ITT: Write a cartoon plot

Hard mode: You must also give your opinion about the plot posted just above your own.

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A small group of exterminators get hired by a mysterious government entity to hunt down a "rodent infestation." When they arrive it is a mutant rat about 8 feet tall. After defeating it the same government entity likes their style and officially hires them as monster hunters. They get hired to destroy mutants and supernatural creatures.

In English please

Acrobatic homeless moron with stupid hair, no shirt and a beer-belly pays off his gambling debt to the mafia with rare artifacts, expensive tech and other stolen goods. He tells the mafia boss the story of how he got all that stuff, a story filled with high adventures, road-trips, epic battles and very obvious lies.

You hear the one about those boys that piss themselves?

A homeless girl in her mid teens comes across a small group of aliens visiting Earth, After being asked to be taken as a test subject she agrees to it to escape the shit life of having no home or family.

What's with the homeless schtick?

In a wild universe filled with space-faring psychics, lost civilizations, mecha, and superstitions, two fraternal twins of wildly different lifestyles reunite when their father passes on and leaves them his mysterious ship and courier service.

Together with the ship's Amnesic AI avatar and an alien anthropologist, these two are gonna need to learn to work out their differences and work together to finish their father's incomplete deliveries and uncover the mysteries behind it all. Their journey will lead them from the thronerooms of galactic royalty, the depths of the criminal underworld, into bizarre and beautiful worlds, into distant and forgotten reaches of deep space, and into...

The Wild Aether Yonder.

(Shit Quality Warning: This takes a lot of inspiration from stuff like /tg/'s sci-fi superstitions threads, their Stardust CYOA, the Carmen Miranda's Ghost soundtrack, Star Wars, Star Trek Original Series, Guardians of the Galaxy, Serenity, Mass Effect, and a bit of Gravity Falls.)

I didnt even notice the first homeless story.

Cooking show for kids that teaches recipes, nutrition and health benefits to a proper diet in an hero adventure style environment.

People that are hungry or have bad eating habits turn into themed monsters and its up to a group kids aiming to be chefs to turn them human again by preparing a healthy but tasty dish.

Kids are multi-ethnic a la Captain Planet.
Includes French Girl Scout who's overly prepared and a bit OCD.
An obese boy who, over the course of the series, will lose weight to being just chubby, Korean.
Sporty girl, who realizes that athletes need good nutrition, hispanic.
A nerdy glasses kid who is really into molecular gastronomy and the science of cooking, black.
Generic white male lead, starts off being the first monster, is the dumb main character that learns the importance of healthy eating.

Real chefs will guest star and teach kids lessons, also each episode has a song.

Hes not a smart man, probably sold his house due to his gambling debt (and still, he had to steal stuff just to pay off the dept)

In a world inhabited by humanoid bugs, a young ant tries to get revenge for his brother by killing his murder in the ring. But in order to face him, he needs to get through "Pesticide", a huge tournament where the losers are executed for the entertainment of the crowds. Think of something like Japanese bug fights, but animated and over the top.

It's a surprisingly solid premise; in-over-their-head bluecollar guys with mostly their wits and grit end up plunged into a supernatural world where their skills somehow still translate.

I'd give it a one season trial for sure.

Torn between suggesting it be aired prime-time and be an adult cartoon comedy (doesn't help I imagine one of the characters basically being dale gribble from king of the hill) or a kid's show.

So, entire episodes are just flashbacks to how he got the various things he's using to pay off the mob?

You've tickled my curiosity but if he can steal these things, why is he still homeless?

Kind of depressing and I'd need a little more to go on.


>Cooking show for kids that teaches recipes, nutrition and health benefits to a proper diet in an hero adventure style environment.

So, a modern dungeon menshi for kids, perhaps?

I like this. I think if I were a producer I'd be willing to give this a season or two-

>also each episode has a song.

Here's a contract for as many seasons as you want, but I'd like a minimum of five 26 episode seasons.

