Chio-chan no Tsuugakuro

Gonna try and wrap this up. Hopefully I can actually finish today

I'm going to sleep, but I want to say this: I love Chio-chan and I love you OP. Thanks for bringing us this joy.

The best time of the day has come

"Oh that's the uniform from Eihei Girl's Academy"
"That private ladylike school, right?"
"It sure is rare to come across one of them here"

"You two there! Have"
"A duel with me!!!"

21: Chio-chan and a duel

"You saw that wrong, right?"
"No there really was a monkey"
"On top of your roof, Chio-chan~?"
Whoaaaa
And there were two!!

"Okay, then try imitating what kind of monkey it was"
"Ooo oo ah ah"
"Oooo kiii kii"
"Ahahahaahahaha"

"Their faces kinda looked like dad's..."
"Ogh"

"Manana?"
"Was it that funny?"

"Ogogoh..."

"Manana!?"
"Okaaay, I defeated the one that looked stronger!"
"Next is your turn glasses!"
"Uh... what the!?"

"I requested a duel before, right!?"
"Oh yeah... I kinda heard it..."
"Oh was that to us"
"Shut up"
"Be quiet and let me pierce your ass!!"

>Kancho chapter
Hahaha.
It hurts to breath. What the fuck Tada?

"You're gonna poke my ass!?"
"You're giving enemas!" [TN: Kanchou is actually 'enema' but it's also a prank where you poke into someone's ass]
"It's a duel!!"

"Whaaaaaaa!? This girl's from one of those real nice schools, right!?"
"So why's she doing something so dirty..."

"Oh!? She could ass with a shoot out" [TN: A slight pun between 決闘 (kettou - duel, shoot out) and ケツ闘 (ketsutou - ass war). I just tried my best to keep up with it]
"There's some sort of intelligent gist to this...!?"

"Haah!!"
"Wagh"

"Your movements... so you're experienced in shoot asses?!"
"I knew she'd say shoot ass!!"

"That glasses girl..."
"C... could she be..."

"Th"
There's one more shot...

"Fugh"

"I didn't expect..."
"To meet a user here..."

"A dual wielder"

A risky technique which makes it easy to injure your fingers if you attack a number of times but it increases your range...
"There was a famous store about Takagi from class 3... she copied it halfheartedly and she broke the bones in her fingers..."

"Where the hell did you learn that..."
"Heh. The evils of a public school upbringing..."
"Are not to be underestimated"

"Hah"
"So you have some skill in this field!"
"How interesting!!"

"Just because you have glasses... poh"

"Damn... I remembered how badly I got done in by you before, Chio-chan"
"Okay... now what?"

"For now, I'll restrain her with a method I saw on the internet... So she doesn't struggle..."

"And carry her off"
"You're giving a bad impression!!"

"Okay... young lady? Could you knock it off and tell us your name?"

"Twitch"

"We wanna know why you're going around poking butts, okay...?"
"This brat..."

"Uhh..."
"Just tell us one thing..."

"Why enemas?" [TN: I can change it back to kancho any time, just lemme know]

"Heh"

"Are you asking why sumo wrestlers wear thongs?"

Uh... what the?
What's up with this kid!?

"But..."

I would probably leave it as kancho. I feel like enema has unintended connotations

>I can change it back to kancho any time

Probably should change it back.
Kancho seems like one of those culturally specific things you should just explain in a TN and then leave as is.

"I will never forgive the girls of Samejima Academy"

"You guys... looked weak so I targeted you..."
"That is all"

"She's putting on some airs and saying some pathetic things"
"And she lost to the people she underestimated!!"
"Riiiiiighhht?"

"Yeah. This girl's kinda scary. In several ways"

"Since she can't even manage against us..."
"Yeah!"

Got it

"She's probably cry"
"Thanks to the sanctions of society"

"First we'll contact her school, right? Then they'll bring her parents out, right?"
"Okay"
"Manana. you can go to the hospital and get a medical certificate as well"
"Uhhh in proctology?" [TN: The medical field of anuses and rectums]

"Oh yeah, there's a Shiriyama clinic that's a proctology place..." [TN: Shiriyama 尻山 literally means 'ass mountain']
"Ogoh"

"? Manana?"
"Was it that funny?"

"Spinspinspin"
"Aghhhhh!!!"
"Oooooghhh!?"

