I'm working for the campaign of a 29 year old trump style candidate trying to defeat a corporate swamp creature in Ohio...

I'm working for the campaign of a 29 year old trump style candidate trying to defeat a corporate swamp creature in Ohio. It's Northeast OH D14, which is Ashtabula+Cleveland suburbs. A lot of people said that the website reads like a very long angry blog. I'm looking for suggestions on what to edit/remove from the website to improve it. The reason the website is long was to redpill democrats and independents. OH has open primaries so their support could prove useful. How can I trim down the website: EvanCarp.com

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>EvanCarp.com
Okay, just hire a graphic designer or someone who knows aesthetics for online website making. If you're looking for inspiration on how to actually redesign the "sell" that you should be a representative, this video should help you.

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North Olmsted fag here, add subliminal redpills on the anti-white bias and communist sympathies of the left.

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How about a professional photograph of your "candidate" to start. He looks like he watches hentai tentacle porn in his mom's basement.

It's in the works.

The fact that you launched that site with that shit photo shows you have no chance to win. Your talking points sound like they were written by an 8th grade dropout. FFS.

Immigration is number 1. Put it as number 1 on main page and tie it in with every issue on the issues page. Make a separate issues page just for immigration.

Show people data and pictures on how immigrants changed Ohio for the worse.

Healthcare is number 2. Show people data on how hospitals collude to jack up prices and how there's no price transparency in the industry.

Evan needs a makeover. That's just a terrible picture on the site.

Collared shirt. Jacket. Professional looking photo. You can pay someone to retouch it and make him look less pasty / pudgy. Some new glasses would help too.

Greetings from Richland, best of luck to you.

>29 year old...

Good luck with that, kiddo.

>A lot of people said that the website reads like a very long angry blog.
Is it effective or not?

Good question. Most comments are that it is way too long. I'm not sure what can be removed without having the effect of redpilling people.

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What is his stand point on illegal aliens? How would he address the problem?

Dude, posting in the other place was a questionable decision. Here it's just flat out rolling the dice in a lose lose scenario and a .001% chance of success. If you don't have the cash to do it right the answer is not trying to become a forced meme on chans. Get involved with your community, not image boards. Donate blood and then hand out fliers. Sponsor a farmers market in an unused parking lot. Do anything but this.

Your candidate has no chance. He comes off as a total sperg and cringe as fuck. The whole thing is try hard and phony. It's like website says what he thinks will get him elected instead of what he actually believes. The reason Trump was successful was because he ran on what he'd been saying for thirty years.

Pro tip: OP is Evan Carp or another sperg from one chan or another.

What happens here?

He's against illegal immigration. The RAISE Act is great also. Addressing the problem would be disincentiving the behavior and a wall did work in other countries.

Not even Ohioans know, dude

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is a wise man,

He can't win looking like that

Drunkenness May through Sept.

He's getting new photos. This post is about the text of the website.

The first thing someone sees when they go to the sight is the "Main Goals" section. tbqh it's pretty lame, it reads like the most bland, generic boilerplate that a candidate could possibly write. Take a stand on something and you'll seem more interesting, even if people don't 100% agree with you.

You're not allowed to fish off the side of the party houses. However everyone is too drunk to remember and the fish are attracted to the sounds and all the beer and party food dumped into the water. Prime perch territory.

Enjoy sucking Koch brothers cock!

I just gave cleveland.com that a campaign worker is on a white supremacists website asking for help! LOL you fag.

This was my point. Niggers and jidf kikes come here, retard.

I could design a better site for you, but I don't work for free.. this sites pretty unprofessional desu

op comes to the toilet of the internet looking to sway democrats.......lmfao!!!!

No. The goal of the website is to redpill democrats. I was asking how to trim the website down.

Glad to see you took the advice of anons and are pretending to be someone other than yourself m8. I'm on the other side of the country so can't do much for but I wish you well.

there's literally finger prints and schmutz all over the left eyeglass

you need to look professional

this looks like something from geocities in the 90s

Niggers

never noticed ohio had islands
thanks Sup Forums

Jesus fucking Christ. My advice is to just kill this man before he does more damage to our political viewws. You can't look like this and be a successful politician. Democracy is not a battle of ideas, it's a popularity contest. How many popular kids in high school were ugly, fat, acne ridden social retards?

Even if it were a battle of ideas, how can a man like that hold himself up as an example of successful ideation when his thoughts and actions have led him to be what he is: a fat, gross looking slob who can't even afford a camera with more that 8 pixels.

>Is Ohioan
>Still supporting either the Democratic or Republican faggots
Leave
My
State
Now
You
Fucking
Faggot

lotta drinking, boating, fishing, probably a bit of rape.

And your circle also includes Cedar Point, which is pretty bad ass (roller coasters and shit).

>Is from Ohio
>Still supporting either the Democratic or Republican faggots
Leave
My
State
Now
You
Fucking
Faggot

>never new Ohio has islands

Wait till this brainlet finds out about Michigan's peninsula and the Mississippi rivers jaunt into east Colorado.

To be fair, we only have like 4 islands. Fun times though.

>atomwaffen
Traitors and fedoras. Fuck that bullshit.

District 14 fag here. He's definitely /our guy/

Bump just because