SuperHoes

last thread: prostitutes that double as superheroes or superheroes that double as prostitutes. from left to right our characters are: Burst, Suck, Stretch, and ButtZilla. This thread we're focusing on story and worldbuilding. These characters are still without an origin. Seeing as there's four of them that undergo bodily changes maybe it should be something akin to the FF.

Nobody cares. Come back when you have more than a simple concept and a desire for people to draw free art for you.

>It's because people here think just making a sexy female character and saying "have at her, Sup Forums!" will instantly make the board fall in love with that character and draw sexy fanart of her and shit. We're smart enough not to fall for that kind of manipulative bullshit. The original characters that have lasted here the longest have survived because their creators -- or the board in general -- saw fit to give them actual personalities and put them into interesting worlds where they can ostensibly have fun adventures and whatnot.
>Creating a character just for fanservice is fine, but don't expect that character to "catch on" with others just because she has nice tits or a thick ass.

Our characters have personalities. We don't have a world yet, but I want to work on that now. I don't expect it to catch on because of ass or thighs or tits, but is an aggressive response really that warranted?

Reposting refs by the way.

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>Nobody cares. Come back when you have more than a simple concept and a desire for people to draw free art for you.
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Quit trying to make other people do your worldbuilding for you. Build your world, your characters, and at least the bare minimum of a story concept -- something beyond "LOL superhero whores" -- and maybe this board will give a shit. Until then, fuck off, because we are not your personal motherfucking creative army, you nutswallowing faggot.

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>Quit trying to make other people do your worldbuilding for you. Build your world, your characters, and at least the bare minimum of a story concept -- something beyond "LOL superhero whores" -- and maybe this board will give a shit. Until then, fuck off, because we are not your personal motherfucking creative army, you nutswallowing faggot.

This is not my personal project that I'm working on alone.

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>This is not my personal project that I'm working on alone.

Then go work on it with whoever you're working on it with and quit trying to get Sup Forums to do your work for you, you mouthbreathing picklefucker.

The other people are here on this board. You're angry at me over things you've made up.

pickle rick?

Quit trying to get other people to do work you should be doing. Get the fuck off Sup Forums. Nobody wants you here. Nobody wants you, period. Your mother probably wishes she could have aborted you. Your father probably wishes he would have raped you harder so you'd curl up into a fetal position and kill yourself. The world will be better off without you in it, and this board would be better off without you trying to turn it into your own personal creative army. Now go stab yourself in the throat with a toothpick, you ignorant, lazy, asslicking cum-swallowing rat-eater. Christ, I wish I could punch you in the face.

umad

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Yes, I'm mad that you think your shitty idea should be fleshed out by other people rather than your own sorry ass. I'm mad that you're lazy enough to believe Sup Forums could do the work for you. I am fucking furious that you think your shitty idea, which has no real future and will never amount to a goddamn fucking thing before you give up on it and choke yourself trying to swallow printouts of your failure while you masturbate to cocrophilia porn, deserves the same level of attention and respect and even love as anything Sup Forums has ever come up with and crafted as a community. Fuck you, fuck your idea, fuck your laziness, and fuck reality for lining up in such a way that you came to exist.

Now please, go back to watching people eat shit, you fucking asshole.

/thread

You replied to a different guy man that wasn't even me

>threading your own posts

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I don't /thread my own posts, and fuck you besides. Your mother should have driven into that pole while you were in the passenger seat.

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Anyway, what should we do for the origin story? There's the Facts of Life idea from the last thread were maybe they mess a pimp's business and then they need to work up for him to make up for the damage.

We could have them be part of an experiment gone wrong like the Fantastic Four. If any of them are already prostitutes it's probably Suck. They go through bodily changes when they get powers and maybe they have trouble finding work because of it. People don't want to hire people that look like whores for their business. and since they can't find work Suck introduces them to her pimp.

>last thread
>Anyway
lol these keep crashing faster and faster, and the funny thing is that you keep getting more delusional, and angry about it

I'm not angry, everyone else is.

