Jitsu Wa Watashi Wa 140

QC was MIA so... if you see a mistake let me know.

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Okay so... this page I actually want some feedback on. The original line for shima was "She's after my liiiiiiife", but life was written in kanji, and next to it in furigana is "balls".

There was no possible pun we could make here that would work. This was the only idea I had. Do you think it works? If it doesn't, do you have any suggestions of a different idea?

Fucking Japanese.

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This is a worried dumon.

Next time...

CASTLE ATTACK!

Thanks for reading, and let me know if I fucked anything up.

This arc was do fucking great

How about source of life?

...Maybe? Kinda not feeling it. The thing is, she's specifically going after balls.

Akane is stronger than Akari right? When she is being serious and all.

Usually in this case the best thing to do would be to just swap that phrase for a more relevant one. You can't always do a 1:1 translation, and preserving the spirit is more important than keeping the translation literal.

Like "watch out for collateral damage" or "you can take the balls, spare me!" or something like that. Trying to be too literal makes the translation awkward, though that is the point of QC I guess.

Well the balls makes the sperm, so I was thinking about something along those lines. What is saying is another way too

"I'm not a ball!" also works in that context. Since Akari is trying to get the balls and might hurt Shima in the process

Jitsu wa has never been QUITE that pervy, and most of the humor is absurdist rather than dirty. No reason to add that implication here.

I think I've just been working with that end of the spectrum too long

Both are literal.

How? I just made them up on the spot, they aren't literal translations.

I mean both balls and life.

I guess my main question is, does anyone object to the way I currently have it?

I think it's okay. The text behind is a nice touch honestly

It kinda ruins the joke, and its not really a funny line, but it isn't cringey or anything either, if thats what you mean.

> the bun on the run event... destroyed

not even danganronpa conveyed such despair

Add one more to the reaction faces.

Thanks Tarage.

thanks fer the weekly dose

Can no one stop the rampage of this enraged cake?

TUNE IN NEXT WEEK ON DRAGONS BALLS P.

This truly is the only worthwhile arc in the entire series.

Oh God, that caught me by surprise

Never know vs never knew? Which works?
Guess it works
Thanks tarage. Can't wait for the next three weeks

Bleh, should have caught that. Oh well.

as always, thanks, Tarage.

If you're trying to keep is as close to the actual translation as possible I can't think of a nice way to convey the double meaning of the words. There is the option to rewrite the line though, makes a good suggestion.

No wonder so many demons jump onto the S.S. Mortal, their courtship sucks.

That face in panel 2 is legitimately unnerving.

This good drama, this is a good chapter, this is a good series. Why is a romcom with a pseudo harem so good? I'd given up hope that it could be done well again.

I can sleep for a week.
I read ahead in the raws months ago and I'm excited for what happens next

what happens?

Best cake gets to ride out of castlevania on a white horse, prince charming included. Don't tell anyone though it's supposed to be a secret

Idiot down! She needs snacks!

Her run-for-the-bun was taken from her.

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The cake has a cake

>Not that I care anyway
And further down the tier list she goes....

You have brought me joy in a time of shit.

Thank you, Tarage

Thanks Tarage.

"Livelyhood" maybe?

>The face of a 1/4th demon in heat

RAWS WHERE

Has Sakurada the Buddha finally ascended?

Thanks.

yuncomics still only up to 173

Thanks Tarage

>Literally holding hellfire pitch fork

What a fucking bwaka

Love you~~

>Hello anus

>this page

>Ah, she chose eating, it seems.
>She grew horns, and talking about assaulting all males on earth or something

Derp.

Oh well. Hopefully our QC will be back next week.

This is a mere "demon"stration

hah

Yeah I was amused by that when I typeset it. It was too perfect not to do.

I wonder how the normal students react to stuff like this.

this arc is just too good

At this point, this is normal for them.

Thanks Tarage for our weekly dose.

Dark Schneider?

youtube.com/watch?v=phtfV4jUMQE

HAHAHHAHA

>akari's castle
my body is ready

>This is a mere demonstration, please do not worry.
Kek.

Anyone who can understand the raws here?
What kind of creature was the former principal?

A regular human wasn't it?

Yeah but she seems to know about Akane's past and sort of look likes her older form so I'm thinking a descendant

She's after my life, and smaller below, and my children

He had a hard start. ;-;

>That realization.
They are such best bros.

>They are such best bros.
Next chapter it gets better.

>That sweat drop

Now that's how you panic.

Thanks.

She's a yuki-onna

Thanks man

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Eromine is such a bro

What the fuck is this face trying to convey?