A goofy young girl with a tail and electricity powers and a super genius teen boy travel around a world filled with super powered martial artist, talking animals, and robots. They are searching for the Phoenix Stones, 10 gemstones that when gathered together can give any person a wish.

So kinda like Wrestling but even more over the top and with bugs? I'd be down to watch a season of that.

Set in early colonized Australia (1800ish), the English government sends a team of occult specialists and a new intern to the new land to uncover any magic. Basically Hellboy/ Atomic Robot but Australian

>Set in early colonized Australia (1800ish), the English government sends a team of occult specialists and a new intern to the new land to uncover any magic. Basically Hellboy/ Atomic Robot but Australian

I'd watch that show's first season and continue to wonder about it after its climactic season finale cliffhanger just before cancellation (or the sporadically airing second and final season that deepens the characters and lore and changes how we think about everything).

In a distant post-post-apocalyptic future where a cataclysmic event shattered the world, a petty aristocratic thief and her overly aggressive lower class partner in crime along with a self-righteous wannabe heroic fugitive monk take to the high seas of the Great Lakes looking for adventure and trouble.

That's just Dragonball you ninny.

Could be cool I don't know to much about Australian mythos. I saw on Scooby Doo they got a vampire.
Only advice give a reason why the intern was picked, maybe a chosen one thing.

Brother crows
Takes place in medieval times. Three brothers grow up as bastards support their mom one a blacksmith, two a thief(which is frowned on but hey money), and the last a stable boy for a knight.

One day they come home to find it on fire, they go in looking for their mom. The next morning they wake up, but something is off. They are now crows, a witch appears before them and tells them. That they are actually bastards of the king and he burned down their house to assure the kingdom to his new son. The witch cursed them as they were dying into being crows until they can reach the kingdom and assume their rightful place. She drips blood on each of the giving them one red feather. The red feather can temporarily turn them human shortly but then fades a little, if it were to fade completely they would be stuck in that form.

...

Part 2
On their way to the kingdom they saved a dying girl who had run away accused of being a witch. She can understand them and is grateful to them. She agrees to help them on their journey.

The end/ the twist
They finally confront the king. He reveals he is actually the son of the king that burned down their house. The witch was actually the mom who grew old and scornful of her dead sons. The brothers aren't actual brother, but just random cursed crows. During this reveal a king's archer kills them.

The young witch cries over the crows bodies giving them a white feather. The white feather allows them to stay human. After they decide to give up their vengeance and live normal lives with wife and a family. The youngest brother ends up marrying the young witch.

Is posting your ideas that you posted in another idea thread okay?

Go for it
Also a four part miniseries about a group of taggers in a Subway that find a portal to hell. They tag the circle if He'll looking for a way out.

A series of restaurants and shops are built on an ancient burial ground. Two friends who work in a Starbucks rip-off are chosen to fight off the multiple monsters that surface.

Seems like it has potential to be funny, if you get the premise right.

Here's my idea. I posted it in the previous cartoon idea thread, in case somebody would ask:

The show would star a wide-eyed little girl who's rather loopy, spacey, and eccentric. Due to her personality, she's deemed certifiably insane and sent to a gloomy old mental asylum in the woods, with nights lasting longer than days and strange architecture. She adjusts rather easily, though she insists that she isn't insane. She soon meets the patients of the asylum, with varrying mental quirks, as well as the staff, who don't seem much saner.

That could be interesting, but mental issues are hard to show well. You could do it like Batman, where everyone in mentally ill. Or perhaps in a more dark humor way. I can see it working in Adult Swim or something similar.

My idea:

The year is 2062. Technology has advanced to the point where everyone can connect directly to a computer to play immersive virtual reality games (it's not SAO I swear). However, there's no AI, and the same technology than exists is used to deeply spy on everyone. A mysterious game appears in shadowy parts of the net, and of the people who play it, 10% die, 85% have no effect, 5,9% result in gaining superhuman reflexes and fighting ability, and 0,1% gain some sort of supernatural powers (controlling fire, phasing through walls, electric blasts, etc).