>Anyway, what should we do for the origin story?

You should go write it yourself and come back when you have something worth reading. Sup Forums is not your personal creative army.

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No you won't. You'll try this thread again tomorrow -- because this one will inevitably die before tomorrow -- and maybe the day after that before you finally give up. You're a lazy asshole who is trying to get others to do your work for you. All you have is a simple concept, a few sexy pictures, the hope that a bunch of fetish characters can be more than that, and absolutely no discipline to sit down and do the work required to make them more than that.

You want the reward without the work involved. You want Sup Forums to do the work for you so you can capitalize upon it and say you did it all along. Why bother writing a bunch of shit when Sup Forums can do it for you?

Well, we're not going to do it for you. Go write it yourself or go fuck yourself; either way, just fucking go -- and don't come back until you have something worth showing us.

Stevie Wonder is blind.

And you are blind to your own laziness and lack of discipline. Nobody wants to write your bullshit fetish story for you. Go write it yourself or go fuck yourself, but either way, you need to just fucking go.

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Go write the story yourself or go fuck yourself; either way, just fucking go, you undisciplined hack.

bump

I don't know if you've noticed, but nobody here but me cares about this thread. Nobody here cares about your shitty idea. Nobody here cares about you.

Go write the story yourself or go fuck yourself; either way, just fucking go, you undisciplined hack.

This is so embarrassing. The last thread got archived with 66 replies and you're still trying to force it.

You seem to care a lot.

I care enough to tell you that this will be a monumental disaster for you if you keep trying to push it. Like said, the last thread you did for this shit got archived with only 66 replies. Had you not bumped it when it hit Page 10 out of your lazy, desperate need to have others do the work for you, this thread would have died with about half that many replies. Nobody else here but the two of us care enough about this shitty project to carry on our little game -- you out of desperation and laziness, me out of schadenfreude and spite.

This is not going to end well for you. No one is going to write your story for you. No one is going to do the work for you, and you are not going to do the work because you are either too bored, afraid, or stupid to do the work yourself. This project will fail like so many other shitty ideas that have been dropped into the collective lap of Sup Forums, and you will slink away knowing that this is the absolute best idea you could come up with and the best response you can get is from some bored jackoff telling you to go kill yourself.

Write the story yourself or go fuck yourself; either way, just fucking go.

they look fucking disgusting, maybe choose attractive women to base them off of.

Also: Better names. All those names are unimaginative, lowest-common-denominator bullshit that any 12-year-old could come up with. I mean, really: "Buttzilla"?

>All those names are unimaginative, lowest-common-denominator bullshit that any 12-year-old could come up with.
That's the point.

Then you need a better fucking point, you talentless hack.

When "Buttzilla" is the best name out of the bunch, it's not really a selling point.

Besides "Burst" they were all placeholders but people liked them so they became permanent.

>people liked them

Who, the horny 12-year-olds you showed this shit to? Also, you really shouldn't be showing porn to kids, you sick fuck.

the people in the other threads. Also, are you under the impression that 12 year olds don't watch porn?

>the people in the other threads

If Sup Forums is your focus testing group, this shit really is doomed.

You know, I'd be down with this idea except that there's nothing clever or funny about this at all. Can't you at least come up with names that aren't so childish? I mean, Stripperella's been done already. This isn't a new thing.

Also, all the criticism leveled at this idea in general is on the right tack. There's nothing inspired about this idea.

Now on the other hand, a comic featuring a gang of prostitutes who become magical girls might be funny. There are a wide variety of origin stories you could come up with, even, ranging from harnessing the purity of the runaway pastor's daughter to outright being chosen because of their lewdness by Dionysus. Unironic thanks for this idea.

just make it by yourself, dude. it's your idea.

Why the fuck is this ridiculous shit allowed on Sup Forums

Follow-up idea:
>Their powers are directly tied to their purity so only the pastor's kid has any magical powers to speak of, the rest of them basically just beat people up
>Will she trade being sexually satisfied for losing her powers?

