Girls und Panzer und /ak/
also little girls on combat drugs
Dumping the first chapter of Youjo Senki
proofreading would be appreciated as always
/ak/ thread
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oh boy, back right on time
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>666
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Connor Morales
Okay, let me try to help here:
>little girl
'A little girl' would be better
>the empire has declared a proclamation of war
Redundant. Go for either "declared war" or "issued a proclamation"
>border violations of
"border violations by" makes more sense in this context, although you'd have to confirm with Swiss Can't read the runes myself.
>successively
would replace with "with all haste" at the end of the sentence.
>given out a one-sided advice
replace advice by 'ultimatum'
>the threats of no matter how many people
Threats; no matter how many people utther them
>the empires foes
the empire's foes
This picture is unclear. If I understand it correctly, he's urging the other guy to tender his resignation. so I'd replace the whole text from the last two panels with:
'Indeed. Hence, instead of forcing a "bad conduct discharge" on our faithful employees, allowing them to resign of their own volition would be better for them, don't you agree?'
>minutely
as required of me
first panel. 'After that, I should be on track to succeed our department manager'
'Life was supposed to be a fairly smooth ride' (to keep with the train images)
'Emphasis was on'
'I suppose people who are about to be restructured...'
1) I miraculously survived and I'm being treated by a doctor. This would mean I recieved some brain damage
2) it's a possibility...
3) It's a possibility
>bunch of humanity
'A bunch of humans' or 'A big part of humanity'
Will conntinue in a minute
Blake James
and done,
as soon as someone looked over it I'll upload it somewhere
Jonathan Turner
I want to make Tanya into a woman
Joshua Perry
>Offense of DIsobey
"Offense of Insubordination"
Anthony Reyes
Thanks for looking over it
>"Emphasis was on"
I think it is okay with "emphasis on was"
>"I suppose people who are about to be restructured..."
I think it is ok as it is, too. Since he not only refers to the people who are about to be restructured, but generally the people which companies can let go easily (if that makes sense)
Jacob Rogers
Gah, this pseudo-religious gibberish is making my head hurt.
>this worlds reason
this world's rationality
>if god should
However, if god should
>the consequence is that
Therefore
>case closed
Quod erat demonstrandum. for maximum fedora
And drop the 'as' in the last sentence.
>humanities
humanity's (2 times)
>societies
society's
>neither
'none has' makes sense here.
>worlds
world's
>commandements
"Thou" istead of "You" for maximum effect
>believes
'beliefs' or 'religion' or 'faith'
>I'm ought
I ought
>This is turning into a bad situation
This situation is getting sour
>frank
premature
>proven scientifically
scientifically proven
>A certain place
I'd go with "somewhere"
>you existence X
your existence, X
devils
devil's
>to it
to military service
>warrent
warrant
Be back in a minute
Blake Ross
>your existence, X
not a typo, since "Existence X" is what he's calling god
Luke Ramirez
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Aiden Cruz
Okay, let's see
>requesting
Would replace by 'report'.
>which won't give
Would write as "which doesn't give"
>was presented to me with
would write as "has presented me with"
>on rear line stand-by
on rear line stand-by duty
>border to
border with
>with regime change
with a change of regime
>this is the bill for it
Weird phrase. "Too steep a price!" or maybe "Look at the blood we have to pay for that!"
>Our possible actions are to
What we can do is
>expand disorder
run interference
>wavelenght
wavelength
I struggle to make sense of this page, especially the middle panel.
>potential
'assets' or 'units' would make more sense.
>interfierences
intereferences
>judging as
'identified as' would make more sense.
>irratiation
irradiation I suppose?
>sorcerers
sorcerers'
>scale
'size' makes more sense
>this guys
these guys
>scale
'size', again
>yourself
myself
>strenght
strength
>If you want me to go and die then do so clearly
If you want me to get myself killed, why don't you just say so?
>fucks
fuck's What an unladylike vocabulary!
Con't
Hudson Lopez
Holy shit this really needs a lot of QC
Angel Hughes
I want a threesome with Tanya and Shizuka!