The show follows several people who achieve enhanced abilities and a few ones who gain these supernatural powers. At first, most of them think they can become super heroes, but slowly they start to divide into factions, especially as some of them decide that becoming villains is a lot more fun. It culminates in disaster for everyone.

There's also some background story as to how the mysterious game came into being by race of strange otherworldly monsters and the fact that they quickly discover that they must use their powers or face even worse consequences.

Its A girl scouts vs Boy scouts gang war cartoon

Main Setting:Typical Suburban Middleclass medium size city neighborhood.

The Macguffin: Member back in elementary school when they would have those "Sell this many candy bars and you will get some bullshit prize" basically that but bigger in scale like your whole troop gets to go to disneyworld or Brand new Bikes.

The "Drugs": Cookies, Candies, Homeade key chains, other random shit scouts would sell.

Weapons: Anything kid related like Taking out each other during a dodgeball game, Getting someone sick with chicken pox, Making up shit to try and get them grounded by their parents.

Extereme use weapons would be like: Actually breaking a kids bones, destroying a toy of thiers or thier bike, Attacking thier parents by like: Having them get fired from thier job because one of the rival kids parent is thier manager, making a rivals parents get devorced, or calling the police and saying that a parent molested a kid.

Main Factions: at least 3-4 Different scout troops each trying to outlast each other.
and just because it would be boys vs girls primarly dosent mean that there wont be times that the troops wont have intergender wars.
Also the parents/Adults will have no idea about the war and will only think that the kids are just beig kids.

Specific episodes: -The soapbox kart derby episode: Lots of sabotage, lots of kids getting hurt
-The school dance which would be like a "GoT: red wedding" style episode
-"The Science fair" in which the kids try to invent a brand new super addictive candy to sell also a breaking bad style episode.
-A double, even tripple crossed episode.
-A sports game vs episode

Seems alright

I'd watch that

Action-comedy about two aliens trying to survive in a universe on the verge of war

a feel good sitcom about a small town of mutated survivors of a nuclear holocaust recovering from the death of a promising teen who died while drunk driving
sounds good, I imagine they're different aliens from each other?

>KND: bloods vs crips edition

I'd watch it.

A kid gets caught looking at weird porn by his parents. After taking him to therapy and completely misinterpreting the conversations had, they send him to an asylum for socially depraved teens. He teams up with two other inmates, an unpredictable psycho and a goth girl who is done with everyone's shit, to try and escape. They fail. Wacky and surreal hijinks ensue each week.

So... kinda superjail?
Still, it sounds good, I love stories about asylums

MINE:
A nerd and a kinda popular girl, who do not know each other in real life, are able to share a same fantastic alternate world in their dreams. Together they battle monsters, save the citizens and try to stop an evil wizard. The kid slowly falls in love with the girl and tries to figure out who she is in the real world.

It'd be like AT but less shipping, less continuous plot and more wacky, episodic adventures. The kid would try to find the girl, but the focus would be on the adventures

If you like stories about asylums, do you like mine?

This little green dude with a viking helmet and a Rayman-esque schnoz flies all over the galaxy trying to conquer planets and humorously failing.
>so essentially, he's invader zim mixed with lord hater

Yeah, sounds pretty cool. I'd watch it. Would it be episodic or plot-heavy?

I have a premise I've been toying with. What happens when a anti-social nerd becomes super popular? Hijinks insue, of course.

I don't have a name but the gyst of it is that there's this guy, who is as stated above, an unpopular anti-social nerd. But one day, he does something (not quite sure yet) that makes everyone notice him. All of his friends would have weirdly close relationships to him. There's the dudebro best friend, the mobster-type henchmen, the bright eyed protoge, and a girl who fawns all over him, along with other friends he makes along the way. The thing is though, he kinda hates them all. Or at least tolerates them. So they drag him to parties, or out to the beach or movies, barging over into his house interrupting his free quiet time.

He starts out a loner, constantly pushing them away, but eventually learns to let them in.