"Nigyaaahhhhhh"
"Manana!?"

"Who said I was gonna lose to you? I had faith in the flexibility of my shoulders..."
"I can still fight, okay?"

"Uoooohhhhhhhh"

"How dare you do that to Mananaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

"Shitty glasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeessss"

"Hm?"

"I'm gonna send you to where pigtails is, you biiiiittcchhh"
"Wh..."
"Wha...?"

Did we... just get out...
To the park plaza...!?

"A handicap of this extent should be enough..."
"Wait"

"Hey..."
"Time out..."

"Whaaa!? What happened to that mightiness you had up to now, shitheaaaaaaad"
"Uh... uhhh..."

"A park... should be quiet... right!?"

Sh...shit... I got too overenthusiastic...
We're in front of people nooowwww!!

If I... think about this calmly...

"I'm having a serious kancho match with a little girl"
"They'll just see me as an evil person!!"
[Chio] "Heeey, bring out your asss! I'm gonna put my fingers in!"
[Byst] "An incident!?"

"Tying her fingers gives off a way too evil impression!!"

"Bring it oooonnnnnnnn"
"Stop getting so excited!!"

"If it comes down to this..."

"Just grab her well"
"And match my opponent"

"Then step back"
"Are they practicing some ballroom dancing?"
"Who knows~"

"Okay we got some good distance..."

"And now... pierce her"

"Ooph"

"Hahaha you moron!!"

"Hey park manager..."
"Don't prune the trees halfway throooughhh"

"You got cocky. And now I'll deal the finisher"

"C...could you finally tell me your goal... at least?"

"Okay then..."
"My goal..."

"Is revenge for my big brother!!!"

"K..."
"Kushitori-senpai!!"
"Lemme go!"
"What's up with you!!"

"Why're you..."

"I was drawn here by the shrieks of women"
"And I came"

"When I was doing my independent training, I heard a seemingly enjoyable voices..."
"The shrieks of women"
[Chio] "Oh yeah, isn't this park the one senpai shut herself in...!?"

"Bu to think I would come upon a cute little bunny..."
"Uph"

"You bitch"
"I'm gonna pierce your ass in one go too!!"

"Ohh"
"I don't mind"

"Huh?"

"Now..."
"Come!!"

What's with that ass...!?
I've stuck my fingers in a number of asses but...

H... how do I put this... something's off...
If...

I stick my fingers in this ass...
This would end up as something else that's not a shoot-ass...

"You noticed?"

"A woman's body... is something you can't recklessly wound"
"And something that can't be wounded"
"Hah"

"Women are something to polish"
"My lovely maiden"

"That's right, okay?"

"As a lady... have some conscience and become an adult"
"You can't go around engrossed in inelegant games"

"Right on, okay?"

"Wagh"

"Hah"

"Stuuuupid"
"Stuuuupid stuuuupid"
"Stuuuupiiiiiiid"

"Stuuuupiiiiiid"

"What's your relationship with her?"
"I don't know her. She just suddenly attacked"
"Haha what a calamity"

"Then"
"I'm off to school too"
"Oh okay"

"We got spared thanks to senpai..."

"Manana...!?"
"That brat... is definitely dead... I'm gonna pierce her from the ass to her wrist and give her an immediate appendectomy"

What... do I do about this...

[Endnote] A chain of hatred

I'm gonna grab some food. Be back.

I want to be fucked by her finger dick.

I wonder how bad that would hurt

Like a bitc

Back to work

"So a few days ago, there was that kanchou grade schooler girl..."
"Ohhh... her"

"Thanks to her, since then"
"I can't help getting paranoid about my behind on my way to school..."

[Sm bubble] Thanks
"Oh? There's a lot of people..."
"Wanna check it out for a bit?"

22: Chio-chan and the third thing
[Text in the middle] The story this time is a must read for everyone who's highly concious

Forgot pic

Bump

Wait, how many times that woman with the kid has appeared?

"Would you like to try some coffee?"
"We just newly opened! We're very particular about or beans"

"Good morning"
"Looks like they made some fashionable coffee house... something like Starbucks?"
"Heh... you bumpkin..."

"That would be called"
"Third Wave coffee"

"I don't get what she's saying..."
"But I hate it when she gets enthusiastic..."

