With the first chapter finally done, what are your thoughts Sup Forums?
The Champion Chapter 1 is Complete
Robert Carter
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Matthew Perry
I'll check it out later
Kevin Martinez
Astoundingly generic.
Kayden Torres
I like it a lot desu
Adrian Ward
It's . . . alright. It's trying to be a more overtly depressive version of One Punch Man to a sense, and it's not quite working.
Not overly absurd enough.
Thomas Peterson
The art could be a little better, honestly. Story-wise there is nothing really wrong with it, but it could make a better job of showing the setting. All we ever see is the arena.
Jonathan Robinson
I think his strength is back to the college roommates being shitty people
Easton Miller
ben get off Sup Forums and make a new issue of the vapors.
Asher Wood
Benny-boy sure did his best to impress his mongloid friend, but I prefer the Vapors
Brody Wright
It's got some good ideas, but the vapors was better
Wyatt Hughes
What's it about?
Benjamin Parker
i wanted to write that i like it a lot but already said that, fuck
it was pretty great
Leo Powell
It's pretty good, he's got me invested in the magic system at least.
Christopher Reyes
fuck off pcp fags
Luke Long
PORN WHEN
Asher Ward
>tfw ben didn't vote mumkey off the pcp
i always knew he was a good man
Oliver Watson
says a lot about him
Joshua Peterson
OP didnt link to the actual start of the story
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Christopher Edwards
it's okay, good art though
Robert Sanders
ben is a wholesome individual
Aaron James
Good story with many interesting ideas but, though quite stylish, his art needs to improve. It looks wonky in so many places (the anatomy often looks unintentionally wrong, what the fuck is up with Damian's face, etc.). Despite its shortcomings, I enjoyed it though.
James Smith
That's was fucking amazing, come to the /hyw/ threads sometime love to have you there
Benjamin Robinson
Yes same once I saw him buff the armor dude I knew this was dope
Aiden Allen
It's ok at best, but Vapors and even White Lion were much better and by far more interesting and unique.
Jonathan Powell
Vapors didn't make a lick of sense
Andrew Foster
I really liked the ending of this chapter. The twist was well put together.
Eli Smith
I like it, but it seems to be missing something...
Zachary Evans
There! Now it's art.
John Lewis
>Ben Saint
Fuck, I haven't heard from him since I stopped caring about the horse cartoon. What's he been up to?
Jayden Anderson
patreon dot com slash ben saint
Dylan Rodriguez
Drawin some good comics
Juan Howard
mixing maraschino cherries with milk
Isaiah Butler
good mem
Christian Flores
Living out of a dumpster mostly