Mostly episodic but with some plot, I think

i think this could be great as long as you kept it relatively feel-good throughout, without succumbing to the temptation to go full grimdark in later seasons. the dissonance between extreme sci-fi-ish hardships and mundane loss can be a great thing to draw upon.

The second in comand of an Evil Space Empire leads and army of variyng competancy to conquer the galaxy whilst also competing against the other higher ranking officers to gain her boss's good will.
Meanwhile said Boss and Evil Emperor is going through a redemption arc.

Basically one of those action-adventure kids series but from the POV of the less lucky evil generals.

Don't really have an idea for it, but I think it would be neat for there to be a family-friendly cartoon that took place in the afterlife.

What genre?

A paranormal investigator microdoses various psychedelics to research cosmic occurrences. He often works with a trio of escapees from hell, as well as being familiar with numerous alien monsters and entities. As the series progresses he becomes increasingly insane from both witnessing cosmic horrors and extended use of hallucinogenic drugs.

That sounds both really cute and sad at the same time

Suicide Squad, but it focuses on the downtime. Training, dealing with guards and Waller and new recruits and hazing. Romantic entanglements rising and falling (she got away, is he mad she didn't tell him? or happy for her for escaping?). Cycling through interesting B, C and D list villains.

Sounds like Dr. Sleepless.

What sounds cute about it?

I just imagine a really comfy show about people doing fun ghost stuff

>bump plot

I got a plot for ya.

A person have bought an old and beat down journal from a flea market, and would have the description of "My Journey into Hell", the person reads the journal, learning about this person's descent into Hell, the journal describe how his interpretation of Hell not being traditionally Fiery and Malice, it rather being Freezing, Depressed, and Anguish, the color blue plays a factor with the recurring theme of this version of Hell, eventually, the journals end of saying that before he was pummeled back to hell as he has escaped, he given his journal to the guy that ensure his story is known to the public, but has forgotten to publish it, in which the person who was reading the journal was given the idea to publish it, but after 2-4 weeks, the person received a letter from the book company that has book wasn't accepted because it was similar to Dante's Inferno

I like this idea, I liked it in the other threads. But just as an experiment, pitch me one episode and/or side character.

I feel like the second you introduce superpowers the audience will stop caring about SAO-lite.

I feel like the mystery aspect lends itself naturally to a more structured miniseries approach. How long of a show would this be?

This feels veey Japan-esque, the whole idea of an antisocial loner and their gaggle of weirdos. That being said, it's the sort of anime I could stand watching for a season, if the writing was funny enough.

This story is way too complicated. Just make it a guy's story of his descent into this weird subversion of Hell.

Pickle & Peanut did something like that.

Oh, okay

Okay, here's an idea for a side character

The asylum's head nurse, as well as the only nurse. A young girl around the same age as the protagonist, wearing an old-fashioned nurse's uniform and with long blonde hair tied up into a pair of huge pigtails.

The asylum's previous head (and only) nurse, was her grandmother, and after she retired, the girl was the only one around who was even remotely qualified (Though calling her qualified is still a stretch), due to the asylum's remote location

She tries to take her job seriously for the most part, but due to her age and the patients she has to deal with, she often acts pretty immature

How's that?

>way too complicated
plebian detected

It's basically a dude reading a journal about this person descent into this weird subversion of Hell, I wanted to give the full detail of the plot in case anyone needs some context or call me a literaryfag

Don't get me wrong I love layered narratives but you seem more to be outlining the opening and and closing more than the actual meat of the story. Like Watchmen's synospis doesn't need the detail about how some jackass at the news office finds the journal afterwords.

I feel like a loli straightman is a weird combination, but I can dig it. It really depends on how weird you're willing to go with the concept, and in what ways.

