I've been wondering if "real" dialogue could ever work in an anime. Real conversations are often kind of stifled...

I've been wondering if "real" dialogue could ever work in an anime. Real conversations are often kind of stifled, stammering and losing your train of thought, fucking up words, etc.
How would you even go about writing such dialogue? Could it work in any sense for a show?

"Ad-lib" is unlikely in anime because everything is controlled and deliberate. BD commentaries or radios are different

That should be a good device for a series in all honesty really.

Of course, actors and theatrics are like that. That's how these things go.

What is gdgd fairies?

Also Tesagure Bukatsumono

When you said "real dialogue," I thought you were going to say candidly recorded conversations.

That would be one way to get the dialogue, study speech patterns in normal conversations.

I don't really see much point in it unless ruins your suspension of disbelief or something.

I had a look at this. The genuine laughter and cross-talk is really charming and that OP is godly.

This. Literally genre-defining shows.

Thread over.

w-what

The reason it isn't done more is that it's inefficient as hell.
>I have an idea!
vs
>Er... well, maybe... you know, yeah, maybe we could do that. Yeah. Hey guys, I think I got a thing- an idea.

Second one sounds like Rick and Morty exactly.

For the purpose of narrative, it would work only ine 1% of the cases.

Oddly enough the first one is much closer to realistic
Stammering/inefficent speech like that should (obviously) be used sparingly when characters are distracted, distressed, lack speech culture etc.
If not overused, it could add a lot of flavour

Some American capeshit comics have dialogue like this.

No it does not read well.

Rick and Morty often comes across as basically ad libbed. I'm certain the interdimensional television episodes were improved based on prompts, and animated based on the dialogue.

Either way, it works for that show because its supposed to be nonesensical, funny and surreal. It wouldn't work for a show trying to convey actual ideas with any amount of efficiency or clarity.

I miss gdgd so much, I loved the reflection pool segment, it was so much fun to watch.

Is this a joke or are you refrerring to something other than what I think you are? Because it looks like a toddler's show.

You need to watch more anime.

I mean, I've watched anime for over 7 years now. Haven't kept count of shows but should be close to triple digits.

Are you telling me you didn't watch gdgd fairies? Oh you poor sod.

Even more than that then.

The characters all look like early morning children's anime, but all the rest is Seiyuu ad-lib skits.

>Real conversations are often kind of stifled, stammering and losing your train of thought, fucking up words, etc.
Maybe if you are actually autistic.