I was going to do 4 kids walk into a bank at long last, but it's storytime of pain weekend so here's one of the ultimate tumblr things they want into comics, a girl gang magical girl series. So let's read this comic that was made on a go pad. I already did Moontstruck, and after this 4 kids walk into a bank.
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Luis Jenkins
Jacob Cox
the people we can blame for this.
Easton Martinez
One character is Muslim Louise Belcher.
Matthew Wood
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Colton Smith
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Robert Edwards
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Carson Wilson
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Bentley Lee
anyone reading or am I crazy?
Colton Evans
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Levi Rivera
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Christopher Ortiz
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Cameron Scott
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Liam Ross
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Xavier Barnes
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Luis Lopez
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Luke Sanchez
I'm just clicking through to see if that girl pisses herself.
Asher Myers
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Ayden Baker
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Caleb Diaz
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Oliver Phillips
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Samuel Butler
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Matthew Thompson
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Nolan Diaz
>Black Mask
Do these guys specialise in SJW comics or something?
Ethan Scott
Yes.
Jack Scott
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Jackson Gutierrez
The comic that helped make the company was occupy comics. It doesn't help that new creators are well inducted in the Tumblr scene. They tend to have they same flaws like one page suspense I call it.
Carter Bell
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Colton Carter
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Jack Jenkins
second issue.
Nicholas Lee
w-what is this shit
Jack Allen
I read the entire first issue and... meh. I'm out. That was a pile of boring nothing.
Brody Watson
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Oliver Morgan
ye, that's what bad about these sjw comics, they're just dull
at least millar's edge is entertaining
Robert Morris
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Zachary Ortiz
To me the worst comics are the boring ones, safe is not good writing.
Jack Edwards
In one story I was writing I created a gang girl called the Daisy Chains, who all wanted to be named Daisy Chain but constantly argued over who gets to be the main Daisy.
Jayden Brown
You should do Beautiful Canvas. Also check out the first issue of PanelxPanel which spotlights it.
Hunter Gray
Like in so many girl gang stories there is someone named Daisy Chain so I decided to make like 6 of them. This one does not have sadly enough.
Kevin Peterson
GAYYYYYYY.
Luke Anderson
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Caleb Young
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Lincoln Martinez
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Lucas Evans
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Andrew Scott
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Brandon Torres
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Isaac Ward
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Camden King
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Lucas Thompson
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Michael Powell
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Caleb Richardson
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Nathan Jenkins
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Nathan Lee
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Liam Evans
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Eli Lopez
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Mason Gomez
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Bentley Howard
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Ethan Ross
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Sebastian Taylor
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Austin Gutierrez
Third issue.
Xavier Taylor
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Liam Parker
Oh god. it's like bad SU meets shitty sailor moon cosplay henshin.
Xavier Rivera
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Colton Mitchell
This comic really lacks the appeal of actual magical girl series. It doesn't help that the costumes have no design synergy with each other. Like at least Zodiac Star Force took the best design elements.
Parker Cruz
also I just really hate side cuts, makes me think they got a lobotomy.
Henry Hernandez
>somehow the art has gotten even worse
Colton Green
Let me actually get some commentary here. The narrator is one of the worst part of the series. It's very tell not show, like it talks about how we are supposed to feel about characters, which as a rule I say is terrible writing 101.
Jose James
you can really tell this is someone first's work.
Bentley Reed
Their logo is literally antifa.
I'm astounded that they actually got an eisner nomination, although I don't think it was for this book.
Kevin Clark
Also the world building is terrible, I mean why ever start at a magical girl school? I really hate YA academy fiction.
Gabriel Sullivan
If it's the same artist as the first two issues, their linework has deteriorated into thick smudges instead of the thinner lines they were originally using.
Caleb Perez
It was Kim and Kim the dirty pair ripoff, really the best thing they made is 4 kids walk into a bank.
Christian Foster
It's apparently a terrible webcomic that that's too cool for things like characterization or a coherent plot, or any sort of visual storytelling acument.
I know we shit all over America's book, but it's good to keep in mind how deep the shithole really goes.
Tyler Rogers
as far as I can tell it's the same,
Andrew Gutierrez
This art looks stolen.
Benjamin Flores
I'm trying to really look into a deconstruction of books like these. Maybe make an anthology with that as the theme.
Caleb Edwards
comics like this give me hope i can still make it
Ian Sanders
for got the image fuck the captcha. But here's what I would want in a deconstruction anthology
*a woman who is actually straight tries be a representative of queer culture alienates her actually gay friends.
*A gay man is forced to act camp, when all he want to do is be like Rambo
*A story about accepting you cant be friend with everybody
* it really was just a phase.
* a trans character who hates the trans community.
A lot of this is based on people I know.
Nathan Evans
Still my other deconstuction about Princesses is my focus. I would love to edit something like this.
Joshua Stewart
at least it's always a riot reading America with everyone here
Nathan Phillips
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Kevin Reed
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Eli Myers
Oh god. Even Dobson does better backgroudnds than this. Hell, even if they're abandoning all setting, they could at least set a mood, or have some sort of messaging through color. A fucking gradient would be an improvement.
James Taylor
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Charles Long
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Brody Bell
let me put it this way there is reason why I made this the storytime of pain.
Luke Brown
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Brody Adams
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Robert Robinson
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Carson Howard
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Aiden Lewis
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Tyler Rivera
that third panel shows this artist could have potential...if only they'd practice more and gave a single fuck
Camden Nguyen
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Lincoln Hall
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Jayden Morales
The static conversation scenes fail at the basics of anatomy and scene construction so hard, that I'm convinced the action scenes are lifted straight from manga.
Andrew Young
Last issue this cover was used to advertise the series. If your going to fuck over me with false hope I at least want the art to look like this.
Nathan Lee
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Jordan Allen
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Levi Morales
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Joseph Butler
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Aiden Foster
Whats with all the ridiculously cringey swear word replacements? Does "heck" or "dang" no longer suffice? That and the magical girl shtick that I'm suddenly supposed to care about is making me recoil into another dimension