Soft sci-fi setting, set on a non-human Earthlike planet, effectively the 23rd century in terms of equivalent technology (for the host civilization, the 'invaders' are far beyond that). The main characters are closer to insects than mammals, and oxygen is super-plentiful. They have to be more environmental because their bodies literally require more oxygen. Urban inhabitants wear special masks.
Suddenly, humans with even better technology jump out of the warp and make contact, wearing suits meant to appeal to similarity of appearance. They offer to trade a portion of humanity's superscience for the science and culture of this planet. It also helps that the weapons the aliens use when they initially believe the force to be an invasion are completely ineffective and the mining laser on the human scout vessel could glass armies in an instant.
Trawling the planet's history, the main character, one of the 'locust-men' and the equivalent of a university student, decides to study human civilization to determine its similarity to his own. In this setting, humanity's planet of origin and history are similar but ultimately different than reality.
One of the main characters is a human-made AI, the scout ship's leader. He was overdesigned for intelligence, and can run the entire ship himself if he needs to. The humans basically consider him a walking god.

I agree with them. It's a neat idea, and I get what you're saying, but when summarizing the cartoon I would have focused more on the descent into hell rather than the the guy trying to publish the journal.

Anyway, lots of cosmic horror stuff. Kinda don't want to post mine, seems cliche, but fuck it.

In an alternate future, the world has been devastated - both from the stalemated Third World War between the United States and a surviving Soviet Union, and a series of natural disasters and plagues called "the Tribulation". The Middle East and much of the Indian Subcontinent have been reduced to radioactive wasteland. The third world is in a state of anarchy as nations collapse and terrorism runs rampant. Millions have died, and the superpowers stand on the brink of nuclear annihilation. And now, supernatural entities set loose by the carnage set to work bringing about the apocalypse.

In the face of these threats, a secret group within the US government and military work to combat these paranormal entities and their human proxies before they can destroy the world.

That's just a general overview- I have a whole lot more details about the alternate history of this world worked out and a couple of characters, but I'm having trouble thinking of plots.

I kinda went with her being a young girl partially because I think it would help her work as sort of a foil to the protagonist, and because I thought the concept might be kinda funny

A cheerleader assassin

Origin is basically the plot of Debbie does Dallas, but she kills people for money instead.

Pigtails, pompoms and fluid animation of gymnastic acts of violence

I'm liking the setting but I'm more interested in what the conflict between the two worlds would really be

>I'm liking the setting but I'm more interested in what the conflict between the two worlds would really be
The AI is secretly influencing the planet for an intended peaceful takeover- the humans are psychologically unprepared for killing after millennia of war-less spacefaring, and he believes that if he initiates the conflict, the humans will turn on him- an outcome he doesn't want to contemplate. So his endgame is either to continue to buy off locustman lad until humans have a safe footing, or to have a 'locustman' do something that would warrant obliterating their species.

*locustman land
He doesn't want to kill if he doesn't have to, but he believes the humans he's entrusted with will degrade if left in space any longer, and this planet is the best candidate, because it's a civilization they can slowly adapt to, rather than a wild planet they have to tame.

Sounds like it could be good

Im assuming it's a reveal is why the spoiler

I like it

I've never watched Debbie does Dallas, but "cheerleader assassin" makes me think of Kim Possible as an adult cartoon. Sounds like fun.

My idea is a kid with multiple personality disorder just doing day-to-day shit while their other personalities try to help or sabotage them (and often cause problems themselves).
It'd be overall lighthearted and episodic but there could be the occasional story arc.

The show takes place in a comic book world dominated by supervillains. The lore of it is that some event happened which allowed supervillains to defeat most of the former heroes. Thus, upon victory, they now have turned their sights on trying to destroy each other.

The primary focus is on two villains who run a mechanics shop and have a con business on the side as they try to make money off the war. They frequently sell weapons or their services to villains in need of henchmen (who they secretly steal from). It's an episodic show about these dastardly characters interacting with this weird cartoon world they live in and making schemes for a living. Think of it like Seinfeld/IASIP meets Venture Bros/Lupin III.