Okay
Ignoring her

"Third wave coffee, you see"
"Is primarily the newest coffee movement from an American perspective"
"Oh she started"
[Written on left]
1st: The appearance of mass produced, instant coffee
Representative companies (Nestle, Maxwell House)
2nd: The appearance of Seattle chained stores
Representative companies (Starbucks, Tully's)

"After all is said and done, their trait is being particular about the bean producers. High quality"
"They pour cup after cup of high grade specialty coffee by hand"

"But this worldwide boom..."
"Has the strong influence of Japanese cafe culture from long ago"
"Ohhh I see..."
"This girl... is do damn determined..."

"We're in the moment, so wanna go try?"
"I... haven't drank regular coffee before..."

"It's fine, it's fine"
Well I
Haven't either

"Please help us out"

"Here have some of this~"
Thank you very much

I bet it will be... very bitter.

"Whoaaa"
"It kinda makes a nice smell"

"I just got some..."
"trendy Third Wave coffee..."

If I had this with me
"Nonomura-san, what hobbies do you have?"

"Hobbies... well... cafe hopping..."
"Oh I say cafes, but third wave ones. The beans are different indeed"
"I can join normie society" [TN: Once again, I'll use different names for riajuu. Chio is 'normalfag' since she's less connected, Manana is 'normie' because she actually wants to be one]

"Whoa this is good!!"
Wooooow
"This is amazing, Manana"
"No..."
"This... this is..."

"Just hot chocolate"

"This moron hasn't realized it though..."
"I wonder when I was able to actually drink coffee"
"I became such an adult"

"Mama, me too"
"Okay"
"Here you go"

"Takkun, it's good right?"
"Yup!"
I get it... this chocolate's for kids who hate bitter coffee...

That attendant doesn't look malicious...
So that means

We're naturally...
being treated like children

badabump-tshhh

>Gonna try and wrap this up. Hopefully I can actually finish today

you are my nigga 5eva

"Uniform aside, what part of me is there..."
"Hey hey"
"This is so good"
"Maybe I should get another one"

Ah
"Then I'll just get some money and drink..."

This girl...
"Wh...what?"
This is all her fault!!

Thanks to Chio-chan, my average girl power has drastically decreased...
[Little cards] Coffee [First 3] Meh [Last 2]
[Menu from top to bottom] Talk, give, look up, menu
Does that mean they think of me as a kid that doesn't know the taste of coffee!?

Wh... what a disgrace!!
"Oh..."
"Manana?"

"We're going!! Chio!!"
"Whaaa why're you angry!?"
*When Manana gets mad, she stops calling Chio 'Chio-chan' (See Vol 4, ch 17)

"Hey where..."
"There..."

It seems... I have to teach them a lesson

jos?

Short for joshi kousei, I guess. Used as a unit of measurement.

"In this town... In such a fancy coffee house, I'll casually use"
"the presence of a fashionable high school girl"
"Huh!? We're going in!?"

"Welcome"

The beautiful girl
Nonomura Manana
Makes her first landing in a
Genuine coffee store!!

First, I should probe the cafe...

That would be to see whether it's an order system or self serve style...
Self serve style
Order system

"Mana..."
"Sh"
"Shut up"
"Uh"
"Enough"

"There's a single master inside the store...
There are no waiters...

But the number of seats...
And the way they pour the coffee is by taking the time to hand drip it...

No... but when I look hard, it's simple but there's a menu on the seats...

Full order style
"Chio-chan"
"Sit"
Okay, no bring on the order!!

"Oh"
"Please order here first"

"Our system is that we'll call you by the ticketed number"
"O..ohhhh~ I see~..."
"Thaaaat pattern"

"When I look hard here, even though it's a new store, they've produced a pathway via floor damage"
"Shiiiiiit! Overlooking such a fancy production is such an overwhelming blunder!"

> social blunders: the manga

I can't show my tail...
And be made fun of here!!

"What will you have?"

"U...Uhhhhh.... how much is the coffee that you were dealing out outside?"

