Kanojo wa Rokurokubi 16

here i come, hour-of-posting-a-single-chapter.

I was five years old
when I first saw them.
Ah.
The memories of a day when he was young; the day Natsuki's neck jumped.

i forgot the greentexting, again.
to be fair, it's very close to being a complete waste of time.

>This one's a little serious.
>Chapter 16: Remembering Way, Way, WAY Too Much
>This story is a work of fiction. Any relation to real life persons, organizations, events, etc. are purely coincidential.

might wanna come up with a better title. couldn't think of one.

if someone actually uses that last line, please make sure to correct "coincidential".

>Modori Bridge...
>Modori Bridge

>Hey, come on now.
>You can't be hanging out all alone in a place like this.
>Huh... what's up?

>That there
>is a monster.
>Make sure you don't get too close to them.
>They're not human, after all.
>Monsters
>are not human.
>How cool.

>Sankaku Kindergarten
>All right! Now then, why doesn't every go ahead and tell us
>what they'd like to be when they grow up!
>A soccer player!
>Soccer player
>A flower lady!
>Flower lady
>I want to be a monster

technically, what the girl said is "florist", but seriously, especially comparing it to the extremely simple Japanese writing of it, what five-year-old would know what a florist is.

I think in this case, "あれ……何?" should be more like "what's that?"

>I want to be a monster.
>I want to be
>I seee...

yeah, that's definitely right.
made a mistake assuming it was the police officer speaking.
thanks.

if anyone works with this, coming up with a version of "I want to be a monster" that starts with "Monster" would be pretty cool. then the sign on the following page could show "Monster".

>It's a mon-stii-rr!! Kill it!!
>Go die!!

>Itsuki.
>Your "I want to be a monster", what's that about?
>Well...
>I just think they're so cool...

Based OP, will TS tomorrow like last time.

Remembering (even) more than way too much?

>Hmm...
>You know what I mean?
>Not a clue.
>I mean, I'm a human, after all.

god why.

sounds a bit odd because of the "than way", though it's not like it doesn't work.
maybe remove that and make it just "Remember even more than too much"?

>Well, it'd be fine if you did become one.
>Even if you were a monster,
>I'd still be your friend.

>Pipipipipi...
>Pipipipipi...
>Pipipipipi...

>Remember even more than too much
Alright, will use that

good luck

...

...

...

>Ah... Waah!
>Ah!
>Aaaaaah! Aaaaah!
>Natsuki!!
>Natsuki!!
>Mister, Mister!
>Her... Her neck...!

>... She's...
>a rokurokubi...
>Itsuki!!
>Itsuki!!
>Mo,
>Mom...!
>Kano... Kanoi...
>Kanoi... A rokurokubi, she...

>She didn't hurt you,
>did she?!!

>Modori Bridge.
>They said monsters
>don't belong on the other side of that bridge
>because monsters aren't allowed near that school.
>I'm...

>not a human anymore, so...
>this is the only place I belong...
>After all...
>I'm a rokurokubi...

if only digital scans didn't have this problem too.

>Kanoi...

>even if you are a rokurokubi,
>I'm still your friend.

>Come on,
>stretch out your neck.

...

bump

>"She is a Rokurokubi" Volume 3 comes out on July 8th (Friday)!!

thanks. i was about to whine.

>I will now attempt to be a snake charmer.
>Puooooooooh.
>Vawaaaaah, my neck just moved on its own!!!

again

>Hey, what in the hell did'ja just do, Itsukii!
>Wooah?!
>You wanna go, do you?!
>Ah.
>I see they're the same as always.

...

>It really sucks,
>being alone and all.
>Being all alone...
>is lonesome, isn't it...?
>We're friends... aren't weeee...?!
>Wuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!
>What's wrong, what's wrong?!

>It's very important...
>so I need your help, please...!!
>...What?
>Ah.
>To be continued in the August issue.
>Next time, a fun athletic meet.

and, done.
just a bit under an hour.