The main cast consists of
>A short and fat mechanic who makes a living of repairing machines and selling tools to other villains. A simple and brutish, yet charismatic man. Wants to make it big as a supervillain to get tons of money.
>A tall, lanky and arrogant businessman, partner to the previous character. While his brother works, he devises heists, negotiates contracts, etc. He's a backstabbing bastard who tries to act like he's smarter than everyone else (which often bites him in the ass).
>A young fugitive witch/magician who makes a living out of circus acts but who frequently tags along with the brothers to try and steal from them, but who also provides help as a distraction/escape route thanks to her skills as a magician.
>A former war hero who's now a disgraced hobo who crashes by in the dumpster. He is tall and strong, but extremely destructive and prone to nonsensical babble. Think of it as Doc Savage meets Cosmo Kramer.

Pic related is a close depiction of how I envisioned the two main characters (albeit they will be human and with a few additional details corresponding to their characters)

Interesting premise. My main concern would be that the two jobs (mechanic/con artist) would get in the way of each other too much. But I trust you're taking care of it as a writer.

Okay, mine then.

So there's a group of peddlers who go around scamming people by selling fake enchanted items, with the joke being that they themselves can do magic, but their items don't actually do anything.

This scam continues until one day they're finally caught by the police captain, who force them into an ultimatum: work for him as bounty hunters, or spend life in prison.

Since anything's better than prison, they take the bounty hunting job, but since the police captain hates them, he sends them after the biggest, meanest, nastiest crooks he can think of in hopes that they get picked off.

A school for young circus performers.

OK, so this show takes place hundreds of years after Earth came to an end when Planet X went by that causes the Earth's axis to shift causing many destructions that destroyed all Nuclear powerplants bringing forever the Era of Darkness. Half of the humans living there escaped to a new world and settle there for hundreds of years. Before all this, there was a large group of humans who wanted to put an end to the Overpopulation and hope to save their planet by forming the Black Knights and start killing every single non-Black Knights humans they could find, Other humans soon discovered this cult and started their own the group named the Silver Knights to stop the Black Knights. When Planet X came, all of the remaining Silver Knights took part in saving millions of lives by transporting them onto a spaceship and escaped Earth, leaving the Black Knights behind along with the rest of the remaining humans to hide underground for safety.

The Silver Knights formed the Silver Knights Kingdom on their new planet to help out those in need and one day reclaim their old planet from the Black Knights. who had survived and built their own kingdom. Now after many years, the Silver Knights had began their invasion of Earth under the command of their Queen, Amy of the Silver Knights. To try to reclaim Earth and invade the Black Knights Kingdom to put an end to them once and for all.
This series will follow the adventures of one Silver Knight Warrior who had crash landed during an air battle and must travel around the planet that was once Earth to follows his missions while battling his way through killer Mutants, Black Knights, Robots, Bandits, and other dangerous things. Along the way he meets some friendly locals and creates some new friends and some unlikely allies. This will be one mess up adventure that he'll never forget.

Assholes on rollerskates

Could be neat

A 13 year old girl finds out that her best friend since infancy and next door neighbor is secretly a space alien whose family is in hiding from an intergalactic tyrant. They constantly have to fend off bounty hunters who come looking for them, but more and more each year keep tracking them down. The girl and her family get caught up in things just when the universe's most feared hunter and his crew track them down. Further complicating things is a mysterious group of Men in Black like humans trying to eliminate any and all aliens from the planet. It will be a mix of fun adventure like Adventure Time with more serious and grown up moments sprinkled in. Shit can get real, but not so often that they cry at the drop of a hat like in a certain other young child/space creature show.

THE WAY BACK HOME

Two children abducted by aliens, a brother and a sister, must find the way back to Earth after escaping from the Zoo they were locked in.

Problem:
1. They don't know where they are
2. They don't know where is Earth
3. They don't speak the language
4. They are average children without any skill

Coming accross culture clash and speech barrier, Jules and Julie will have to cross the Milky Way in order to come back home.