"Yes. That would be... this one"

[Menu]
- Bali: Arabica
A rich scent, Chosen for balance
- Kenya: Karinga
A light sourness. Fruity flavor.
- Carrizal: Costa Rica
A faint sweetness in nutty fragrance
[Below that] Other menu items

Hah

"Stupidheaaaaad"

You're clearly making that 'If I had 600 yen, I can buy two PC games in a Steam Pre-summer vacation sale' face!!
[Game] You can play for 80 hours!
[Coffee] It'll be gone in 10 minutes!
Don't look down on fashionable coffeeeeeeeee

"Shit. They'll find out Chio-chan's just a super pathetic gloomy otaku gamer!!"
"Fuuuuuuuuuuck"

"If things'll go like this..."

"Today"
"I promise to pay, okay?"

"Hm... Those organic beans from Kenya..."
"600 yen..."

"How convenient"
"Waaaaaghhh this girl pisses me of soooooooo muuuucchhh"

"Uhhhh then I'll have..."
Be careful... what's important in ordering is...

The order of the prices

Kabaddi-senpai is the best.

When the price positioning is like this...
[TN: The bottom three are the same as . The top one's cut, but the description says 'sweetness, and has the smell of a flower']
The second one from below is the one that's overwhelmingly chosen.

This was a logical action known as 'The pine-bamboo-plum method'. It makes people put on 'airs' like that
[Side] I wanna look cool in front of my girlfriend but...

But most stores place products with a high profit ratio there!!
So people who pick them are ducks. [TN: Emphasize ducks]
Morons
The side that's being exploited

And the most expensive one
Is a decoration just to show that everything is cheap
[Order] Geisha
Sweetness like an orange, and the fragrance of a flower. [TN: Yeah, fixed it]
So what I ought to choose
Is the second from the top!!

Or that's what I'll pretend to do
And I'll take the lowest one upon me

"This..."
"Costa Rica please"

"So? This is the perfect order... So now I'm an all prepared high school girl in this town..."
"But.."

"Laymen will think 'Oh this girl doesn't have money'..."
You pushed yourself too much...
"A double edged sword..."

"So we'll call your number"
"Twitch"

"W...what's wrong Manana... we went in the place out of the blue..."
"Do you like coffee that much...?"
"Well... it's just formalities"

"Damn... you sure trouble me when you're here, Chio-chan..."
"Aren't you kinda being cold today!?"

"Customer number 2"
"Oh. We got called up"

"Oh so they're in mugs"
"There sure are tidbits out there..."
"But now we just drink and leave..."

Uhh
Put in sugar~...
And this white stuff~
Now to mix iiiit~

"Time to"
"Have a sip"

"Ah"
"Wha! This is... the one they let us drink before..."

"Mana..."
"Chio-chan"
"What we tried a while ago... was hot chocolate"

"We... got looked down on, okay? They think we're just brats that can't even drink coffee..."
"Uh..."

"Oh... so you got mad..."
"Yes"
"Chio-chan... we're gonna do our best..."

"And drink it all"

"Chio-chan, you don't wanna be treated like a kid right?"
"Aagh..."
"Well... think if it as the usual coffee milk..."

"And gulp"

"No... but... this..."
"Is so bitter"

No sugar and a half load of milk left
This is the connoisseur's combination...

Ahhhh~... what a mellow aroma... it's working~ the aroma is working~
Ahh... The fruity flavor is hidden in the bitterness... The rich flavor can be none other than coffee

"Blleeeeeghhhhh~!!"
"Huh!? What is this drink..."
"Wait, is this even something people drink!?"

This is completely different to packaged coffee milk
Bitter... it's way too bitter

"Uh... everyone can drink this in peace..."
Yeeahhh
Ahahaha

No way... this definitely isn't coffee, but it's one of things sour things they boil well as it delicately bubbles. And, to put it into manga terms, if I drink this all down I can bring out a latent secret power, but if I do this badly, I'm gonna diiiieeeeeeeeeeee
"If you're ready, drink up"

"Manana..."
"You can drink this..."

"Uh..."
"I did say I'd go that far just now..."

"I'm sorry"
"Normally... I'd make fun of her here but..."

No. I can't on this matter.
In contrast, I'm relieved

"There should be some sugar on the counter..."
"I'll go get..."
Grab

Oh it's supposed to say 'one of those sour things' in the last panel

"We can't"

"In the same way double dipping in the katsu sauce is prohibited in Western Japan..."
"'Extra sugar' is forbidden in genuine coffee houses, okay...?"

