Improve The Last Jedi

I'll start..........

Worst mistake is that there are only 400 of the fucking rebels left, if you want to fix TLJ you have to fix the last fucking movie

400 were on ship. Almost all died when they shot transporters down. Remaining ones boarded Falcon at the end.
Less than 20-30 left.

DELETE FRAKIN EVERYTHING

Disney is going to pay a million fold for this monstrosity. I give all of this garbage over to the Lord God himself.

Jedi failed because it failed to tie/move along plot threads and instead focused on shitty boring action scenes. Heres what i would change

>keep snoke alive, make him threatening and explain his backstory
>keep the mystery of Reys parents around, dont say its just lmao dead junkers
>remove luke character assassination
>SHOW kylo turning to the dark side during training, maybe have him smash someone during training ala luke on vader in ROTJ

I could go on but im phoneposting

I would delete the magic fisher scene AND the ridiculous Finn and Chinese girl sub plot because it's ridiculous and goes nowhere.

ok but seriously if Luke had died overexerting himself doing this to the enemy fleet the movie would have been worth it.

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Agreed, should have been 0 instead. Literal terrorists and they are still, to this day, somehow the good guys.

Have Rey take Kylos hand

How the trilogies used to work:
>first movie establishes plot lines
>second movie continues plot lines
>third movie concludes plot lines
How nu-trilogy works:
>first movie establishes plot lines
>second movie destroys plot lines
>?????

>invent time machine
>go back and redo TFA
>use EU books/comics/games as source material
>recast everyone so i'm not limited by old actors playing old characters.
>do a trilogy where luke gets turned to the dark side by Clone Emperor and Mara Jade. While he is trying to recover jedi artifacts.
>sub plot is Thrawn kicking New Republic ass.
>Luke and Mara's love saves them from the Dark Side. They kill the Clone Emperor.
>Luke and Mara show up with the Clone Emperor's fleet and save the New Republic from Thrawn's fleet.

stand alone Wraith Squadron movie. showing more of the Thrawn subplot. as the trilogy follow's luke's story.

>third movie setups plot lines for the next trilogies
xD

Rebel =/= Terrorist
Terrorists want to inflict terror in the population, Rebels... rebel. There has never been any terrorist attack in any of the movies, you fucking imperial apologist cunt

>Cut Poe's "can you hear me now?" distraction opening
>Remove a lot of the quips in general
>Make Hux not act like a cartoon character. I was laughing every time he said anything and I don't know if that was the movie's intention or not. Neither option is a good thing
>Cut Finn trying to jump ship
>Cut out rose entirely
>Develop Holden's backstory more than not at all, although I think this would have been a lot easier to do if she had just been introduced in the last movie
>Drastically lower the amount of porgs, keep chewie eating them but literally only use it as an establishing shot while luke sneaks on falcon
>Cut out casino planet entirely
>Give Poe and Finn something to do that allows BOTH of them to develop as opposed to how the casino thing played out in the movie where only rose had any "character development"
>Remove the reylo v red guards fight
>Let Finn sacrifice himself in the end, having been given more development it probably would've felt even more appropriate. If you can't do that let Poe be the one to save him and kiss him

Honestly I would have preferred the first sequel at least having focused on Luke's attempt and failure to rebuild the Jedi. Use a time skip like they did in the prequels. I think TFA gave a shaky foundation to build upon, especially since Finn and Poe barely got developed in that movie. I also think it was a bad idea having this movie take place literally as TFA ends. That being said I think this movie could have been great had it not wasted time on rose, the casino planet, or a lot of the humor. As it stands now I'd say it's in between a 5 and a 6 when it clearly had the potential to be an 8 out of 10. I unironically think Poe taking rose's place as Finn's love interest would have improved this film significantly

>I 5.0
>II 4.0
>III 7.0
>IV 8.0
>V 9.0
>VI 6.5
>VII 6.0
>VIII 5.5

Was this... part of your a plan?

