Yukuyuku Futari

More chapters of silly love stuff. My proofreader is gone for the week so it'll be great if you guys could point out grammatic errors.

Ooh. I haven't read this one before. Lemme go read up the rest of it.

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End of Chapter 4.

And end of Chapter 5(ich). As I've said, please look over the grammar if possible, thank you.

Thanks.

Splendidly Found Out sound off.

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I can't really think of an alternative.

Typical asian girl, had a girl like this before fucking hypocrite just because she shy infront of her friend. Hurt everytime i remember it.

Thank you for introducing me to this series!

Maybe this could be phrased like:

>... Well, I know how you feel, but "just an acquaintance" still hurts.

"The girl of destruction" is a bit odd; I'm having a little trouble pondering upon the phrase the more I think about it.

Thank you.
>The girl of destruction
The original is 修羅場作りガール which literally translates to "Girl who creates scene of carnage/fight/problem", I've no idea how to shorten that properly.

>kaiju
Just use giant monster you weeb

It saves space.

I couldn't come up with anything very short and effective; "Homewrecker" and "Mischief maker" are too dramatic. Maybe something like a "stir-up girl" or "Problem causing girl" would work.

>Problem causing girl
I'll use that then, thank you very much.

So she's just a small town girl?

He does look like a city boy, doesn't he?

Thank you.

When will they fuck?

Is their relationship even legal?

Thanks.

Why would it be illegal? It's not uncommon to see high school girls with university boyfriends.

Statutory rape.