>idea in the spoilers

See, that is a good idea. It has some actual thought and ingenuity behind it. It tries to be something more than generic "superhero whores" bullshit, and it can easily be expanded upon and taken in several different directions. Meanwhile, OP's idea is the kind of overly derivative bullshit that even a stoned teenager could think up. If you know your shit is derivative, look at the absolute basic parts of the idea and see where it can be taken in a different direction.

>Can't you at least come up with names that aren't so childish?
Multiple are (or at least were) working on this and liked the names. The idea was that the dumbest member of the group names them.
>Now on the other hand, a comic featuring a gang of prostitutes who become magical girls might be funny.
How is that any different? At all?

Your idea is bottom-tier garbage that anyone can come up with while they're drunk or stoned. ("What if [hic] what if Wonder Woman was a fuckin' whore, bro? [drunken laughter]") The other guy's idea requires a little more thought and nuance to see through, and it can be expanded in ways your simplistic derivative bullshit cannot.

>The idea was that the dumbest member of the group names them.

No wonder this shit is so retarded. You hear the dirt worst idea pitched to you, take it seriously, and act like it's the best thing since Sliced Bread #2.

It's really not just my idea. Several people were here that were interested in and supported it, though they've now inexplicably disappeared.

Can you expand on that? I really don't see a difference. How are magical girl prostitutes better than superhero prostitutes? Anybody familiar with Sailor Moon could come up with that.

>No wonder this shit is so retarded. You hear the dirt worst idea pitched to you, take it seriously, and act like it's the best thing since Sliced Bread #2.
Nobody's acting like that. And very little ideas were being pitched. While there were people interested I was the only one really trying to develop things further.
>Your idea is bottom-tier garbage that anyone can come up with while they're drunk or stoned. ("What if [hic] what if Wonder Woman was a fuckin' whore, bro? [drunken laughter]")
>"What if [hic] Sailor Moon was a fuckin' whore, bro? [drunken laughter]"

>Anybody familiar with Sailor Moon could come up with that.

Yes, the basic core concept is derivative and uninspired, but it is the idea of how they become magical girls, which of them become magical girls, what powers they have, how those powers change their lives, and how they could lose those powers that create the internal and external conflicts which could drive a story. even expands upon the basic idea with the idea that the group is mostly de-powered; there's a lot of fun that could be had with subverting the idea of a "magical girl" who lacks the actual "magical" part of that identity but makes up for it with physical brutality, which can also conflict and contrast with the one powered magical girl's abilities. It's about taking a specific core concept and coming up with a unique take on the idea. All you've done is reach for the lowest rung on a ten-foot ladder, touched it with your fingertip, and asked Sup Forums to help you climb the other nine-and-a-half feet to the top.

>Anybody familiar with Sailor Moon could come up with that.
It's actually been done by multiple hentai series already too.

>Several people were here that were interested in and supported it, though they've now inexplicably disappeared.
That holds no water on an anonymous imageboard. You could have been talking to a 14-year-old summerfag for all you knew.
The idea of magical girls is very much tied to the notion of goodness/virtuousness equaling power. So there's already a deliberate contrast when the magical girls are women of ill repute.
Not to mention that most magical girl series are relatively chaste due to their marketing towards very young girls or men looking for pure waifus. People get upset when someone cosplaying Sailor Moon acts slutty because it doesn't jive with her character, in part because her skimpy outfit contrasting with her naivety is appealing.

I'm sure it's been done somewhere already, but then again, it's not as ingrained as sexy/slutty superheroines in American popular consciousness. Examples are anything to do with She-Hulk, Starfire, Power Girl, etc, for instance. Heck, even some iterations of official characters have been explicitly prostitutes in the Big Two.