"You'd be thought of as an idiot without taste..."
"At worst... I saw online that we could splash on some milk..."

"Milk!?"
"That makes quite a smell!!"

"Ch..."
"Checkmate..."

"As I thought... leaving them is out of the question..."

"Ladies..."

Oh...
Is that the milk in his hand.... that he'll... splatter onto us...!?

"We sincerely apologize!"
"I... made a mistake on your order"

"Fue!?"

"I made you two extremely confused... I apologize"

Oh!!
This... is that cafe mocha thing..."

"Here's our genuine coffee" [TN: Emphasize 'genuine coffee'. He probably noticed them gagging and humored them]

"Please take your time"

"It's so gooood"

"Manana..."

"Well it's too late to pull off the beautiful lady break time feel now"

"What is?"

"Ahahaha you look like a foreign wrestler!"
"Huh? Whaa"
"Aaaghhh!?"

Click

"...hey"
"Yeah"

Coffee milk really is the most powerful thing ever!!

I think I might have time for one more tonight, but we'll see. For now, dinner.

I don't know what this actually says but it looks like a salute.

Rodger.

But seriously food.

Poor Mananya, she wants to be taken seriously but she dosen't have the guts to suffer through it. She really should just embrace her status as the eternal "fake riajuu".

Speaking of riajuu. You said before that you translate Manana saying raijuu into normie because she's trying to become one. Wouldn't having her use the phrase "normal", e.g. normal society/people/person, be better then since it:

1) Shows she has no disdain for them (something both normie and normalfag imply).
2) Still shows her outsider mentality since anyone who talks about wanting to join "normal society" is obviously isn't part of it.

A chapter was posted on Batoto. Was that your script?

I edited the old script. My TS was having a hard time understanding what the other guy wrote so I redid it.

I'll think about t. But the only thing I'm thinking about is the fact she uses the term 'riajuu' still, so she's still somewhat disconnected from normal society. She doesn't say 'futsuu' but she still uses riajuu. But I'll think about it

I'd vote keeping normie. Normal just doesn't carry the same meaning.

Plus, normalfag and normie carry different connotations. The former is more condescending and the latter is somewhat neutral at worst.

As far as I know both normie and normalfag have the same basic connotations of looking down upon "regular" people, normalfag is just a much more aggressive version.
As such normie isn't really suited to be used by a person who genuinely aspires to be a regular person.

There may be an argument for Manana using it regardless due to her pessimistic personality but that might be going too far into it.

True, but 'riajuu' is a very negative word to begin with. The most accurate translation, at least from my perspective, is 'normalfag' if I wanna keep the original nuance.

I think it's more like Manana just hasn't adapted well enough to get the lingo out of her system. And walking with Chio almost everyday hasn't helped her at all.

Point taken.

Actually thinking about it it wouldn't be very out of character for Manana to activly call other people normalfags right out while still trying to become one. When you look at it that way I suppose normie is fine.

Remember both Chio and Manana, Manana particularly, are willing to throw friends and bystanders under the bus to secure their comfort zone, usually each other.

More manga needs girls who are mean, especially to each other.

Also, to blackish people.

I think I have enough energy to do one more chapter tonight. It's not too text heavy, so hopefully I can get through this.

Godspeed

"Ah..."

"Ahhh"
"It's that girl!"

23: Thousand Spring

"Contact"
"Manana..."

"Hm!?"

"That girl's uniform..."
"This isn't the way to Eihei Girl's Academy..."

"What's she planning!?"

"Aghhhh dammit"
"There's still some in here"

"Man... if this explodes in the contractor's car I have no idea what'll happen"
"There are probably also some bottles in the one next to it"

"Haha"
"I also haven't thrown the trash out in the house until a few days ago..."

"Bottles are bottles, cans are cans!!"
"Wagh a doll!"

[CD] Extra large
Jimikko
Glasses
220 mins

"Jimikko"
"Glasses..."
"220 minutes!?"

"Can..."
"I even look at this..."

"No... not happening!!"
"But... just a little..."

"No"
"In the traaaaashhhh"

"Ow"

"What the... oh"

"Chiharu!?"
"Uh"
"Why're you here?"

"Mayu-nii, you too"
"What're you doing here?"

"Uh..."
"My convenience store job... yeah..."

"Don't mooooveee!!"