Weekend Sup Forums creation thread

Or /coc/ thread if that's what you look for in the catalog.

Wiki:
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Last weekend's thread:
desuarchive.org/co/thread/91942863/

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Last time:

-Another Golden Girl comic is being made?
-More updates on the Rage Racer script

And that was all since the thread died on Saturday only hours after it was made.

Perhaps FCBD will pump some blood into the Sup Forumsverse!

The guy whose making the comic(?) is using one of his own characters that he would like to see as a superhero.
not sure where it's going though

I was out at a birthday party when the last thread went up and came back to it already dead. Fastest I've seen in weeks.

Oh well, we're here now.

quick bump, still writing, mostly taking out all the excess.

Simple story of revenge with an open ending.

And I left the thread alone for maybe 2 hours and came back to see it was gone.

Sup Forums moves too damn fast these days.

BQ, GG, or something else?

play that 60's bat theme

Holy shit the FCBD line was long!

Hey guys, it's the RR guy. I'm sad to say that there are no new pages today. Due to finals I haven't had the time to put any more writing down. However I have also made a post on a recent writefag thread asking for second opinions on the story. I have been informed I am writing a book, not a comic. Now I have a bit of a decision to make: Finish the writing and edit down later or Edit down now to get a feel of the flow for the rest of the issue. However one thing's for certain, my original plan of keeping it down to a 22 page comic probably isn't gonna happen.

I'll still be here to spitball, just a bit disappointed there's no new content form me.

I can't believe we never thought of doing a batpole gag before.

But we did, it's just there was never a visual representation of it, so no one ever noticed.

I don't think anyone in these threads who has ever set a page limit has been able to stick to it.

BQ, I threw out most of the plot threads I started with to get to this basic set up:

Briana wants guy dead, Sandra wants to capture him alive, they butt heads, super hero team up.

For GG it's already outlined. They're more vignettes, little four page self contained stories in a sunday comic format. And most importantly

there's no porn. Audrey is not for sexual.

Yeah that's not too big of a deal, but even still I'm cramming on my comic writing books. On top of that I'm doing outlines of the pages to see what needs to to be moved about. For example the guy from the writefag thread told me the first page could be broken into two pages.

And since there's little discussion I'll put up a topic:

A little while ago we had a small idea on a golem made of cheesecake called "Cheesecake" to be a sort of sexy villain I think? Well there's still not a lot to her. let's fix that.

Where did she come from?

What flavor of cheesecake is she?

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Personally I think Audrey's boobs are getting too big. They're supposed to be "the size of her head" and I just keep seeing them drawn bigger and bigger.

Kid Cookie found a magic cookbook or a magic cooking utensil, and that's where Cheesecake came from. Her charms do nothing to Cookie since he is a child.

I'd say she's plain cheesecake with the ability to assimilate other foods temporarily for additional powers.

As sacrilegious as it might be to say so and while I it is funny that she's going the route of Power Girl, I think I agree. The model sheet was already pushing the boundaries so going past them is probably a bad idea.

>OC thread starts with fetish fuel

Wow so fun and interesting

Well give us something else to talk about then.

I had a dream last night about a chef with a shark head wearing a costume with a cape and shoulder pads working in a basement to send blooming onions up through a dumbwaiter hidden under a bed.

You want to talk about that? Would that interest you?

>my artwork here

I have never been so fullfilled to be honest...

I like it! And it could make a funny moment when this food monster is only defeated by Kid Cookie and her unwillingness to harm her creator Also that he's freaking ADORABLE!

it's good so i wanted to share it.
she needs more SFW stuff

It was a test for page layout and I just felt like drawing my character, it has no direction since I don't know any of GG's abilities
So it needs to be concise and short like comic with simple punchline, or give a Calvin and Hobbes feel?

I actually learned of GG's existence because of /aco but seeing that there are still people that want to give it a sfw take I'll consider making more art of her and maybe even taking my chance in a fan-comic

>it has no direction since I don't know any of GG's abilities
Combat-wise? She has some boxing skills she learned from her dad.

GG doesn't have any super powers, she's in the Robin tier where she's just super acrobatic.

