Vocaroo thread for shit you've written, rate and critique original compositions

[Adam Ross]

Vocaroo thread for shit you've written, rate and critique original compositions

vocaroo.com/i/s1tQqBm9AYXc

[Leo Hughes]

Really liked the picking parts, very smooth playing, the melodies played both into predictable and unexpected conventions, which was good. But at the strumming part, the chord progression becomes a bit to 'same-y' and safe compared to the plucking

[Brody Jones]

Continued: but the strumming part created a memorable tune none the less.

[Adam Evans]

Thanks for the feedback, I've been trying different patterns/rythyms to spice up the progression, but it always seems to veer off from the tone of the whole piece.

[Cameron Cruz]

I'm honestly surprised more aren't willing to post, I've always wanted to hear mu play their own stuff.

[Henry Gonzalez]

picking was pretty great, i did like the strumming parts too though

vocaroo.com/i/s0Ds6NdRzh2W
noodling into a loop pedal for 8 minutes

[Nathan Smith]

vocaroo.com/i/s1umARctaAZx
New track

[Justin Jenkins]

vocaroo.com/i/s0nE7u0meH7W

Here's something that I recorded the other day

Nice stuff, I really like the "atmospheric" stuff that you can do with a loop pedal. Sounds great

[Jonathan Hernandez]

Here's a song I'm writing. Still got to fix a lot of stuff up but its something.

vocaroo.com/i/s0nE7u0meH7W

It's always kind of hard to judge just a guitar part like that, but from what I can tell I think it'd be nice when paired with some other instrumentation/vocals.
Really liked this, I'm a sucker for thick acoustic guitar layering like that and I think it came out really nice.

[Lucas Powell]

You accidentally posted the link to my thing. Thank you though, I've been meaning to do something like this for a while