>It's actually been done by multiple hentai series already too.
Yeah, I bet off to shit like that once with Sailor Mercury.
>Yes, the basic core concept is derivative and uninspired, but it is the idea of how they become magical girls, which of them become magical girls, what powers they have, how those powers change their lives, and how they could lose those powers that create the internal and external conflicts which could drive a story.
Nigga? Every creative idea depends on the execution. Nothing that you just said is unique to that idea. It was probably a mistake to focus on the characters first, but I wanted to flesh out the premise more in the last thread and this thread.
>The idea of magical girls is very much tied to the notion of goodness/virtuousness equaling power.
I forgot about that. I get what you're saying now. It's like it's not high concept enough. The idea of superhero prostitutes isn't inherently interesting. Maybe sexy, but not engaging. I'm disappointed. I didn't know a slight change would interest more people. Makes me wonder why BimboSquad failed as hard as it did then? You remember that? I think they were magical girls.
>That holds no water on an anonymous imageboard. You could have been talking to a 14-year-old summerfag for all you knew.
Didn't consider that either. I guess this is over.

Meant to link to this too.
I really fucked up with the links and spacing for this post:

>It was probably a mistake to focus on the characters first

No, it wasn't. Your mistake was in trying to create fleshed-out characters without an actual story or world to put them in. There is a saying I recall reading somewhere, though I cannot remember where, that goes something like this: "If you write a Batman story, and you can turn it into a Superman story, it isn't a very good Batman story." Your characters need a story which can only be told by those specific characters; dropping them into some generic "pimps and whores" wank and giving them superpowers doesn't do shit for anyone, including you, because that is a basic-level concept.

Figure out why these characters exist in their world, what their ultimate goals are, and why their story requires them to be who they are and do what they do. Once you have that down, then -- and only then -- will you have my interest.

And for fuck's sake, change the names.

>The idea of superhero prostitutes isn't inherently interesting.

...so you need something more than the sex and the fanservice to hook people into the idea and the world in which those prostitutes exist. That is what I have been trying to tell you: Look at the core concept, figure out how you can diverge from expectations to make it interesting, and build from there.

If you really, truly, honestly want to put in the work, you can make this something more than the base concept. But if you don't want to put in the work, I suggest letting this thread die and never bringing this idea up again.

Also, I want you to understand that any basic-level core concept will sound inherently uninteresting. "Guy fights off terrorists on his own" is something we've seen a hundred times before, but by expanding the concept with different takes on the individual pieces of that concept -- "An unassuming off-duty cop fights off a group of thieves who make themselves look like terrorists, all while trapped inside a giant skyscraper" -- you end up getting a far more interesting idea. (Or, in this case, the movie "Die Hard".)

A basic concept is a starting point, not the endgame. Your goal is to find ways that you can subvert and play with what people expect from the basic concept -- "The cop looks older and far less buff than the average action hero" -- so your idea becomes more compelling. So what can you do with the idea of superhero prostitutes that might make someone pay more attention to your idea?

I'd be fine with putting in the work. I was trying to, but it's not worth it. People hate it. People hate me. They'll be able to see through a revamped version of the idea and hate it because of what it used to be.
>So what can you do with the idea of superhero prostitutes that might make someone pay more attention to your idea?
Can't think of a single thing. Maybe them being prostitutes is a secret? Or they're only prostitutes for other superheroes? It is pretty limited.

Dude, I'm the guy who was telling you to fuck off all thread, and now I'm here trying to help you. If you really want to put in the work and make this something beyond the core concept, I want to help. The only reason I kept telling you to fuck off is because it didn't seem like you had any interest in doing anything more than making a silly fanservice thing. If you want to actually expand this idea and go somewhere interesting with it, I say, "Let's fucking go, son."

>Can't think of a single thing.

Okay, don't think about the prostitutes themselves, then. Think about the other major part of this idea: the setting. What can you do with the world that subverts the first impression of "a world with superpowered prostitutes"? Maybe whoring is legal, but only superpowered people can be legal whores. If whoring is still illegal, maybe all the pimps are women (superpowered or not).

