Mousou Telepathy

NTR happening!

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I like this guy a lot more than that tool Toda

He better not ntr that cute tomboy girlfriend of his. Speaking of that when is she gonna make an appearance outside of flashbacks.

This is a new character

I was bored and tried to clean and translate one page.

I'm a beginner and it reads more like a machine translation than anything. Understanding it is way more difficult than translating.

here is the original

Alright, I like this motherfucker.

This nigga is way better than Toda, but we all know we can't have nice things

Welp Im rooting for him

In how many chapters does he get overly creepy and annoying with no self awareness so that Toda appears the better option again?

Picked up

Looks good!

You should apply at helvectia scans; maybe we would see more releases.

he's going to be too stupid to make a move

>he's going to be too stupid to make a move
But he already made a move

I like this guy much more than Toda. Hopefully this turns into toda and croissant hooking up. Also akira and his girlfriend chapter when?

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You forgot to translate the title: A person who hides nothing.

2nd panel:
There's some garbage where you redrew his hair.
こういう人 means someone like this, not this person in particular. Also, are you ESL? That comma is unnecessary. Do you know the difference between could and would?
Better translation: If I were to get married, it would be nice to marry someone like her...!!!

Panel 3: "Exactly ideal my"
You also cleaned out the dedenn sound effect and didn't replace it.

I'm not exactly sure what she meant by まさかコレも and そちなんだ in panel 3 and 4. Maybe she thought he's going to think lewd thoughts of her but was surprised he had pure intention of dating with the intention of marriage.

Text placement: Text is to far down in last bubble of panel 3 and 4.

>understanding it is way more difficult than translating
How the fuck do you translate without first understanding it?

Anyway, good effect, with room for improvement.

this should have been the main love interest right from the start, Toda fucking sucks

being a pervert is fine but that's all there is to him

nice
i like him being the polar opposite of Toda
a guy who hides nothing vs a guy who can't show anything

who's gonna win the mind readerb owl?

This guy is so much better already, rooting for him.

This has false ead written allover it.

He's only made to contrast with Toda as the foil that has what he doesn't Toda gets development, improves himself, and becomes as true to himself on the outside as he is on the inside. Or failing that, Nakano falls in love with him anyway because she understands him better now or thinks of his good sides

Anyone knows that a real woman wants to be seen as the personification of sex, not some sort of holy maiden
At the end of they day, they want to be dicked, not worshipped
Maybe both

Finally a good mc, dump the other one.

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Nakano is the mc

Best boy never wins

>understanding it is way more difficult than translating
>How the fuck do you translate without first understanding it?

I meant the opposite. Understanding is easier than translating.

I don't do this regularly and I'm not a professional. I saw it as an exercise. I'm not ESL.

I posted the "clean" page, thinking that the usual translator might want to use it.

Thank you for your input

My bad, but you know what I mean.

No problem. I hope I didn't appear too harsh. It is not my intention to shit on your work.

One more thing to add: 清楚
While its translation is neat and trim in the dictionary, using neat in this instance makes it seem like he means tidy / organized. If it doesn't fit, dig deeper.

Looking at the individual Kanji gives you more hints: jisho.org/word/清楚 - pure
jisho.org/search/楚 #kanji - graceful

You can also look at the japanese definition for the term by googling 清楚 意味
Top 2 results:
「清楚」（せいそ）とは、清らかですっきりとしたさまを指す。 外見上は控えめで清潔感がある容貌に、謙虚なふるまいをし、慎ましい美しい身のこなしの保守的な女性を表すことが多い
［名・形動］飾りけがなく、清らかなこと。また、そのさま。「清楚な身なり」「清楚な婦人」

For that, you can come up with a better translation that the direct dictionary translation. I'll leave that to you.

I like this guy, he's honestly straightforward and straightforwardly honest.

But goddamn if Toda isn't a man after my own heart. He is a kindred spirit to us all minus being popular and good looking

Dropped.
I don't get this trend with every fucking author trying to focre ntr in a series just to pander to cuckfags.

Same shit happened with Masamune-kun no Revenge.

Is NTR now just the new term for "more than one possible love interest?"