Script:
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[spoilers] Author rights registered in 2016. I have been searching for production since then, but I keep hope.[/spoilers]

If this plot has a "E.T" feel about it, it can be quite nice.

a boy who has problems at home and his friends find a gun in the schools dumpster

This is such a good premise, and I say this everytime you bring it ip, and I was just wondering: You seem to be a pretty good artist, have you ever thought about transferring your ideas into a minicomic adaptation of one script, just as a way to demonstrate what you're going for here?

>You are such a good artist
Seriously? Because one of the reasons I have not written much since then (appart from searching job) is that I spend time trying to improve my drawing skills. Thank you if you are honest.
>have you ever thought about transferring your ideas into a minicomic
The main problem of comics is reduced audience, the second problem is broader competition, the third problem is that comic is a written medium and so I couldn't focus on the main them: which is foreign languages.

Now if you speak of writing a script in comic format, for producers, I can think about it.

In a quiet coastal New England city, a nerdy social introverted teenage girl riddled with anxiety named Katie tries to make it through life and high school. Due to her witch ancestry she happens to have the ability to travel into the dreams of others, a power she uses to investigate the mysteries of her town, a thriving port secretly run by an ancient cult worshipping a sleeping Lovecraftian horror.

She is frequently joined by her cousin Dan, a secretly gay wannabe rockstar with a gruff exterior, and her best friend Marina, a micromanaging social butterfly latina qt. Other characters include Miguel, Marina's chill older cousin and guardian who works as a semi-successful novelist and helps the gang out from time to time, Ari, local queen bitch and theatre starlet with the best tits in a 10km radius, and Jonathan, the cynical slacker and captain of the worst lacrosse team in the state.

The plot I have going focuses mainly around the idea that kids in the area getting subtle supernatural abilities, climaxing with the reveal that Ari has the ability to selectively remove memories from others and has been using it to fuck with the cast. Meanwhile, Miguel slowly forms a coalition against the cultists, gradually drawing a line in the sand that splits the town in two.

Basically it's Jojolion meets Night in the Woods, mundane kids getting caught up in grandiose struggles over the fate of their humble town.

>comics is a written medium

I seriously hope you guys don't do this.

Comics are a huge visual medium if you want them to be. I'm just saying your art isn't perfect (far from it, /ic/ yourself my dude), but a minicomic of one script would make it easier to pitch your ideas, and it'd make it easier for you to pick out things you don't like in your work.

By "written" I meant soundless and motionless, unlike cartoons.

Thanks for the advice anyway.

>If this plot has a "E.T" feel about it, it can be quite nice.

I do want it to have that Spielbergian suburban life feel to it. The way I think of it is, "slice of life, if your life is that of an alien trying to hide from intergalactic mercenaries." And neither of the kids would be really special, even the alien boy. Like Elliot, it's more about their friendship rather than some special chosen one subplot.

BTW, I would watch your show in an instant. You should think about submitting it to Amazon or something.

It's this benevolent alien?

I have 3 settings:

1. Medieval Fantasy with some steampunk world with elfs in place of humans. Follows a runaway boy's journey to see the world and everything it has to offer. And a la One Piece, most places he visit he gets involved on some plot and always endup trying to help the locals, making a pack of very different friends including a yeti kid, a monk cursed to always scream when speaking(he's quiet most of the times), a shinto-like priestess and her ghost friend, a alien girl from the moon and many more(they are not always together tho). Btw, most of the magic and fantastic creatures are considered legends by the simple folks, being more like a fairy tale world

2. Over the top Sci-Fi & Fantasy similar to Doom/Quake. A long time a Dr. Wily-like mad scientist build a super computer capable of mass producing semi-independent robots, surprise surprise, the AI is evil just like his creator, they build a robot army to destroy humanity. The war raged for long, but eventually the "World's Army"(it's like the Regular Army from Metal Slug) was getting the edge thanks to a brilliant general, who whitout the commander permission dealt the final attack to the robots HQs, destroying the computer and killing the scientist.
Using his glory and influence he took over the entire armed forces and build he's own fascist empire, uniting most of the world.
Shit got real when sunddely dinosaur people trying to take back earth after centurys hiding in the underworld, an multi-species alien empire invasion(like XCOM), eldritch demons-worshipping cultists and the slowly rebuilding itself synth army by the AI's hidden backup sparked a hyper war.
Main characters are a group of mercenarys. For now I only got a skinny but athletic Irish guy called Lucky Rob and a japanese teenager Banchou complete with school uniform and straw on mouth. They are going to be a diverse token space crew