>it didn't seem like you had any interest in doing anything more than making a silly fanservice thing.
I wouldn't say that's not true, but I'm very open to changing things (including the core concept) because we created the characters first and as a result a lot of things don't make sense. Someone last thread suggested that they're actually strippers and while I don't think that's anymore interesting it feels more appropriate.

>Think about the other major part of this idea: the setting. What can you do with the world that subverts the first impression of "a world with superpowered prostitutes"?

Yeah, we never developed the setting. I was thinking maybe it takes place in a world where prostitution is legal or that their prostitution is allowed because they work for the government, but that never made it anywhere.

Forgot to mention that I was most piqued when there was the idea that they would kind of be like the powerpuff girls in how they operated.

This is too fetishy and not fun.

Bimbo heros died and this will too

Well, if you went with the stripper idea, you'd probably be accused of ripping off Stripperella, which wasn't all that good to begin with anyway. Keep it as a sort-of backup idea, but stick with the prostitute idea for now.

>I was thinking maybe it takes place in a world where prostitution is legal or that their prostitution is allowed because they work for the government

See, this is what I'm talking about. You're taking a general concept and fleshing out individual pieces to make a better picture. Why would they be working for the government?

>I was most piqued when there was the idea that they would kind of be like the powerpuff girls in how they operated

A more humorous approach would be the best way to go with this idea. And besides, someone being sexy is often better when it's funny, too.

>too fetishy

Which is why we're now trying to go beyond the surface-level fetish-y appeal and find a gem of an idea worth exploring.

the biggest problem is this is blatantly sexual. If you try to justify the character by saying all prostitution is legal it makes them less unique. We might as well be making an porn comic at that point, which would only lead to this discussion into /aco/ territory.

On a side note take at look what japan has done with their Gal trope; you have Galko-chan and Hajimete no gal. Two shows where the perceived slut is actually a nice and caring person. With that in mind better solution is that these girls are street level heroes, who, due to their surrounding and costume choices everyone assumes that they are prostitutes. Of course this lead to removing the more sexual aspects of the character, which honestly is for the better.

...huh. That actually is a pretty neat idea. And it fits in with the whole comedic angle that I had in mind.

>Why would they be working for the government?
I have no idea what I was thinking at the time besides "the government needs superheroes" or that the government wants to harness their power. In the very first thread an idea was thrown out that they'd be like Charlie's Angels.

>With that in mind better solution is that these girls are street level heroes, who, due to their surrounding and costume choices everyone assumes that they are prostitutes.

That sounds almost exactly like the BimboSquad idea that died.

I never bimbo squad, and I can't seem to find anything about it. What was it.

>it's another fetish themed circlejerk that will go on for at least six months

You got this group of women. They live in a city with a horrible crime rate. They receive superpowers one day (the how was never figured out something with space), but to access their superpowers they need to transform into stereotypical dumb sex-obsessed blondes. They decide to become superheroes anyway though because they love their city and no one else is doing anything to help it. Their official name is "Cosmic Cuties", but because of the way they look and act when they transformed their nicknamed by civilians and journalists "Bimbo Squad".

I'm not gonna make another thread after this.

>but to access their superpowers they need to transform into stereotypical dumb sex-obsessed blondes.

I'm pretty sure the problem again is that both problem are inherently sexual, it takes the fun out of it. If this project tones down the cheesecake it could be salvageable.

>it could be salvageable.
All you've been doing for the past 4 threads is rubbing shit in your hands, and screaming about how it's going to be gold. It's not.
You idea men are the real problem.

>I'm pretty sure the problem again is that both problem are inherently sexual,
Probably. I think people saw "bimbo" and were immediately turned off from that.
>If this project tones down the cheesecake it could be salvageable.
So we should remove the prostitution entirely then?

You replied to the wrong nigga and this is the third thread you dumbass motherfucker

bump? I'm confused as to if we're actually repurposing these ideas or not.
I don't want to make another thread just to be told to fuck off and get raped.

bump

I was going to draw something until buttzilla. That is the most retarded name

>bi-hourly bumps for a thread that nobody cares about

Holy shit this is pathetic. Fucking stop.