>ntr
Fuck that bitch. I knew this would happen after seeing that smoking air freshener bully.
I bet she get some sick kicks out of this.

Jerking off to sex fantasies about a girl you barely approach doesn't give you ownership over her. It's not her fault if she goes on to date a guy that's better than you. You don't like that maybe you should have stopped fapping to her and actually asked her out instead.

Why are you implying so hard mate?
I just want some cute developing comedy romance and not some shitty ntr story.

Toda is the main male charatcer, so yes, Nakano being with another dude can be considered NTR.

There's no NTR if he never dated her. Just an unrequited crush. And that shit is older than time.

you're wrong

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Get back to your MTSP threads back in /h/ you ntrfags. You're delusional.

I'm not a NTR fag, I'm just telling you there's not NTR here. His liking her doesn't mean shit if he never does anything about it. She can date a guy she finds worth dating if she wants. Don't even know what MTSP is.

You're the delusional if you think Toda and Nakano had a relationship.

so cute.

Chapter 300 spoiler
Title:
Confessing for the second time
Panel 1:
Senpai! || I had a lot of fun hanging out with just the two of us today.
!
You're so kind and mature. You really are my ideal woman!

Panel 2:
That's why, senpai,
Won't you go out with me?

Panel 3
How should I respond...?
What's the most optimal response...?

What does it take to melt this cunt's frozen heart?

Well, that's it. I'm done wit this series.
Was good while it lasted.

Just say no and move on. We all know she's developong a crush on Toda anyway.

Gangbanged by old men

the D

It's okay, She just stayed silent without giving any kind of response. And as of the latest chapter (311), her main concern is to clear up the misunderstand with Toda. (He thinks they're going out.)

Kid has guts. I'm changing teams, fuck Toda.

>rooting for goodboy mcsaint
He is such a bland character.

Does she even try to become more talkative and socialize with Toda's group or remains the same uptight frigid bitch that she's been up till the latest translated chapters?

>fuck Toda
Yes please.

Everyone cares about nakano bowl.
But the really important question is: who is gonna take the croissant bowl?

>uptight frigid bitch
She is just shy

She's able to make small talk / greetings.

>changing to a losing team.

MC is a terrible person.

Chapter 301 spoiler:
Title: The answer is...
1
[I can brush it off by saying, "Thank you."]
pink text: How about it, Senpai?
[But Shimizu-kun is waiting for my response.]
2
If Shimizu-kun suggests we go around in pairs, I'll go along with it.
[Even though I said something like that to mana-chan...]
3
If I just say "okay" and go along with the person who's pulling me forward, that'd be easiest.
4
But why am I...
Not able to say that?

Why does she like Toda? He's a borderline rapist retard with literally no redeeming features other than being good at soccer. I guess Nanako is just another jock loving cocksleeve. 23PD4ME

Because is "nice"

Honestly, from the POV of any other person, Nakano is kind of a cunt. There really is no reason for Toda or Kouhai to fell for her.

>reason
You don't reason with your dick user.

There are actually two big reasons to fall for her.

Why do people like the new guy so much? Is it because "he's nice"?

Toda's a huge closet pervert but at least that's somewhat interesting

He's actually a good kid, having a lewd imagination isn't anything bad.

Best girl is sick of her shit too.

Chapter 302 spoiler:
Title: Life is unfair
1
So Shimizu asked you to go out with him? || WELL?
What did you say?
2
I... couldn't give him a response.
Really. || And then what'd Shimizu say?
3
Maybe I rushed it too much...
...Shall we get going?
......
Seems like he was being considerate of me.
4
Haaaaaaa...
pink text: I'm sick of this shit.
sfx: kaa-
Why is someone indecisive like you popular?
That's so true. I have no room to retort.

I guess he's the first to have such strong feelings towards her.
And he's in her class, plenty of contact time.

At least give time to the nice guy so we know about him a bit more before branding him boring.

This is the best page.

Toda is a beta bitch boy

DON'T SKIP CHAPTERS YOU FUCKERS

I like the kouhai, he is straightforward and pure. Not that Toda is bad, but sometimes he pisses me off when he can't even muster courage to properly talk with Nakano.

