Aw, I thought the style was cool. I liked the shoes too.

She's adorable! I love her helmet. I want one.
.
My ocs are not for sexual.

>My ocs are not for sexual
That's good to hear because since you started posting them, this has given me a really gay vibe. Like it reminds me of the girls on tumblr who draw, like, Mr. Crocker getting nailed in the ass, but all cutesy.
It might just be all the pink.

And looking at your blog made me see that dead mom with cat ears/pointy hair. I remember you posting that, she's so cute, goddamn.

an ordinary homely gardener who was unfortunate one day to get caught in the path of either a dragon's fire or a large laserbeam and got her upper body robbed of flesh, dying in the process, but somehow got resurrected through some form of means

I feel like she's one of those 50s housewives who acts really weird because she stays at home most of the time. However, she talks regularly with other skelly housewives, who are batty in their own way, and does fit in with that crowd with her quirks.
She seems like the sort that cares for other people (i.e family and friends) but has no qualms about harming herself in silly ways just to ease boredom I can see her pulling some of her bones out of her body and aiming around stuff with it like a gun, or using them as drumsticks- something like what old cartoons usually do with skeletons
She loves anything that compliments her vivid imagination. I imagine she hates being boxed in her house most of the time and has stories that usually lead her to doing silly antics.

C'mon, don't leave me hanging
I feed off of (You)s

my you is learn to draw digitally/get a scanner or a better camera and lighting

tthe first one is cute but i dont personally like the look of the second one
and im bad at names unless theyre puns
keep it up tho you got potential

Tugg Dickson

Hugh J. Rection