Ian Flores
>this has been perfectly settled as the worst
This is the worst possible situation! A set-up!
>conversing
converting
>then there is when
then it happened that
>being on
while on
>huh
huh?
>believes
'beliefs' (or alternatively 'believers')
>even with having said
'even if I am a' or 'even being a'
>world history of my previous world
'my previous world's history' is less awkward
>the everyone
everyone
>deserting
I'd put 'desertion'
>break
"break off" or "break away"
I'd put "gotcha!" or even "Checkmate!" since it was her plan all along to lure them in, but it's up to you.
>the offence of disobey
the offence of wilful disobedience (or 'mutiny', or 'insubordination')
That's it from me.
Nathaniel Gutierrez
>I'd put "gotcha!" or even "Checkmate!" since it was her plan all along to lure them in, but it's up to you.
Well, this was the verb she used
jisho.org
in the past tense.
Ryder Russell
>666
Tanya confirmed for the Rhine Devil
Aaron Howard
I want to have a foursome with Miho, Saki and Yoshika!
Daniel Ward
thanks, I got the mistakes noted
If i'm honest, I don't quite understand this page either
Owen Davis
Glad I could help.
Isaiah Anderson
Maybe LN translation may help with this
>Multiple Mage observers were flying alone without concealing their positions. Based on the periodic encrypted signals they sent, they must be making reports of their observations and was using special, encrypted frequencies.
>“They are flying alone? They’re really looking down on us.”
>“That might be so, but their defensive line is very strong.”
>Anson knew that of course. An air defence network that was properly set up, with air units and Mages ready to intercept. Security was so tight, it could make a grown man cry. It was clear that the Empire only allowed their support units to fly alone because they judged their defence network to be sturdy enough.
>“*Sigh* I really don’t want to rack my brains and fight the enemy normally. I would have fled with my family if I had known earlier.”
>“Colonel Suez, those Empire fellows probably have the opposite reaction from us, and are tilting their heads from confusion. They must be wondering if it is alright to fight such an easy war.”
>“Indeed, let us pray they have dropped their guard.”
Hudson Rodriguez
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>that means a bulky warning line
that means a tough defensive line
>geez, this isn't something to wage war against the enemy uprightly
geez, this isn't something to wage war against the enemy normally
>Lieutenant colonel Sue, it's the bunch of the empire who are puzzled on the contrary. (Asking themselves) if it's OK if war is this easy and stuff
Lieutenant Colonel Sue, on the contrary maybe the Empire are confused if it's okay to fight such an easy war.
>Let them anticipate the things they've neglected to the utmost then
Let us pray they have dropped their guard
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Maybe now this page is much clearer to understand
Isaiah Williams
looks good, I'll put it in
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>Milspec shit is usually hardened against interference, no? Then again those little shits can probably get into every nook and cranny.
Human brain is even more hardened against interference. If the theory is "they can affet electrical impulses", the result is consistent.
Brandon Thompson
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Carter Turner
>that face
Wrong drugs?
Daniel Ortiz
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Zachary Turner
Mako a cool
Robert Butler
I want to give her a push
Jaxon Watson
no bully
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Dylan Fisher
Yes bully. Bully with dick.
Jayden Cooper
My nigga
Hunter Ward
Why is this allowed?
Julian Clark
Because it's great fap material
Isaiah Torres
That's bullshit.
Saori is straight.
Justin Anderson
Any port in a storm, man.
Angel Bell
Sexual bullying is the best way for girls to become good tankers.
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>geez, this isn't something to wage war against the enemy normally
changed it to
'Geez, you shouldn't have to fight the enemy normally in such a situation'
maybe works better
Xavier Torres
>you shouldn't
change to 'we'
Jordan Reed
alright, also I changed
'I should've brought my family along and make a run for it'
to
'I should've took my family and made a run for it'
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Adam Young
I wonder what PzIV-san did before ending up on Ōarai.
He started as an Ausf. D so he either served in Poland or France. Maybe he fought together with 38(t)-san. He might even have met Lee-san or B1-san on the battlefield.
What about his original crew? Are they alive? If they are, do they know their old friend is teaching girls how to be good women?