When I first saw that I though it was them and future babies.

Her boobs and what else?

>indecisive frumpy girl who's still really popular
Is this actually shoujo, or are japs really that tit-starved?

>There really is no reason for Toda or Kouhai to fell for her.
i can see two pretty big "reasons" to like her

You tell her Croissant.

>but at least that's somewhat interesting
not when that's the only thing he has.
His friend is the best guy in the series but he's not even competing for the Nakanobowl because he already landed the best girl.

Her ass.

The author's asking the same question.

Title: Crude
1
Oh no! The most popular boy in school and the manly but friendly underclassman are in love with me~
Why a plain Jane like me? I... I can't choose~!!
2
Like, || Are you the heroine of a shoujo manga?!
This kind of shit pisses me off the most!
3
Um... Sorry. I didn't mean for it to be like this....
grey text: What was that personality...
I know.
4
He's not like that, right?
Shimizu I mean.[/spoiler]
//I have no idea what panel 4 means.

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Is this shoujo or not though? He's using the same shitty tropes, being self aware don't change shit.

>He
You mean she. The author is a woman. She drew herself in manga format.

title: Mana-san's extraordinary speech //はかく語りき
Panel 1
Things like annoying tasks,
orange text: I don't wanna stand...
blue text: I'll clean this up...
Or things that other people want to do.
orange text: Mana wants cafe au lait
Blue: I'll have the coffee.
You've been going along with them like you don't have a choice all this time right?
2
So, when a person tells you he wants to go out with you,
Red text: Senpai, go out with me　
Can you just go, "oh well" and fall in love with him?
3
One can't just simply give in and fall in love,
that's why everyone is troubled. Pink text: Mana got rejected...
4
You're the one who said it's impossible to please everyone, right?

Women make the most perverts mangas. This could be interesting.

Just because the author points it out doesn't mean she's not following the plot beats to the letter.

Just like any cliche, it's only good when written properly. And this is written very blandly.

It's certainly not shonen.

I think you skipped the blue text in the second panel

Mana, my love.

Her growth in the manga in wonderful. She's a real bro.

I know mini Toda looked like that, but did mini Nakano have an ahoge?

Because outside of his thoughts he actually does noce things for Nakano without any perverted intentions sometimes. And he's shown to worry for her without any lusty intentions sometimes.

More or less because he's refreshing as of late. Toda's gimmick has gotten a bit stale.

Toda is just a normal boy I do not understand the pervert part

Yes I did. My apologies.
>Then I guess I'll just fall in love with Shimizu-kun.

I'm having trouble understanding her boring and bullshit monologue. So I'm not very confident about this translation:

Chapter 305
TItle: I exist too.
[It's true that it's not possible to please everyone.]
[If it's something that can be resolved by me going along with thing, I've always done so.]
2
[If I think about what I want to do, it'd just tire me out.]
3
But in order to form relationships with people,
I can't go on like that.
4
[I've... up to now...]
Saki-chan,
Class's about to start.
[have really been slacking off.][/spoiler]

>Why do people like the new guy so much?

Because he have guts.

He's thought of as one by the MC, at least.

Before I start thinking of ships and shit, does anyone here know why Toda likes her? Heard it's been revealed already but not translated.

>>Then I guess I'll just fall in love with Shimizu-kun.
Oh boy, she's easy.

Why is Toda the only character in this manga with a functioning libido?
It's gotten to the point where he's considered the weird one

>She drew herself in manga format.

It's not uncommon

Chapter 306
Title: Exceptional infectiousness
1
Yeah... I've always only thought about how to brush things off...
red text: She's thinking about something...
If I don't think about what I actually want to do, it'd be rude to Shimizu-kun...
2
But I don't really understand what it means to like someone...
To being with, what does dating someone entail? What do you do?
3
Hmm... According to manga and dramas, dating means... Going on dates? Holding hands?
And...
!!!!
4
What the heck am I imagining! small text: This has to be Ida-kun's fault!
sfx: pan (slap)
!?
Best boy is just a distraction and has no chance of winning.

This is nobel. It's from her twitter.