But now her center of balance is off and she has to find other ways to compensate.

I think GG strips work best when there's a punchline or a setup. They're mainly just short little things with immediate payoff most of the time.

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Good thing I used box fighters references for her.
I'm more into drawing lengthy material even with my lack of experience in comic fabrication.
But yeah, maybe I'll take my chances and draw a 4-6 panel comic

BTW shamless self promoting baka, but my internet is too shit to upload the image files individually

Not him but I wanna know more.

"Why hello there ol chap! how are you today?"

I prefer GG in non-lewd material.

Or at least deconstructive cheesecake.

Reminder that Briana is the only truly pure Sup Forums girl.

Three kids found an old abandoned ninja spy hideout in an attic and the shark man chef was the only person left still there.

The shark man chef's head wasn't like Harrison's from Nedroid, it was always pointing upwards.

Strummer's more pure.

It grows back.

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Briana's ahoge is an underrated feature.

She doesn't strike me as the type to have random flings with people.

I wonder what Colette thinks about essentially being replaced as /our girl/ by a bunch of titty monsters.

I think I have finally stopping feeling like I am circling the drain. So I will get started on some useful work. Hopefully.

That's good to hear.

Maybe this will be the year.

>tfw you had a shitton of OCs that you posted about in here and a whole graphic novel series you wanted to do with them but ultimately your total lack of artistic talent forced you to shelve them while you instead worked on a different, more text-based project

at least these threads are still kinda cool, glad to see I can live vicariously through my Sup Forumsmrades...

Not even Marion wearing nothing but a Union Jack flag?

I don't think she feels that way about her.

Seems more like Marion is the older sister Strummer never had and so she feels compelled to mess with her boss.

>Union
>implying

SCOOOOOOOTTTTLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND

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If you can't beat 'em, get tied to 'em.

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Good to see this thread still up when I wake up.

I've doodled a few designs for these threads but those don't tend to survive past a thread or two without coming up with a ton of conceptual info to go with them. Sometimes you just need to throw a character at the thread and see if people want to catch it, I think. I'm not one to force an idea unless I'm crazy passionate about it.

What's everyone working on at the moment? We've got Van working on some comics, and RR guy spitballing some ideas... Does anyone have story concepts, characters, or anything like that they're working on?

Maybe I should try to come up with some development questions... I'd ask my usual "what are some people or groups your character was affiliated with before the story started?" but that's normally the first thing you guys come up with. It's a great thing to know for plot and conflict hooks.

>GG Special Issue #1
>The visitor from another world!
>A mysterious stranger appears in Platinum City and with her several ne'er do wells!
>But is this blonde, bandanna'd woman friend? Or foe?

For the RR story I'm pretty sure I've introduced most, if not all, the important characters in the office. The main problem for me is what to do with them afterward, or if I'm spending too much time thinking ahead and not enough finishing the shit I have now.

Another little thing to help get the convo going is something I do to keep my brain thinking: make a few Newspaper headlines based on /coc/ character. I try to make a few more subtle ones but it seem the best to me are the less subtle ones.

>Blanket wraps victim in the warm embrace of death!

>Plus size womens clothing store recieves "Golden Gaurdian seal of Aproval"

>Skate sheep renewed for 9th season. 90's cool is immortal

>People still think Chaptor won't eat your liver: Reasons to fear the "reputable" raptor

>"I just woke up like this": Bearded Skeleton's 5 tips to good looking facial hair that lasts past death

>Vixen 6 release hostage of 2 months when they realized this was his kink.

>The main problem for me is what to do with them afterward, or if I'm spending too much time thinking ahead and not enough finishing the shit I have now.

If you establish a basic connection - even a sentence - between them and RR, you can keep it on hand and use it to inform problems, arcs, and interactions in the future. Not to mention some minor character-development goals RR might have. I usually like to establish one rival person/org, one allied person/org, and then one extra thing. The first allies are often family members or someone they helped in the past, but it's still a good way to fit them into a world and lay some interesting groundwork for character goals/future plot points.

I don't tend to go too deep into them when they're first made, but it's something to explore as you go. Helps make a character feel less like they didn't exist before the story and wouldn't exist without it.