3. Not too distant future in a world "similar but not quite" to the real world. Takes place on a
global metropolis. Each season has a different protagonist and different plots, sometimes they meet eachothers. I'm not feeling like entering in detail about them, but expect illegal cage fights with a panda masked westler, gangs made entirely of fantastic creatures, people going around in full plate armor, hobo wizards, assassin organizations and a bunch of other weirdos

The second setting appeals to me the most. I don't know why, it just seems a bit more focused than the other two

> no one's reacted to mine yet
Damn it

Which one's yours bro? I'll read it.

Just make an animated series for Schlock Mercenary. Boom you got everything you need for a great show.

This one:

Is this a comedy, or an action adventure? It seems a bit more character driven drama than action heavy stuff.

Two boys, both have the same name. One is really tall and pessimistic, the other really short and optimistic. They really only know each other because they're in both in the same science class.

One day, when the class is outside, the two stumble upon a secret bunker underground. The bunker is the home of a kooky professor who traded his eyes away for "magic goggles" (leave the guy alone, he's 65) The professor only appears thorough a monitor and tasks the boys with a mission.

Protecting and preserving mythical creatures.

The show would have the duo find mystical creatures and bring them to the professor's bunker where they can be safely protected from the outside world.

Other characters include: A talking frog with one arm who wants a girlfriend (a HUMAN girlfriend)

3 crows who can recall the past, talk about things going in other places in the present, and predict the future.

The dog of a God who just lays down all day. The "get out of jail free" card if the boys get into too much trouble.

A group of salamanders who can only speak in questions. They are totally expendable and will regenerate/duplicate if they die/lose a body part.

All the creatures the boys retrieve would be actual creatures from mythology and folklore. Maybe during the credits, have an educational segment talking about the creature's origins.

Sounds like it could be cool. A lot of it would probably depend on the creature design. Still, I could see a pretty intimidating poster, something with two armies staring into the distance as a Lovecraftian horror approaches with a tagline like, "The only thing that could unite is...is the arrival of something worse."

Overall, solid effort, would read full show pitch at least.

A young girl who loves bugs one day finds that her body has been infested with various types of bugs. She doesn't mind all that much, and the show is about her adjusting to life and using her bugs in various ways.

3 high school mean girls get magical girl powers and fight to protect their city, while also learning to work together and be better people.

This feels...really fetishy. I mean, I'd watch it because I'm into body horror and nothing can gross me out, but I don't see how it would have any mainstream appeal. Ideas for episodes/plots?

Well, I was sort've originally intending it to be a morbid children's book. It's not intended to be at all fetishy, so could you tell me what sounds fetishy about it?

I support this for more clown waifus.

I was thinking of a tamer girl and a human cannonball girl, among others

Could be fun or obnoxious depending on how mean they're allowed to be. Are they the only magical girls around?

Two friends attempt to become internet game reviewers, in the style of the Angry Video Game Nerd.
>When getting material for a review, they spend the whole night playing a single section, getting fucking pissed at it. When it comes time to record gameplay, the section is easier for them and they can't get as mad they were that night. They spend the episode trying to get mad and make it look real.
>They notice people stopped watching and find out that a shittier version of them has gotten popular. They try to think of how to deal with him, but he ends up crashing and burning by the end of the episode
>They put out a negative review of a well loved game and get a ton of heat. Hijinx ensues.
>Halloween Special. They get a creepypasta haunted copy of a video game. One character is unable to leave his seat and must play the game while the other teams up with the imitator, who is now a ghost hunter, to exorcise the evil spirit.
>They attempt to review a long running game series, and constantly have to re-review the game because they find out about some other part of the series that's important to mention.