Needed more "Lukey Needs Milky" scenes IMO. Yoda should have never showed up period. I wonder how many more days until Star Wars threads are banned. Soon Banned Will Be

The ships jump to different places.
Have fun following all of them.
Rebels are retarded

I am actually invested in these movie adaptations.

It's the only way to be sure

>Take out all the meme shit cringe one liners and meme scenes with porgs or whatever
>Have Leia actually die in that scene, with Kylo doing the same thing of not shooting, leaving hope that he still isn't lost and setting up tension between him and the first order
>Have Luke actually be like Luke
>Get rid of the whole casino sub-plot
>Snoke can still die the way he did
>Have Rey take Kylo's hand, leaving big questions as to what will happen next in the next film
>Cut out this dumb bullshit of a single person being able to pilot a capital ship by themselves and being able to aim it and shoot it at a mega star destroyed to destroy it, makes no fucking sense.
>Cut out the ENTIRE not-hoth bullshit, end it with Rey taking Kylo's hand
>A couple more Rey/Kylo for link scenes, they were the only good thing in the film
>No killing Luke, legitimately no actual reason to do so
>Get rid of the meme shit at the start with Poe trolling Hux for epic laughs
>If you want Captain Merchandise to do something she should have been a bounty hunter after her fuck-up on the 3rd death star, have her hunting Finn so they both have something to do

Fucking hell this is like only the tip of the iceburg, I could go on all day with this piece of shit movie.

No, they are a rebel army or an enemy state, not a terrorist organization, we call groups terrorists when they carry on attacks on civilian populations with the purpose of pressuring their enemy to give in to their political demands, in the movies we have only ever seen rebels attacking military ships, military stations and military personal.

>Remove Leia space scene
>Remove the scene where that purple haired nobody lightspeed crashes into the FO's ship because that ruins every fucking space battle ever.

>Hove Poe go with Finn instead Rose
>The whole casino subplot turns into dumb fun buddy adventure and Rose' preachy anti-capitalist speeches never happen
>Rose stays behind, doesn't oppose purple haired lady, just tries to distract her. PHL doesn't look like a bitch for rejecting Poe's call to action now.
>Poe gets to save and kiss Finn at not-Hoth instead.

I dunno, the Death Star and even those Destroyers are pretty big. I have to imagine they have some civilian population, perhaps the family of essential crew. Also staff such as sanitaiton, comissary, etc.

They're probably closer to aircraft carriers I think, either way still a military target, the rebels aren't blowing up school buses or shooting up shopping malls or the like

Why didn't they just adapt the Thrawn trilogy.

IT WAS RIGHT THERE. EVERYONE LOVES IT.

FUCK, HAVE ZAHN HELP ADAPT AND WRITE THE SCREENPLAY

>Have Luke be training other apprentices who have figured out similar puzzles to find him
>Rey is great at the force, too great
>She starts to indulge in the pride of the favoured successor
>Kylo Ren still can't get over Han's death, feels overwhelming guilt at all times
>Show a generally mounting contrast of Kylo's self torture and Rey's mounting pride and arrogance
>Luke grows concerned, tells her that he'll suspend training for her own good
>She flips out and runs off, convinced she knows better
>Ends up jeopardizing Luke's location and leading the first order to him
>Kylo can't do it, is overcome by guilt and visions of his father
>Snoke stabs him in the back and declares him a failure, decides to find a new apprentice
>Luke retreats, trying to save his apprentices and let them get away
>Rey comes back, overcome with guilt, and tries to fight off the first order
>Gets bodied until she force chokes an elite guard in her anger
>Luke tries to save her and his forced to surrender
>Movie ends with Rey in black being marched before a happy Snoke, while shots of a pale and wounded Kylo still breathing on the shoreline are shown

Instead of subverting everything set up by the last movie in the hopes of appearing intelligent, don't.

Noice