do u guys think I have potential as a rapper? i'll post more soon
Lookin at these rappers like wow i think imma overthrow like mao cause these pussies aint with it bet they dont even get lit when i smoke quad you bet i go loud you can just check this sound and know that there aint no bound when im coming up with rhymes aint no stopping these crimes verbal murder on a track im doing you a favor homie your rhymes are whack pop ya like thumb tack bro i go hard like hulk no holds barred feelin like bard when i make this up aint no telling what'll turn up eat and spit you out like a tunip 9:50 PM - Hunter: ima creative hotspot blowin on the spot send my signal out everyone connect 4 bars against the doubt i aint got the check tryna get in check fuck all these fakes i know you'd heard this before in all these takes but im tryna show ground floor tryna break through the cieling watch out for the glass i know this will keep your reelin so just please watch my ass as i climb to the top dont worry pop i got it on lock
Well I'll wait 'til my turn I create, this my world, you gon' learn It could end any day Body bags cover face, they zip up just like Bapes Well alright, I give 'em monkey bars, them bitches hold weight The game like Madden in '08, I swear it's fucked up It's so young but then them young boys die old age
Jaxson Adams
north is where im from but your girl is where i cum nah just playing G i dont fuck with whack a girly in the winter we fight like an owl in the night polars know how to get down so raise your drink if you're a clwon who doesn't sit on the ground but goes to the rink everybody got the link homies dont die on friday cuz we all at the game now just sing
in North St Paul better than all we got the snowman and gashopper be dirnking that strong lawger behind pcu see tartan say fuck you too
Tyler Reed
acrobatic word fanatic metaphoric words euphoric i can show you that im for it aint no worry just go pour it let me sip feel the knowledge got the drink feel like college like an elephant dont acknowledge just know i am flawless breaking speeds feeling lawless dont believe me? must be godless
Colton Hernandez
really need some feedback here guys :(
Xavier Wright
that one is pretty good idk man maybe
Aaron Mitchell
these are cringey as fuck. kys
Ian Morales
stop
Luis Evans
Rap is 75% image, 20% production, and 5% lyrical
Your lyrics are mediocre at best. Your vocabulary is okay, however, the connections and paradoxical elements are too abstract for the fast meter of rap.
You need to make it more digestible to your audience, aka uneducated niggers.
Lucas Sullivan
ITT: rap battle
Used to take her to a movie Used to take her out to dinner Now her pussy getting loose Cause my dick ain't getting thinner.
John Robinson
You da shizzle ma nizzle.
Daniel Torres
Post acapella vocaroo dumbass
Ayden Moore
If I like it I'll make a beat for it or slap it on one of mine
Gabriel Johnson
Some more:
I cast out my line They takin my bait I whip out my sausage They whip our a plate
I'm more than she can handle She making it a scandal Spray her pussy like a vandal Shits on fire, Roman candle!
Feedback?
Christian Flores
3/3
This bitch want my dick But this bitch is so hasty She sucks on my words Cause my rhymes are so tasty She sits in the shower That's water she's wasting Her pussy a turkey My dicks in for basting. Plate of spaghetti She twirling my fork She shows me the back And it's ham I can pork This hoe she a dumb bitch But she looking good So as long as she don't spit I probably would.
If anyone steals that I'll find you and kill you.
Austin Collins
Faggot/10, this isn't how it work you waste
Eli Sanchez
I'm hangin niggers everday left and right No graveyard diggers, just a noose and a tree I kill them spics and then I chew on spaghettios Gonna rape your dog I'd really like to meet your dad
Find something to rap about other than yourself and rapping. You will never make relevant art if it's primary motive is to express your ego.
Christopher Wilson
White boi/10
Blake Morales
rap is just wannabe poets trying to be wordsmiths but failing abysmally cause no real skill or talent
Gabriel Lewis
Shimmie up a piggy and fly, Give your self a "gimme one try" Ever dawn a pox upon a cot, slit masts then stop. Rock a fox with ten cocks or not, just a thought.
Ethan Carter
Rap is trash now.
You used to need some kind of style to get big in the game. Now every tween nigga with a flat-brim hat can pick up a mic and say some dumb shit. Half the rappers out now don't even rhyme, they just use the same word twice in two sentences like they're some kind of lyrical genius. The boasting is also off the charts. The gangstas used to boast all the time, but it was more about their way of life on the streets. Now you have these college bound niggas talking like street thugs with some white girl doing backing vocals to some techno beat. Get outta here with that shit.
The hipster rappers are no better either; most of them are just riding on the coattails of Del the Funky Homosapien, where they rhyme some nonsensical nerdy shit with other nonsensical nerdy shit. "Yo I rhymed Astrophysical with A-Typical, can I be Deltron now?"
