Herny finally made a webcomics out of some of his characters. Any thoughts?

Herny finally made a webcomics out of some of his characters. Any thoughts?

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hoppinggills.com/
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*webcomic

Art is solid and it looks promising, though i still want to read/see more of the story to give a proper opinion.

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He stopped doing porn of Priscilla for this? I hate it on principle.

Nice background. Cool to see that he can do more than good porn. Hopefully he can do a sustained narrative too. Looking forward to the snake chick showing up.

Every building in that picture follows like a trillion different perspective lines and I feel I should be more mad about it than I am. It's easy enough to say "it's cartoony, give it a pass" but really cartoony stuff like Spirou has wobbly buildings and cities and general backgrounds that maintain perspective just fine.

>and I feel I should be more mad about it than I am.
I don't know if anyone has ever told you this before but you don't have to nitpick everything and it's not integral to enjoying any medium or body of work

if it bugs you so much, you should hilariously stalk the author and send unsolicited edits of his comic to him just to annoy him. If it matters to you do something, if it doesn't why complain? Am Am I the only one here without autism?

>Am I the only one here without autism?

Probably.

>If it matters to you do something, if it doesn't why complain? Am Am I the only one here without autism?
>Am Am

Now I have the autism for pointing that out. Good laugh.

In all seriousness though, I just wanted to point it out to give the author some feedback that wasn't just "this sucks" or dicksucking, since that's the only context I have for his work so far. Does the OP plan on storytiming or is this the extent of the comic so far?

took me a second glance to notice that a sword sign and not someone who threw a sword at a building

You could simply say "the perspective is off on the buildings" without sounding like a weird uptight aspie about it.

The character designs are SO GOOD.

I'd love to follow basically any character that appears on a page.

Post his characters at least, numbnuts.

Got my guy in the comic and it's a good read so I'm happy

>You could simply say "the perspective is off on the buildings" without sounding like a weird uptight aspie about it.

You sound like the kind of person that would call any negative feedback an uptight aspie, honestly

I'm not though. I criticize things I like all the time. I don't say shit like "I should be mad about this". Try not being a weird uptight aspie when conveying your criticism and maybe you'll find people will be more receptive to it.

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i hope the guy i submitted gets in.

probably wont

Critics are not exempt from criticism themselves,

Why did Herny make such a cute little goblin that will probably never be seen again? Why would he do that to me? I mean his readers?

Will there be nudity? His fish girl OC needs more lewds

Would've been nice if you posted the link.
hoppinggills.com/

Don't know much about the guy's stuff besides saving some lewd fanart he drew. Looks cute.

She's cute, buuuuut Gobos gotta die

He has said that it will not be lewd.
He has also said that he doesn't want to lewd the characters in the comic. Which means no Priscilla porn, and no Selena (snake) porn from Herny himself.

Hasn't stopped other artists from doing it, though. And he seems fine with that.

Oh he encourages OTHERS to do that.