Osomatsu-san

I hope this episode involves absolutely no dolphin sex of any kind.

Bring her back...

What about this kind of shit? I drew it yesterday and figured I'd share with you guys. Its spoilered for a reason, open it at your own risk.

>mfw I get banned for posting this on a blue board

Well, props for actually drawing a foreskin, but your proportions need some work. His head and face look too young for his body. I'm just critiquing the art itself, nothing personal. Also is that meant to be precum at the top or is this a sounding thing?

No sounding, only precum. And I agree on the porportions, you can see how many times I erased and redrew the limbs in particular. But I admit I'm pretty proud of how it turned out considering I can only draw bishojo characters. All my men look like shit.

I started this with the sole purpose of foreskin play because its highly underutilized in pretty much everything and I was going to be damned if I didn't succeed. I redrew that hand probably twenty times.

It's cool, everybody starts somewhere. I used to think I could only draw girls but now I draw guys more. I say this to everybody but life drawing really helps. You start seeing people as people and get less worried about "does this look feminine/masculine enough" once you see how varied men and women can look. That might sound contradictory to what I said earlier, but in Kara's case here it's just getting the proportions of his face right and giving him a thicker neck/less dainty features.

My intention wasn't to turn this into a drawfag thread but it was pretty much dead anyway so I see no harm. Besides, the higher it gets pushed up its less likely to get noticed by a mod or troll. But no, I wanted it to look as on model as possible so I kept switching between official Matsu art and a 3dpd dude jerking off, the foreskin was my own addition as references. It was weird trying to more or less copy paste a Matsu head onto a real body while toning it down to Matsu proportions. I'll definitely take your advice though and work on my technique.

Its actually supposed to be Oso. I KNEW I should've thinned out his brows but I was like no, its fine. Kara's are thicker than that. Haha ;_;

The dick is the best looking part, but there’s something about the head that really doesn’t fit. Other artists can draw more realistic proportions with bean heads so I don’t think it’s the muppet character designs. Maybe it’s the size of it or the neck. The face is a little off too.

Honestly it can be hard to tell sometimes. I'm used to seeing the brows being too thin for Kara (anything over a thin line, even) so I assumed. Sorry. I can help with little things to make it more Oso-y if the thread is up later on.

It's different drawing something based off of a pic and drawing what you're actually seeing in front of you. It's best to sketch where everything is going first (lightly, and not those ones how to draw manga books tell you to do, that just makes a mess) so you can avoid that in the future.

I applaud that you're fed up of not seeing what you want to see and drawing it yourself. I was the same but with chubby Kara. Also the matsus should have those anyway and I think they're cute so good.

fuck yeah more totoko for great justice