I was planning to bring up his friend in the workplace, and the boss as the enemy. Maybe I can rotate other coworkers to fill the "other". But I suppose I feel that I may be giving away too much. And even then I'm not too sure what to do with them past my 1st "arc". I guess it all hinges on how long RR is still at his work and if he keeps contact.

Neat headlines.

Sometimes I'll try to come up with story prompts and if I come up with one I really like I try to develop it more.

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A classic. We need more one-off comics like this.

There's a bunch of one off comics.

Yeah, but I'm saying it'd be nice to have some fresh ones.

We need ideas that will inspire drawfags to draw then.

It's the age old dilemma.

It doesn't help that the board moves so fast these days. Hard to stay here through the weekend.

Blame the Sup Forums shitposting.

I don't blame them, this is just a hot time for Sup Forums during the weekends.

I blame them almost entirely. The only thing worse than them is recurrent generals.

Man, I haven't seen cultist chan in ages, let alone outside /tg/.

I haven't seen an OC crossover between boards in forever.

Unless Deelette counts. I'm not sure if she's a crossover or a shared character.

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>after throwing several heroes, Colette picks up Briana
>next panel, it's Briana holding Colette
>and then throwing her

These were drawn before BQ was thought up.

But if you haven't seen them before, you pretty much guessed the ending.

>pre-BQ

Those dark days.

The lighting was about the same.

Now to see if the thread can actually last through the night.

It probably will

If I took off GG's bra would she die?

It would be extremely inconvenient.

She's a big girl.

For her setting.

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If a Polish superhero was capable of flight, could they leave the atmosphere?

Shoryuken

So like, a literal Polish Superman, but instead of kryptonite his greatest weakness is his inability to into space?

His introductory comic is him saving the day somewhere on Earth as an amazing hero, then cut to a space station desperately sending out a distress call, and cuts back to Super-Pole looking depressed.

FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVER

There needs to be a version of this where every surface is Sean Connery and its Strummer showing their room.

Depends if deus vult

What Character would you most like to be expanded on?
let's try to fill some fluff out

Sadly he can only fly as fast as he can jog.

Be/ck/y

I was really enjoying Alpha, the robot boy, when he was semi-popular in these threads.

Doin fine mate

Iris.

So was this a good guy or a bad guy?

Bad guy

I'd like to see Venus Fly Trap interact with Sup Forums gals.
Still like the idea of Ladybug trying to collect her fluids as a beauty product.

What about a Girls Night Out "episode" in which Venus is taken along by mistake?

That would be fun.
Would Motion be the ringleader of the party?

Nah, if anyone would do that it'd be Lila. She's the biologist/chemist/engineer, she'd be able to do something with it if there's anything with it to be done.

i've always wanted to participate in these threads but i never have any idea what to do

What did you dream about last night?

If you can't remember, then recall the last dream you can remember and pull some inspiration from it.

So what's the plan, here. Fit more /ck/ memes in her lore?

When it comes to board-tans, things get iffy.

What do we have established right now when it comes to how she's involved with the Sup Forums setting?
She's married to Sup Forumsnrad, runs (and owns?) her own restaurant, has one son with Sup Forumsnrad, and what else?

I really do love that /cock/ actually happened.

How would you like to expand on her?

Besides the obvious pun, of course.

Memes
Give her a casual outfit
How be/ck/y met Sup Forumsnrad. Like there should be more than just "Cause Sup Forumsck/"
Smart-ass personality when she's mad
Why she started cooking

Same here on /cock/COME BACK BABY I MISS YOU

Anyways if that's it I guess we can add details about her restaurant?

Well meme wise there was that one new pic of Sup Forumsnrad dropping off be/ck/y at her house because she hit a deer. Maybe have a one off comic where they eat veal and Sup Forumsnrad puts 2 and 2 together. Maybe they met since the LCS was next to a restaurant she worked at before she got her own. Not sure why she particularly needs to be a smart ass, though.

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>Not sure why she particularly needs to be a smart ass, though.

From wiki: but is usually more harsh, yet unintentionally humorous.

That perfectly describes a smart ass imo