Storytime: Umbrella Sword

Hey, Sup Forums, it's been a while. I'm not sure if you guys still do storytimes, but here's a web manga I just finished translating and I wanted to show it to you guys first. It'd be great if you guys could give it a read and tell me if there are any mistakes or typos.

The manga is an entry from the famous God series which are all about a creepy God messing with little girls' lives, but I don't want to spoil everything. So let's go.

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First chapter.

The art style is very sketchy, as it is an amateur web manga from the VIP manga "publisher" NEETsha, but it's good enough to enjoy the manga imo.

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This was the first chapter. I hope someone will bump the thread for me as I can't do it myself.

god damnit god you can't just RPG people's life on a whim

Second chapter.

Thanks for the bump.

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Her clock has a peculiar design. Perhaps it's supposed to be abbacchio's stand?

Damn. I would have never gotten that. I'm sure there are a bunch of references I missed. 2ch manga is usually chock full of references.

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End of second chapter. 12 more to go.

I liked it.

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Sorry, it's not over yet. I was just afk for a moment.

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I realized where this could escalate to, aaaaaaand I don't like it

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>luck: 1
>intelligence: 7
>courage: 0
wew

>panties
what is it with the japanese and their panties?

No comment on that.

It's important to know if she's wearing panties. I don't see anything wrong with that.

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hows that not a given? every normal person wears underwear. when I see a girl its not exactly the first thing that enters my mind, the question whether she wears underwear like every normal human being

anyway, thanks for the translation. I have zero moonrune skills but everything looks good to me

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Well, you're not from VIP, for starters. I'm sure it's one of the first things that enters their mind when they see a girl.

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Chapter 4.

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No, poor fish. Don't do it. The next step is to kill a cat or dog.

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third panel typo?
its 'anemia' btw

Ah, thanks. It's a typo. The dump was already worth it.

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Chapter 6

if I had such an ability Id get as much out of it as possible

kinda is a shame to see how she squanders this gift

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oh dear god

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Cute.
I get the feeling this is actually about some psychotic who hears "God" telling her to kill shit.

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Chapter 8 now.

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>sfx: Dragon Quest level up jingle
But which Dragon Quest?
youtube.com/watch?v=n62AfTmbZ_E

Fuck, dude.

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You tell me. It was テレテレテッテッテー in the original.

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Chapter 9.

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