Since I actually got my shit together for the past couple days, here's chapter 9.
As usual, point out any fuck ups you notice
Since I actually got my shit together for the past couple days, here's chapter 9.
As usual, point out any fuck ups you notice
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Panel 2
"getting through to Genga"
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Panel 2
"Your clothes... have been giving a different feel today..."
Panel 4
Slap not shock
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That middle flashback in panel 3
Noooo
I wadda see itt [She's speaking with stuffy nose]
Waah
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Panel 5
Maybe 'weakness' might be better as 'feebleness' or 'timidity'
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Panel 4
You're missing the 'So sorry for botherin' ya' next to mom's bubble
Also sniffing sfx next to her
Omake time
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Panel 3
Next to Tanba is 'Hm'
For those who want to download the fixed version of this chapter (and all the other ones), here's a link to the torrent
nyaa.se